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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 18, 2019 3:59 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls

Hmm... getting a little confused with the direction this has taken. Earlier, to himself... Ethan was gloating about the fact he shot Brian because Brian turned him down. Now his story has changed. It will be interresting to see if what Ethan was talking to himself about is the truth, or if he just told Brian the truth.

Cathy

Reviewer: Mariana Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 8:59 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls

I don't understand how did we get from chapter 33 to 34. 

Is it a mistake? Doesn't make sense.



Author's Response:

Hiya, no it is not a mistake. There is a three week gap between the chapters, Ethan followed Michael who was following Justin for a week. Then Ethan took Justin and hid him for two weeks. Chapter 35 will bring more information.

MissMerlot

Reviewer: BritinDynasty Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2019 8:48 am Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls

What, Kidnapped?! I hope Justin is okay. I kind of feel bad for Ethan.

Brian, Mercy, Ben will give Micheal Not-so-swift KICK to his ugly ass. Will that moron ever learn? IK, No. His peanut brain needs to be shaken off.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 11:47 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls

Great chapter.  Oh that lousy Mikey.  Can't wait until he gets what is coming to him.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 6:02 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls

Ethan kidnapped Justin on the heresay of Michael who just continues to rack up Ass Kicking Points he is so going to wish he stayed in his comic book world.

I feel bad Ethan is dying he doesn't deserve that fate but it only slightly excuses his deeds but not the actions.

Justin needs Brian who needs him too and they both need time alone to deal with this before they can take on Michael.

Thank Goodness They Have Such Good Friends!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 4:54 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls

Tragic chapter with Ethan's back story, though, I feel I missed something as I don't see how we go from §33 to this one. When was Justin abducted and Ethan taken down by the FBI?

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2019 3:05 pm Title: For Whom The Bellwether Tolls

Oh my.  Wasn't expecting that.

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