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Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jul 09, 2019 7:50 pm · Chapter: The Die is Cast

Wow, now that was a twist I wouldn't have thought, though it makes sense in a creepy sort of way.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 20, 2019 6:39 am · Chapter: Rage and A Figment...Michael

A nice little fear is always good to keep people on their toes.



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Jun 19, 2019 12:29 am · Chapter: Rage and A Figment...Michael

Great update.  Mikey just does not understand anything.  Love it when he get in trouble.  Great writing.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Jun 18, 2019 5:41 pm · Chapter: Rage and A Figment...Michael

Yes Michael is looking like he might have a few marbles missing nothing but he is perfectly sane just a Spoilt, Spiteful Little Worm instead.

No way is he getting off with an Insanity Defense!

Nice to see that despite his declaration that Mercy is his best friend he never knew her or her family at all, Cause he would know crossing any of them should be the last thing you would do.

Thanks For the Update 😃



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jun 18, 2019 12:18 pm · Chapter: Rage and A Figment...Michael

Smoke and Mirrors?  It's more like Gaslighting.  Micheal need medical help, his brain is scrambled.



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Jun 12, 2019 2:52 pm · Chapter: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance

Love it.  Love when Mikey just gets himself in deeper and deeper.  What an idiot.  Wonderful writing as always.



Name: coleamber (Signed) · Date: Jun 12, 2019 10:45 am · Chapter: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance

Just love it. Darn Michael hope you pays for all that



Name: BritinDynasty (Signed) · Date: Jun 12, 2019 7:57 am · Chapter: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance

One of my favourite part Justin explodes on Micheal and Brian trying to control his Sunshine , later trying to climb down Justin's throat , kissing the hellout infront of them. Well done!! Love it. :D



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: Jun 11, 2019 5:24 pm · Chapter: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance

Excellent chapter!

This is delightful:

“Uh,  Brian…” Ben chuckles as he almost climbs down Justin’s throat. “...focus on this conversation, thanking him for the defence with tongue fucking kisses later.”

“Amongst other things.” Brian snickers.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: Jun 11, 2019 5:10 pm · Chapter: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance

For Michael it is coming in Quintillion this payback has only just begin and already the water is above his waist and rising quickly.

Can't Wait For More😃

 



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: Jun 11, 2019 2:14 pm · Chapter: The All Seeing Eye and the Ghost of a Chance

Michael's crimes are finally catching up to him.



Name: BritinDynasty (Signed) · Date: Jun 01, 2019 7:24 am · Chapter: And So It Begins

Mercy's right, Micheal do need exorcism. Its time to accept the consequences of being a *whiny mouthy asshole Mikey....

Lovely chapter. ☘



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2019 4:07 pm · Chapter: And So It Begins

The noise is starting to tighten Michael and your days are getting shorter all his lies, games and manipulations are coming to play with his present and will destroy his future Forever.

Couldn't Happen To A Nicer Person :)



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2019 3:41 pm · Chapter: And So It Begins

Yeah, MM teasing Michael is delightful.

How Ben could have heard what Michael said?



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2019 12:13 pm · Chapter: And So It Begins

Love Mysterious Marilyn.  Michael seems to not know what is going on.



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2019 10:45 am · Chapter: And So It Begins

Oh, this just keeps getting better and better.  Wonderful writing.



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2019 2:00 am · Chapter: Reconnect and the Redolence of Remembrance and Revenge

More trouble for Mikey.  Yeah.  He deserves it.  Terrific writing.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2019 6:01 pm · Chapter: Reconnect and the Redolence of Remembrance and Revenge

Michael has some nerve thinking Lindsay is delusional about going to Hollywood (She Very Delusional!) while he is being delusional about what he did to Mercy.

So will Lindsay be sweeping at one of the studios or will she be another gawker standing at the gates hoping to catch a glimpse of talent that she will never have? lol

Michael going to jail is good but making him suffer first is Way Better!😂

Justin is finding himself again he just needed to let the anger and fear out.



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2019 4:17 pm · Chapter: Reconnect and the Redolence of Remembrance and Revenge

Are Billy and Marguerite new in the story?



Author's Response:

Hey, no they were in the London part of the story - well Marguerite was, Billy was mentioned, she is Mercy's sister and he is her brother in law. Billy was Mercy's first boyfriend who she pretended to dump because Michael was being such a nuisance. She was with him for three years - long distance - until he met Marguerite.

Hope that helps.

Thanks

Happy reading.

MissMerlot

 



Name: The SNO (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2019 3:56 pm · Chapter: The Light Starts to Shine on the Dark Knight

2 nasty and jealous guys can't generate something good.



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2019 1:14 pm · Chapter: Reconnect and the Redolence of Remembrance and Revenge

Good that Brian got Justin to talk.  Michael doesn't seem to thing he's got problems. 



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2019 1:10 am · Chapter: The Light Starts to Shine on the Dark Knight

Oh, that evil Michael.  Just love to hate him.  Great update.  Wonderful writing.



Name: BlueMyst (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2019 5:48 pm · Chapter: The Light Starts to Shine on the Dark Knight

Can Michael be charged as an accomplice to Ethan kidnapping Justin?

That moron let his jealousy and spite lead him to try to destroy anyone who doesn't do what he wants and those same emotions will lead to his downfall.



Name: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2019 12:37 pm · Chapter: The Light Starts to Shine on the Dark Knight

Lots of hints, but nothing said directly.



Name: mamab (Signed) · Date: Apr 30, 2019 12:27 am · Chapter: Haunting, Vaunting and Taunting

That Michael just keeps getting worse and worse.  I dislike him so much in so many stories.  Great update and writing.  I am caught up now on all the stories.  Thank you.



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