Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2020 9:14 am Title: Chapter 16 - Stay Mad

I guess in all the confusion and full days, Justin forgot to ask the all-important question: How did Ethan know about Brian?

Win you away from Brian? Why did Justin NOT correct him on that statement? Ethan has said that before... and that just gets my nerves ramped. Justin is NOT a prize that you win!

Did Justin NOT realize that HE paid for the balloons and rose petals? All Ethan had to do was go pick them up. WITH JUSTIN"S MONEY!!!

Ethan handed Justin $20 for lunch? So I gather Justin STILL does not have his own money. Why is that?

Justin's the most talented man he's been with? Didn't sound that way when he was talking about Justin's art previously.

I hope Justin sleeps with one eye open tonight, because Ethan just might slip out and meet Mark.

CHAPTER END NOTES:

I'm sorry about your reviews dropping off. Hopefully, it's the same as with me. Illness, or possibly RL is getting in the way. But, yes, this is a hard story to read, but it is also a fact of life. It happens EVERYDAY! Unfortunately. So, as far as subject matter, I don't think that's why. But it's also one that you have to be in the right frame of mind to read. So, NO... don't quick typing. The faster you write, that faster we get to a conclusion.

How to destroy Ethan? Well, can we snap that thousand dollar bow in two and shove it up his ass? (hey, I'm not joking!) But, since I know you won't write something like that... Let's kidnap him, bring him to the loft, duct tape him to a chair, stick a rag in his mouth and duct tape it closed, tape his eyes open with surgical tape, and make him watch Brian and Justin have sex for four hours. Let him watch Justin top Brian, while Brian tells him he's the best lover on the planet.

Hey! Who would ever believe that really happened if Ethan tries to squeal? LOL.

Love you!

Cathy

P.S. My apologies for my crassness on how to destroy Ethan.

Reviewer: nickknack Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Stay Mad

My imagination can't even think of things bad enough to bring Ethan down, he truly is appalling!

Please don't slow down your posting, I think these chapters are just really hard to comment on without streams of invective, derogatory words because Ethan is freaking us all out. I'm just really hoping someone takes Ethan down soon, but I suspect he will have to step over the line a few more times before we reach that point.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2020 3:11 am Title: Chapter 16 - Stay Mad

No don't go slower.  Sometimes even I get tied up in RL and have to put off reading for a day or so which upsets me, but what can you do.  The story is great, but I think it is hitting home with a lot of us who have had someone in our lives like Ethan and we just want Justin to be better off.  Fantastic writing as always.