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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Drew hitting on Ben is quite interesting: it's a pair I didn't imagine, but now it seems like a great combination; another powerful couple.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 11:00 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

So sorry Michael. Mercy is about to once again, with the help of the others, destory a little of you.  So he is not going to sign his store over, so he won't be going to Europe with the rest of them. To bad, so sad.  They are not going to miss you Michael. And if you think Mercy will change her mind and give you a free pass, you are sadly mistaken. So, no RAGE for you! Ah ha! Mercy living in the Pitts for 5 yrs. Get a clue Michael! Do you need a vowel? Still insisting they sign the house over to him? He must be a lot richer in this story... if his shop is possibly worth over a $100K...

Yay! Brian and Justin!  Yay! Ben and Drew! (new twist!)  And what's this about Justin not being questioned from the police?  Just who shot Brian???

It's so refreshing reading a story where Brian and Michael aren't best buds... Never Have, Never Will...

Thanks for writing this story and sharing with all of us. Thanks for the update...

Hugs, Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:49 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Good chapter.  Love this story and can't wait to see where you take it next.

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:37 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

Michael thinks he still knows Mercy and that will be his downfall cause she is to Destroy Him.

Not surprised she came back to Pittsburgh five years ago she had no reason to tell Michael anything.

He is just trying to ride her coattails because unless it's selfish he doesn't have original thoughts, and Mercy is not going to play his stupid high school games...at least not without an audience ;)

Drew and Ben???

Hmmmm Interesting, Very Interesting! :)

Well at least this time Ben might actually have a Mind-Blowing, Toe-Curling, Sweaty, All Night Screaming, Pass Out In Ecstasy Orgasms, instead of a Ker Plunk and yawn barely a minute later snore fest??

Thanks for the Update:)

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 2:12 am Title: Can We Be More Than Friends But Less Than Lovers?

So Mercy has been in the Pitts for 5 years and Michael didn't know?  Very interesting.  What does she have planned.

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