Date: Sep 24, 2018 4:44 pm Title: Chapter 31
Hi again! Oh my Goodness, how cute is he! "You look beautiful, Papa" - I want to cuddle Luke!
And again, oh my goodness. For once, I agree with Debbie, Brian is really not able to do things without the grand gesture. I haven't expected their date like this. First, I thought, isn't it a little bit too much, but honestly, I'm so happy for Justin. He just deserves to be treated and spoiled like that. I couldn't hardly bear how Brian treated Justin in the second half of Season 2 (the hustler, the picnic-scene, the scene where Brian couldn't bring himself to buy those flowers...). Then, I also wasn't quite sure how to feel about the loft... "a place in the city might come in handy every once in a while" - I asked myself for what? But maybe I'm over-analysing it... And then you let him say this "It's where everything started" - beautfiul! It's also good to see, that Brian finally dares and allows himself to do such "ridiculous romantic" things... chocolate, candles, flowers... What a great and amazing date! I'm so happy for them, for having a really good time together. You created a scene with openess, honesty, they seem to ba carefree. And I do not only love this "sunshine-talk" in the car, but also to see not only a matured Justin but as it seems also a matured Brian, who is patient and let Justin set the pace! And what a perfect ending... And I'm curious how Justin set the pace further! :-) Warmest regards!
Author's Response:
Honestly, I want a son like Luke. I am soooo in love with this child that doesn't even exist *lol*
No, Brian Kinney can't do anything without the grand gesture. Not even a Valentine's Date. And yes, Justin deserved it and deserved to be treated like this by Brian.
We'll find out later what the place in the city might come in handy for ;)
Some might say it's out of character for Brian to be this romantic, but I'd like to think that after having been to therapy and after having given birth to Luke, he might have grown into a man that could show his feelings like Brian did in this chapter :)
That sunshine talk in the car was very important to me. We have seen Debbie go back to calling Justin Sunshine, but Brian hasn't once in the story so far and I am glad that Justin finally picked up on that and asked about it. And that he liked Brian calling him that name as well - I always thought it was cute :)
Apparently Brian has listened to Ted and is following his advice to be patient and to let Justin set the pace - good for Brian! It might actually get him what he wants in the end...
Aren't we all curious now how Justin will further set the pace? ;)
Thanks for your lovely comment! More will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2018 3:08 am Title: Chapter 31
I must say it was a date that will long be remembered.
Author's Response:
That it will be :) And hopefully it wasn't their last!
More will be up soon :)
Date: Sep 24, 2018 1:21 am Title: Chapter 31
Yeah, getting closer to being together again. What a wonderful, romantic evening Brian planned for Justin. Just perfect as is your writing.
Author's Response:
Awwww, thank you :)
I am glad you enjoyed their date night!
More will be up soon :D
Date: Sep 24, 2018 1:11 am Title: Chapter 31
Yeah smooches
Author's Response:
Finally :D
Date: Sep 23, 2018 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 31
Okay, so I won’t piss on their wonderful evening....Brian made a real effort this time. This doesn’t mean he’s back in my good graces though.
Author's Response:
Haha, I was wondering how you would feel about their date night ;)
He is Brian Kinney - he can't do anything without the grand gesture. Not even a Valentine's Date :P
More will be up soon!
Date: Sep 23, 2018 9:33 pm Title: Chapter 31
Yay! Date Night! Brian really went all out! Your writing is so descriptive, I had no problem visualizing the loft. How Brian managed to make Cannelloni Filled with Spinach and Ricotta Cheese and Tiramisu, I will never know. A seasoned cook as myself, I wouldn't even want to tackle something like Tiramisu. And Cannelloni is very time-consuming.
The conversation in the limo was very touching and tore at my heartstrings, and the kiss goodnight... HOT!
Thank you for this amazing update. Looking forward to the chapter and seeing how the boys act after having their date.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
Well, he is Brian Kinney after all - he can't do anything without the grand gesture. And he's a perfectionist, so even a Valentine's Day would have to be absolutely perfect ;)
As for the food, to be honest, I think he might have cheated by having gotten some of it from a store. I doubt he prepared everything from scratch. For Brian preparing probably involves turning on the oven and warming up the food :P
I am glad you liked the update :) More will be up soon :D
Date: Sep 23, 2018 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 31
Thank you for the fix! Too bad it ended so soon!
Great news about the loft; it should remain like it was so long ago: their nest.
Author's Response:
Who knows??? It might go on in the next chapter... we'll have to wait and see ;)
Now that Justin is back, I think Brian felt it easier to deal with the memories the loft held for him than it was when it was just him and the boys. I agree, the loft was always his and Justin's :)
More will be up soon :D