Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:38 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
I forgot to comment on Justin's and Emmett's cursing: it was amazingly hilarious!
Justin's one is my favorite "I ought to knock his ass for a loop and duct tape him shut after shoving an extra large dildo up his ass, then put his lazy, shiftless, looking like he’s forever constipated, gorilla-grinning ass on a plane to China where they would cut off his hands".
How do you come up with that? Inspired!
Happy writing!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:36 pm Title: CONTRACTS
Chelle,
They are realizing that they are stronger as a unit than either one could possibly be alone.
Another great chapter.
~Lorie <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:23 pm Title: REVELATIONS
Chelle,
They are realizing that as hard as it may be in the beginning to voice all the things they feel harmed their relationship, it will make their bond stronger.
Loving this story.
~Lorie <3
Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:21 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
I would have done the same thing as Justin: the rage and hate he must feel!
Luckily, he is not alone. Mel, Emmett and Brian are already fighting with him and Ben will follow. I guess Hunter will too once he will be back. Which will be very soon, now that Michael knows his secrets are becoming "public", he will be back to the Pitts, not caring anymore about Hunter's safety.
Emmett offering to help Brian is natural, but Brian accepting isn't: another sign of Justin's influence.
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 6:18 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
Chelle,
So excited about this story. You know I love your writing and look forward to all your updates, but I'm thrilled that this will be done all at once.
I love the first chapter. The fact that they are going to try monogamy is very telling about Brian's feelings regarding their relationship.
Can't wait to read more
~Lorie <3
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:49 pm Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
Brian's inner thoughts about Justin are just amazing to read and a true vision of his feelings for him. The resulting scene was super hot and a sign of the changes in their relationship.
The end is quite disturbing because of the way Michael reacted. Too bad for him, they found out what he tries to hide (part of). I guess they will find some more disgusting things.
Emmett and Brian's interactions are always so funny.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:41 pm Title: CONTRACTS
Another wonderful chapter! Mel and Brian quite getting along! That's new and not so surprising. They act the same way.
She also prepared the documents to sue Gardner even before Brian was thinking about it.
Author's Response:
Hey Claire!
I always thought that if left alone, Mel and Brian would have a friendship second to none. Her insecurity played a major role to keep that from happening on the series, but I love developing their relationship in fanfic. I also felt that she wasn't utilized as an attorney to her full potential so I love letting the pit bull loose!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:18 pm Title: REVELATIONS
Amazing chapter! They talk and let their hidden facts in the open. Brian can have a partial view of what Michael did/said to Justin.
I'm surprised Justin didn't react to what Brian said about the memory of Justin at the hospital after the bashing; he could have asked why he didn't come to see him when he was recovering. It's something Justin should know.
It's great that Brian wants to start Kinnetik with Justin; it's so logical.
Author's Response:
So glad that you enjoyed it, Claire! I love writing Brian and Justin in this fic where they are getting thnigs out in the open BEFORE having to deal with everyone else. With the whole monogamy thing to the forefront of his mind, Justin probably didn't register what Brian said in reference to the hospital, although he knew that Brian was there during the early hours when he was first brought in. But he will get the whole scope of the matter at a later time, that's for sure. There are so many secret things that they need to reveal to each other so that people like Michael and Lindsay can't use any knowledge that they have to cause problems between them.
And YES, I LOVE the idea of them starting the business together. I always thought it should have happened this way in the show, so it's definitely my pleasure to write it this way in this one and SOWK.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:08 pm Title: AND HERE COMES THE REAL RAGE
Wow, you are really into writing this story. I hope that means that you are feeling somewhat better. Great chapter. Can't wait for Michael to get the kick in the butt that he deserves.
Author's Response:
Hey Marilynn,
I am definitely enjoying writing this! It's an idea that I had been toying around with for a number of years and it just seemed like the right time to have at it. Not being able to sit long enough to write the last few weeks has shown me just how long I actually sit at my desk hammering out chapter after chapter, both within this realm and that of my RL. So this is serving its purpose in getting me back into the groove.
The good news is that I can sit up for longer periods now. Anytime you have surgery any portion of your abdomen, it makes it a bit difficult. I go for a follow-up on Monday, but I'm still trying to keep as much pressure off of my lower abdomen as much as possible. Still very tender and extremely sore in spots. I'm learning to obey my body (somewhat reluctantly), but going up and down stairs yesterday...yeah, still haven't quite learned enough yet...LOL I won't be able to do the usual 12-15 hour+ days for awhile yet, but for now, this is enough.
Thanks for reading, reviewing and your continued wqell wishes! They mean so much!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 07, 2018 3:22 pm Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
Oh wow, another great chapter. I love that you like me think Michael is an idiot. Like I said you are back in the swing of things.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 1:45 pm Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
Michael fucking shit for brains Novotny is going to get his ass kicked! Can't wait!
That opening scene was so hot! Definitely needed a cold shower after that...oh my!
Date: Jun 07, 2018 12:11 pm Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
LAWD HAVE MERCY!!! Michael really is a special kind of douchebag. He has one hell of a nerve cheating Justin like that and Michael Charles Kinney....that’s not only creepy, it’s disturbing. I hope Brian does cancel the insurance then kick the shit out of the little weasel when he returns.
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 11:29 am Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
You know that it's a great story when you are so engrossed in it that you shout "Damn!" to an empty room when you find no "Next" at the bottom of the page. This is so good that I will be checking every waking hour for the next update :-)
Author's Response:
AWWWW, thank you Darling! It means I'm not losing my touch, LOL
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:45 am Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
OMFG! Michael Charles Kinney is going to get the shit kicked out of him. Grab those other books Em.
Man Brian definitely cancel the insurance before he gets back. Probably isn't that far away at all. And he expects Brian to give him the money back that he spent filling up the gas tank, eating, and staying in motels. Yeah fucking right. Like that's going to happen. Ha!
Smart of Mel to bring Jenean in. The more experience the better to know how to nail Gardner's ass to the wall.
Domestic partnership papers? Oh yay Brian, but I really think he should mention that to Justin before they sign them. Sneaky man our Brian Kinney.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 5:11 am Title: CONTRACTS
Gardner is going to wind up paying through the nose. I hope Brian can get him for slandering his reputation. Trying to blackball him and never expecting Brian to find out. Bastard!
Michael is going down. This will rip the family apart and it will be all Mikey's doing. Bet he'd try to have Brian tell Justin to leave him alone.
Without Lindsay around, Mel and Brian get along. Nice to know. So glad justin talked him into retaining his rights as Gus' father. Justin is so right about Lindsay.
Author's Response:
Hey Sherry!
Gardner is going to need a new hobby by the time Mel and Brian gets through with him. And there are going to be a few surprises in that sect as well.
Justin is definitely going to be Brian's not-so-secret weapon. Now that he has his clarity back, he's beginning to see through to the true motives of people. If there was one thing he learned from growing up WASP and being around Deb and Michael is that no good deed comes without a price- or at least that's true in the case of some folks. Brian learned that long ago, but is definitely going to be reminded in the coming chapters.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 07, 2018 4:13 am Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
Two more amazing chapters and so much going on!
It's a good thing Brian and Justin are sticking with being completely honest with each other and that Justin has finally told Brian what he sees going on with Michael and Lindsay. So glad that Brian is willing to let the scales fall from his eyes where his 'best' friends are concerned.
Loved their conversation with Mel. I've always felt that if you take Lindsay out of the equation that Mel and Brian would actually be friends who enjoy antagonizing each other. And just let me tell you that I can't describe how happy I am that Brian didn't give up his rights to Gus in this story. I always hated that in the series!
And what a hot-hot-hot way to wake up in the morning! Whew! I need a cold shower!
Gotta say that Mel is a very smart attorney, already having the papers ready to file against Vance and Vangard was the work of a great attorney. (I should know, I use to work for one.) But she sure didn't see it coming that Brian would ask to have partnership papers drawn up for him and Justin. Wasn't difficult to picture Mel's gobsmacked expression! LOL!
Poor Emmett having to watch over Michael's shop and then to have Michael refuse to give them the password and expect Emmett to ignore his own business in favor of Michael's.
So proud of Emmett, too, for finding the books and the computer files. And very proud of Justin for being able to read Michael so well that he new what Michael's password would be... Michael Charles Kinney... creepy indeed!
Can't wait for more!
*HUGS*
Deb
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 3:45 am Title: AIN'T NO SUNSHINE...
Yes! You've caught the little weasle. Now to give him what he has coming to him.
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2018 3:31 am Title: CONTRACTS
Love how you are going about righting some wrongs. Can't wait to find out how bad things are and to watch you fix them.
Date: Jun 07, 2018 1:49 am Title: CONTRACTS
Wow, great chapter. Let me tell you, your mojo is on fire with this story. Just love your writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Darling! And also for the well wishes. They mean a great deal!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
P.S. I just posted Chapter 4 as well. ENJOY!
Date: Jun 06, 2018 11:21 pm Title: REVELATIONS
This story is going great. You are back to your great writing in my eyes. Just do what is best for you. We will wait for updates on this story and other WIPS. Please take care of yourself and add me to those who care.
Date: Jun 06, 2018 11:09 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
Great first chapter. I would say that your mojo is doing just fine. Going on to read chapter 2 now.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the confidence booster. Means more than I can say!
HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 06, 2018 10:24 pm Title: REVELATIONS
Clear the air, cleanse the soul.
They must be exhausted from all that conversation. It's new to/for them.
If I get one wish during this story is that Michael receives a smackdown from his bestest bud. Needs to be, say at a Sunday night dinner at Deb's. Also letting the family in on Michael's gem of a comment at the girl's anniversary party. I believe the word I'm looking for is annihilation. Then he can turn on Lindsay.
I'm a heartless bitch when it comes to that weasle. Sorry
Author's Response:
Hey Sherry!
Well you know me...if no one else loves to smack Jesus into Michael, that would be ME! LOL!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 06, 2018 9:42 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
Wow. How well do they really know each other.
It's a shame Justin feels that he can't say what he wants for fear of Brian's reaction. What's really a shame is that Brian knows it.
Lindsay and Michael have no time for Brian when he can't do anything for them. Lindsay can't get money, Michael has to pay for drinks himself. Pity.
I'm surprised he heard from Mel willing to help if she can. Em, always there willing to help anyway he can. Love him.
Mothers and a father whom love their sons do what they can. Hence the food and computer and internet service.
Can't wait to see Justin's reaction to Brian's latest bomb.
Hope you're doing well.
Author's Response:
Hey Sherry,
I think Justin's reluctance to speak his mind is really going to change throughout the course of this fic. Brian's asking for utter and complete honesty, so he has to be prepared for what giving Justin carte blanche to say what he really thinks and feels really means. I think they will both be surprised at the revelations revealed going forward.
Michael and Lindsay are both moochers in the extreme. It always bothered me that when things were going great, they never seemed to even think of Brian, and therefore Justin. But the minute things took a wrong turn in their lives, he was sought out to put things to right. A lot of my work includes things- or more accurately, possible scenarios- that we didn't see when the cameras stopped rolling on the series. For example, i don't bit more believe that in Season 1, Mel would have left Lindsay without funds for the bills, or even Gus' daycare. She just never seemed that type of person to me, especially knowing that without her in the household, Lindsay would need to return to work sooner than her five year plan. It just didn't make sense for her to ask that of Brian, especially after the whole rights issue. But I digress; we're talking this Alternate Canon universe...LOL
Thanks for the well-wishes and continued support of my work!
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Nichelle
Date: Jun 06, 2018 9:19 pm Title: REVELATIONS
God I wish they could have been this communicative on the show! This was spectacular
Author's Response:
Thanks so much, Shine! I absolutely LOVE growing these characters beyond what the show produced. No doubt I love QAF, but sometimes they just made me so angry with the lack of inclination and time restraints (ie. the bashing storyline, Stockwell, and a few others). So it's so great to have this kind of platform to expand on the storylines, or right the wrongs I felt were committed on the show. It's also a wonderful way to invent new traumas. What can I say? I'm an Angst QUEEN! Well, at least on paper, that is.
Happy Reading and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Jun 06, 2018 8:50 pm Title: REFLECTIONS and DECISIONS
Love love love! This is awesome! 'the little 'scuzzbucket' lmao!!! I haven't heard that word on years But wait......Brian wants to try manogomy?? Wow!
Author's Response:
LMAO, Shine! We have my three year old great nephew visiting so we're using the alternative cuss words A LOT! Brian has grown in so many ways during his and Justin's hiatus. It's going to be wonderful for me to portray that here.
Happy Reading and HUGS, Darling!
~Chelle