Date: Feb 06, 2019 12:37 am Title: Recognition Part One
Cliffhanger. Oh this is getting better and better. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2019 6:36 pm Title: Recognition Part One
Oh The Plot Is Definitely Thickening Now!!!
So Many Questions But No Answers Just Yet!
Michael and his Cronies should Seriously Fear Rajan and Rae could they seem like when they go after something or someone they don't stop until they feel like.
A dog with a bone is probably more gentle because they don't stop until your dust they stop when you no longer exists in the universe and beyond.
I hope Deb can step back because they will have no problem destroying her too.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!! :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2019 5:38 pm Title: Recognition Part One
Oh The Plot Is Definitely Thickening Now!!!
So Many Questions But No Answers Just Yet!
Michael and his Cronies should Seriously Fear Rajan and Rae could they seem like when they go after something or someone they don't stop until they feel like.
A dog with a bone is probably more gentle because they don't stop until your dust they stop when you no longer exists in the universe and beyond.
I hope Deb can step back because they will have no problem destroying her too.
Can't Wait For The Next Chapter!!!! :)
Date: Jan 25, 2019 12:19 pm Title: Livid in London, Perplexed and Pissed in Pittsburgh
Great chapter. Love when Michael is an idiot and the connection between Linds and Ethan, classic. Terrific writing.
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2019 8:29 pm Title: Livid in London, Perplexed and Pissed in Pittsburgh
Mercy was right to tell Deb off she is always first to go to Protective Mom instead of realizing that Michael screws up Monumentally by attacking Mercy so soon after losing her parents, staying away and giving Mercy time to calm down is the smartest thing she could do.
Time for Deb to Grow Up Too!
Justin being in the room with Ethan should be interesting since he was helping to stalk Justin too.
I didn't think Dixon died because he was drunk while driving I wouldn't put it past Lindsay to do something to help him along to his death.
Michael is so predictable and thankfully his stupidity will be his downfall Mercy is going to make his wish he was never born!!!
Thanks for the Update :)
Date: Jan 24, 2019 1:40 pm Title: Livid in London, Perplexed and Pissed in Pittsburgh
Okay, someone needs to kill Michael very, very slowly, using a fork and a broken piece of glass. He's just all kinds of evil and vindictive! What an ass! Someone needs to let him find out Mercy's back in London, and, also let him believe she plans to stay there, again. And, pray tell, why should Michael feel he deserves thanks for his support? I hardly believe he did anything to support Charles/Nathanial, (whichever is his real name.)
So, Ethan has admitted to Mel, the watch (Brian's), was his. That should put him at the scene of the crime. When they get the fingerprints off the bullet... let's just say they will have a starting point with whom they can match the prints.
Don't even get me started on Lindsay. Miss False Hope and Deluision, as you so nicely called her. But, how does Michael know about Lindsay pushng James to drink? Could Michael have seen him and talked to him that night?
Didn't Ethan always try to interpose himself next to Justin, when Justin was playing on the sidewalk? So, even if Justin doesn't remember him from school, he should have a knowledge of who he is. Would Daphne or Chris recognize him? And, oh yeah! I've always meant to mention, how when this story started, I was a little shocked that Chris and Justin were best friends. That's definitley a different take on canon.
Okay - A cross between the Joker and the Penguin? I've been trying to imagine what it would sound like, and coming up blank! How do you manage to think of these things?! 😂😂😂
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2019 1:36 pm Title: Livid in London, Perplexed and Pissed in Pittsburgh
So Micheal is behind all this? Sounds like something he would do, yet I wouldn't have thought him smart enough.
Date: Jan 19, 2019 4:53 am Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging
Okay, looks like it is going through now. Hope I remember everything I wanted to say.
I just remembered tonight that I had not yet read all your updates. So I apologize for that fact, and that I hadn't yet reviewed.
If Michael thinks Vic is going to apologize or that Debbie will reprimand him, he has another thing coming.
It seems like Lindsay is fed up with Michael and regretting she hired him. Didn't I say that would happen? And all hell will break loose, if Michael has to go to George about that watch. How will he explain the fact that the watch he is saying is his, originally belonged to Brian? Wait till THAT bomb is dropped! (Looking forward to that.)
But, all hell will break loose, if the call that comes in two weeks is from Michael. Oh PLEASE - let it be from Michael.
LOVING this story...
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 19, 2019 4:43 am Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging
Just checking here - I've left two reviews and they aren't going through. Said I don't have access. So, this is me checking to see if it will work now.
Author's Response:
Yep got this.
MissMerlot
Date: Jan 16, 2019 12:13 am Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging
Terrific update. This story keeps getting better and better.
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2019 5:58 pm Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging
If it is Michael and we all know it is him then everyone should shut up, stand or sit back and make sure there are refreshments because this show is going to be good.
What Vic did to Michael will be considered a light pay compared to what Mercy is going to do to Michael.
Michael's two front teeth as earrings would look Stunning on Mercy along with a Divine Outfit and shoes lol
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:55 pm Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging
I’m confused as hell....
Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:51 pm Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging
Lindsay and Ethan have more patience than Michael deserves!
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2019 4:19 pm Title: No Sympathy or Mercy, But Plenty of Smoke and Subterfuging
Okay, I'm old and suffer from sometymers. So who is 'him' Michael or the uncle?
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2019 1:10 am Title: Berating and Explaining
So good!!! Love it :-)
Date: Jan 05, 2019 8:11 pm Title: Berating and Explaining
Great chapter. Love how these now characters add to the original. And, of course, anytime Mikey is in trouble I am soooooooooooo Happy.
Date: Jan 05, 2019 7:15 am Title: Berating and Explaining
Michael, Michael, Michael. Trying to get the upper hand of Mercy and trying to control her, is like committing virtual suicide. All of them are ready to take you out, and you will fast find that out. But Kudos go to Uncle Vic. But he shouldn't have stopped with a couple of teeth. I do wonder if Michael will file a complaint with the police.
Brian admitting he'd rather suck snatch, [shudder the thought] than to be with Michael, that way, was both funny and revolting at the same time. But yes, as I said earlier in a review, Brian would be outraged to know the truth of that.
Why Michael wouldn't just call defeat and stop his blabbering to Mercy, I'll never know. He just continued to drone on and on, embarrassing himself, and humiliating himself in front of everybody. He just doesn't know when to shut up, does he?
I just KNEW when George handed him the watch, that it wasn't Brian's. But I expected it to be a fake. Not the real thing. George's real thing. But if they can get Michael and Ethan for having George's watch, well, that's one one to skin the goose.
Thanks so much for all these updates, again. I love reading your stories.
HUGS ~ Cathy
Date: Jan 04, 2019 7:01 pm Title: Berating and Explaining
Michael is such a prick in this story: so good to get to hate him.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 5:18 pm Title: Berating and Explaining
Michael's selfish behavior really came through that time he honestly sees Mercy as his possession and when his toys don't stay in their boxes and assigned place he stomps, pouts and whines loudly until he gets his way.
Michael sees Mercy as his own special toy and her parents moving to London pissed him off so the shiny A-Hole decided to exact his revenge in his own cruel way and he is still doing it to Mercy by trying to put her back in her place.
Vic knocking out Michael's teeth was rewarding but Michael isn't going to let that stop him from trying to get his hands on Mercy.
Michael should get use to bring knocked on his Ass I doubt this will be the last time Hell a que is forming and everyone wants second, third and fourth chances.
Thanks for the Update. Happy New Year
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2019 2:33 pm Title: Berating and Explaining
Michael seems to have unreal expectations and doesn't have a clue about what a best friend is.
Date: Jan 01, 2019 2:34 am Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...And Off To Blighty We Go!
It's always a Happy Day when I click on KD and there are four chapter updates of yours. Before I get started on my review, I wanted you to know that I had to double check if I was reading the right chapter. When I clicked on Ch 26, at the top of the page, before the chapter starts it says Chapter 25 - then the title. Right title, wrong chapter number. That said:
So the Stud was interested in Justin before the shooting ever took place. It's almost cute that he warned guys away from Justin.
I have to tell you, there's just all kinds of wrong with this - after you topped him then tried to do sultry and ended up sulking. Michael topping - LOL, Michael sultry - should I laugh or throw up in my mouth?
However you came up with, Caleb-Australia, Barney-USA, Between Continents, was Brilliant! I could just picture Michael's look of horror on his face as he hung up the phone. At least I got a good laugh out of it. *still chuckling*
And finally, Ta Dah! A moment of realization regarding the watch, and Michael and (Ethan's?) part in it. Gotta love it!!! And waiting, none to patiently, for Ben to have a pop at Michael about the cheating.
HUGS ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2018 8:54 pm Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...And Off To Blighty We Go!
Michael is a Blockhead which is a insult to Blockheads everywhere!
Wonder if Ethan would recognize a fake watch while they continue to research the one they have, must be a cheap replica out there that will placate Michael and Ethan?
80% chance Brian could get his memories back that is so worth celebrating and London sounds like fun because Michael won't be there lol
Date: Dec 31, 2018 5:44 pm Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...And Off To Blighty We Go!
I love this quote “I am. Caleb is originally from Australia, and Barney is from the USA. Since I am lying between them...I am between continents.”
Date: Dec 31, 2018 3:35 pm Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...And Off To Blighty We Go!
Terrific chapter. Happy New Year.
[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2018 1:10 pm Title: If He Could Turn Back Time...And Off To Blighty We Go!
Does Michael think that Mercy lives in London? So many peices to the puzzle.