Date: Jun 09, 2018 12:30 am Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
Okay, you are totally in the zone with this story, not one boring chapter in the entire 7 chapters so far. I kept glancing at the side bar telling myself "there's not enough room to tell Hunter's story, there's not enough room, we're gonna have to wait till the next chapter...noooooooo...
I'm glad Justin metaphorically slapped Ben upside the head, he needed it, Hunter needed his 'dad' to hug him at that moment in time. And yes, call in the 'good, smart raising them to be independant mom' to talk to 'selfish, dumb spoil him rotten mom' can't wait for the next chapter.
This is brilliant!!
bec
Date: Jun 08, 2018 10:39 pm Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
"You're analogies & metaphors are both accurate & disturbing" LMAO Omg I love that & I'm going to use it sometime. Lol do glad Hunter left shit for brains behind. He belongs with Ben & Ben alone.
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2018 10:13 pm Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
I do so look forward to your new chapters. They make my day. Glad to see that Hunter made it back to Pitts and has found a new friend though I don't think he'll need him.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 9:51 pm Title: THE MERRY GO ROUND HAS BROKEN DOWN
What does Hunter want them to hear?
Ben will straighten out things witj his son. Michael won't win.
Maybe Jenn should bring Deb to the loft to hear things first hand. To read the written proof that her son is a fucking jackal.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 4:49 pm Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
So many revelations, but the last one is unexpected, yet, logical.
Ben is starting to see the light and I hope he will follow through and will look for the big RAID can!
Vic is going to get really angry with Deb if she covers for Michael. I love the way you wrote Brian/Vic's relationship. I would have loved to see more of them in the series.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 9:49 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Okay, I usually don't leave feedback as a rule, but I have to say this story has me so intrugued, and so itching for more.
Part of me wants to wait till it's all finished and then read the rest so that I can get it all at once, or to follow you around to make sure you do nothing but write this story till it's finished, lol
This is so fantastic, it's got me sitting on the edge of my seat just waiting for the next chapter, so here I will be be, hitting refresh till I see that title again, lol (guess I picked the second option).
bec
Author's Response:
WOW! Thank you so much, Bec. This is such a stellar compliment to my work; a true testament that I'm on the right road with such a classic storyline, but being done my way. I will cherish it always.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 08, 2018 4:23 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Always thought he was behind the break-in. One more tick to add to his shit list.
Shame it takes something like this for people to see how Brian and Justin really are with each other.
Can just picture Deb's indignation when she hears all this. Whether by Vic, no he shouldn't be the one to tell her, or the police or in court. It's all going to come back as Brian's fault for leading her baby boy on.
Pior guy. He'll lose his surrogate mother. Probably better off. He'll have Jenn in his corner.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 4:20 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Michael, Michael, Michael.....can Brian please punch him in the face again?
Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:54 am Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
Michael Charles Kinney my big ass.....................eeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I have to gag on that one for a while.
he will be in deep shit now, right?
Thanks for writing and making my head pop off.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:39 am Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
Oh to be a fly on the wall wherever Michael is right now.
Justin would have made the saltiest of sailors blush with that language. G-d better not help Michael when Justin comes facfe to face with him.
Yes I can see Michael having something to do with Brian's firing from Vanguard, but I don't think he let Debbie in on his secret plans for his daydreams. How could he let her work her ass off if she knew?
Eyeopeners keep popping up for Mel to see. I'm really glad she's on his side.
Did Em grab the books he found? Give them to Mel? I love how he's looking out for Brian. Thanking him for taking care of his Teddy.
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:34 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Love how you are connecting all the dots and it looks like burglary is yet another thing against Michael. Good to know that Vic and Ben are not going to cover for the big rat.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:33 am Title: CONTRACTS
Well, over the years I've turned very anti-Michael, so I'm willing to think the worst.
I guess you'll take me where you want me to go.
I'm falling in love with them again. So far, so very good.
Thanks
Date: Jun 08, 2018 3:19 am Title: REVELATIONS
Oh, I love them talking and working on their partnership.
Great job. Let's get on with starting Kinnetik. I"m all in , too.
Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:24 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Loving this!!!!! Can't wait for more!! I always love a good Anti-Michael story, he he he ha ha ha!! Always love your stories. I can't wait to see how the payback will go with Michael and who's side Deb will fall on. Keep up the great work!!!
Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:06 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Holy fucking shit is right!!! Wow....great cliff hanger ending to a fabulous chapter!
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:03 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Michael definitely wrote too many checkes his ass can't cash.
Throw the book at him Danno! LOL
Date: Jun 08, 2018 2:02 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
Holy crap! Well, Ben's eyes are now wide open! And Mel's have been opened even further. So glad that Ben told her about Michael's part in the Ethan debacle. Ohhhh... now you have me wondering if Michael and Lindsay plotted together to get Ethan and Justin together!
Poor Vic! So glad that Vic isn't living with Deb anymore; that would have been a hell no one deserves with what is going on with Michael. It's good to see that Vic's eyes have always been open where Deb and Michael are concerned. Maybe he'll be able to talk some sense into her before Michael gets his puppy dog eyes latched on to her. She should probably have her finances checked, too! Wouldn't put it past Michael to steal from her as well.
Damn, I'm not sure how I'll be able to wait for the next update! Maybe I'll just re-read the first six until the next one! Hehehe.
Loving it!!!!
*HUGS*
Deb
Date: Jun 08, 2018 1:53 am Title: WHEN GIVING UP ISN'T SO HARD TO DO AFTER ALL
OMG, Nichelle, this story is beyond amazing & wonderful. You definitely are back in the writing mode. So happy since I hope that means you are feeling better. If a good review helps, make this one beyond fantastic !!!!
Date: Jun 08, 2018 12:51 am Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
OMG! That really is some creative cussing! I'm going to have to try and memorize it so I can use it the next time I'm stuck in traffic. LOL!
Wow! This was such an eye-opener! Michael is going to be in a hell of a shit fire when he gets back. That is if he ever comes back. Brian should report his car stolen and Ben should report Hunter as kidnapped. LOL! OK, not really but it sure would chap Mikey's little flat ass!
I will also have to memorize Emmett's wonderful phone answering quips! Those are hysterical. You would think little Mikey would have caught on!
Looks like Ben is in for an eye-opening experience when he meets up with Mel and finds out just what Mikey has been up to.
And love how Emmett is taking care of Brian as well as Justin. And even Mel is in on that as well.
Dang! Can't wait for the next chapter! So looking forward to it!
*HUGS*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 9:18 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
Chelle,
I love that Emmett and Mel see the depth of Brian and Justin's feelings for each other and are willing to be there for them and help out where they can. I think that out of the whole family Emmett was to only one who always knew what those two meant to each other.
Looking forward to all of the weasel's scheming ways coming to light.
~Lorie <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 8:17 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
It's interesting to learn that the real Rage is...Justin. Can't wait to see how Ben takes all this. Can't imagine him being too happy. Mel and Emmett are firmly behind Brian and Justin and I imagine Ted will be too.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 8:13 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
WTF? I did not see that coming.
"I want us to try monogamy..."
Well, I'm all in. I'll help in any way I can. Hand them lube, keep a steady porn supply arriving at their door, send flowers?
Ok, I'm moving to the next chapter. *skips off happily.*
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Date: Jun 07, 2018 7:53 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
GUUUURRRRLLLL I had to take a breath and wipe my eyes I was laughing so hard at the start of this chapter LOL. Michael better watch his back because the ceiling is about to collapse.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 7:29 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
Woohoo Michael is going to loose so much! Is it bad I'm taking pleasure out of that? Lol So glad Em & Mel are getting a lesson in Brian & Justin 101.
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:52 pm Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
Chelle,
Hot sex and toppy Justin, two of my favorite things.
Leave it to Justin to know what is in the weasel's head. But Justin should also know that he is the only one in Brian's heart, and always will be.
~Lorie <3