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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 25, 2018 8:07 am Title: ...And Here are The Mirrors

Nicole, First off I'd like for you to know that I've had my user name changed. It used to be Bjluv, But as you can see now, it's BritinManor. BritinManor is my user name on MW, and since I decided to try my hand at writing, I figured I better have both names the same, as I don't think it would sit well to have the same story posted by two different authors. That said, I hope you give my story a try. On to my review:

I have to give you credit for giving Ethan the balls to actually pull the trigger. I know in my last review I said I didn't think he would. That's because I don't picture the chin rat having that much backbone. BUT, if he was publicly humiliated by Brian, some people like revenge just a little too much. Whatever gave him the idea Brian would ever consider going to bed with the homely thing, is beyond me. Brian wouldn't touch him in any universe he might live in. I have to wonder why he gave into Dixon so easily, and readily agreed to do his bidding. Were they possibly sleeping together? But if Ethan thinks he will carry out his plans to finish the job, I don't think he will be able too. There are too many people who have Brian's back now. I can't wait for Brian's memory to come back full-force, and remember Ethan. Just MAYBE, Brian caught a glimpse of him that night prior to the shooting. I can't wait to see if they find a fingerprint on the bullet.

I don't think Ethan knows that Mercy has the watch and that everyone is aware that it was originally Brian's. When Michael asks for that watch back, all hell is going to break loose. Ethan would be better off forgetting about his 'trophy'.

I have to laugh at Lindsay's insistence that she will get Brian and Justin to work with her. Neither one of the guy's can stand her, and why would they work with her, instead of Mercy. And good luck with the whole Michael and Ethan working together and actually agreeing on something. I still can't figure out where she gets the idea Michael knows anything. Just because he hung around a set, doesn't mean he actually helped with anything. And I don't think she has any intention of producing Michael's 'Opus'.

I just have to say, thank you for no vivid interactions with the chin rat. That's one thing I liked about that arc in the original. Although both Ethan and Justin could be found naked, we didn't have to witness sex between them. Cowlip just might have lost some viewers. *shudders at thought*

I wish you a Wonderful Holiday Season and a very Happy New Year.

HUGS ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

Cathy, thank you so much for the holiday wishes, hope yours was great. I shall indeed be reading your story, I have so many to catch up on!

Okay so I was a bit mean with the Michael and Brian nightmare kiss and the pants drop in LAFB II, but for the love of heaven, I couldn't write that...ugh-ugh-ugh!

And I want to thank you for not only the review, and you are close on the Dixon/Ethan thing, but for the plot point you have given me!

Happy reading

Nicole

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 7:00 pm Title: ...And Here are The Mirrors

Great chapter.  Happy Holidays to all.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 5:54 pm Title: ...And Here are The Mirrors

So Ethan shot Brian and stole his watch them he stupidly gave it to Michael who have it to Barney?

IDIOTS!!

Lindsay must be high if she thinks Brian or Justin would ever work with her they have too much integrity and taste to stoop to her level of mediocrity.

Caleb, Hunter and Barney found a perfect bullet now that just need it tested and fingerprinted.

Brian's memories are starting to come back and that means trouble for anyone who is behind this attempt on Brian's life.

thank You for the Update and Happy Holidays🎄

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 4:29 pm Title: ...And Here are The Mirrors

Things are getting more clear now and Brian might be in danger if he starts remembering.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2018 2:05 pm Title: ...And Here are The Mirrors

I'm not sure but it sounds like Ethan is guilty?  Love the new banner and always glad to see new chapters.

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