Date: Aug 27, 2018 6:29 pm Title: My BFF
It’s over? I’m sad! I loved this story! Actually, you wrapped this up very well satisfying your readers, at least this one! Loved the words Brian whispered into Justin’s ear. Glad they are making it work despite the age difference. Hope you have more stories in the works.
Date: Aug 26, 2018 9:09 pm Title: My BFF
It’s over? I’m sad! I loved this story! Actually, you wrapped this up very well satisfying your readers, at least this one! Loved the words Brian whispered into Justin’s ear. Glad they are making it work despite the age difference. Hope you have more stories in the works.
Date: Jun 27, 2018 3:07 am Title: My BFF
Enjoyed the story immensely, but feel it needs a little more ending- some closure- What happened after Prom/ graduation- I want more of B/J life and the friendship between Gus and Daphne and Justin and Brian.
Date: Jun 18, 2018 5:19 pm Title: My BFF
Thanks again for another wonderful story about the most beautiful and amazing couple ever! I love them so much and you just showed that it even doesn’t matter if they are 12 or 22 years apart. I love your writing-style and I hope you’ll stay not only addicted to writing but to writing about them! Warmest regards!
Date: Jun 17, 2018 12:46 pm Title: My BFF
First of all, Thank you for posting it here where it was easy to read. And, what a great story it is. Sorry it took so long to read it, but I have to break these really long stories up like chapters since I cannot read that much all at once. Terrific writing job.
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2018 10:10 pm Title: My BFF
Really liked this different take. I can see a slightly older Brian being more ready for a relationship. I’m good with the wider age difference even. Good job. TAG
Date: Jun 16, 2018 11:23 am Title: My BFF
I loved this. I wish Justin hadn't slept with Gus before sleeping with Brian but otherwise I thought this was amazing!!!
Date: Jun 16, 2018 8:57 am Title: My BFF
I loved this story. I wasn’t sure about it at the beginning but it was just right somehow.
Date: Jun 15, 2018 8:09 pm Title: My BFF
Enjoyed it ,thanks!
Date: Jun 15, 2018 2:50 am Title: My BFF
Really enjoyed this! Didn’t love Justin sleeping with Gus, but overall very good writing!
Date: Jun 14, 2018 4:33 pm Title: My BFF
OK....NOT what I was expecting at all. Much bigger age gap that I thought it would be.
I thoroughly enjoyed this though. Some nead dynamics there. I love the fact that writers get a storyline in their heads, no matter what it is, and are able to create something around the characters we all love. What a wonderful gift.
Thanks for this!!!!
Cheers,
Elaine
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2018 1:04 pm Title: My BFF
Great story a little weird but lovely
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2018 12:11 pm Title: My BFF
Once I got my head around the different dynamics of Justin and Gus being best friends, and the bigger age difference between Justin and Brian, I soon feel under the spell of the blossoming, and lovingly familiar relationship that is our boys. Very enjoyable.
Date: Jun 14, 2018 7:44 am Title: My BFF
Im so glad everything is work out between justin gus and brian. Thanks fpr writing this
Author's Response:
Of course, it worked out. I'm all for happy endings.
Date: Jun 14, 2018 12:29 am Title: My BFF
IF you have notepad or some other program like Word you can copy and paste the entire story and then the line problem is solved.
I've read half of it but it's just not a story that I can get into, the fact that Gus and Justin are best friends and he was going to be Gus's first and having sex with his dad is too squishy for me. I'm gonna have to pass. Sorry.
Author's Response:
It's been corrected. The website messed the formatting :(
No worries about you not getting into this story. It's not for everybody with the way Justin acts.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 8:11 pm Title: My BFF
That's a monster indeed, but an amazing one!
Fabulous rewrite of their story: great job.
The only weird moment is when Justin agreed to be Gus' first and then went to Babylon hoping to find Brian. The aftermath of Gus finding out was interesting and emotional.
Daphne as always was the best best friend Justin could ever have.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Justin was a little crazy to be with Gus then go after Brian, true.
Date: Jun 13, 2018 7:28 pm Title: My BFF
Unfortunately lines appear overlapping each other which makes it almost possible to read and download is sluggish - maybe too long for successful download on tablet? Would be great if this could be fixed.
Author's Response:
It's been corrected. The website messed the formatting :(
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:43 pm Title: My BFF
I can't read this, everything is running together and I tried resizing it but it doesn't change. I would really love to read this, but I can't. Thank you.
bec
Author's Response:
It's been corrected. The website messed the formatting :(
Date: Jun 13, 2018 6:01 pm Title: My BFF
Really good. Thoroughly enjoyed this, as usual with you stuff!
Deb
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: Jun 13, 2018 2:56 pm Title: My BFF
PLEASE, PLEASE repost this. The lines are running over each other and it is impossible to read the story. Thanks.
Author's Response:
It's been corrected. The website messed the formatting :(