[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2020 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 24 - I Was Broken
Well, I got behind, but it's almost a good thing that I did, because now I can have this nightmare end, without having to wait for the last chapter. I finished this about five minutes ago, and I was bawling so hard, it has taken me this long to be able to at least try and type. But that's not saying that I'm no longer crying.
I was so worried once Justin feel onto the bed... but thank you for letting him escape without... well, without THAT happening.
I am looking forward to see what you have in store for this SOB... I hope everything he has put Justin through is proclaimed loud and long, letting the world know whatEthan has done. His beloved violin playing would be over.
Cathy
You need to italicize your intro.
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2020 3:43 pm Title: Chapter 24 - I Was Broken
Thank you for sparing us a thresome that would have been devastating for Justin. When I started reading about the 2 drunken devils, I really feared that Justin won't be able to get away.
Regarding Brian, I'm wondering if somehow he feels that Justin did the biggest mistake of his young life: fucking raw and not getting tested. He knows how romantic Justin can be and he has seen the ring, which could mean engagement, fidelity and monogamy, by extension no condoms. I guess Brian also feels that Justin is on the edge and that nothing he will say will help Justin: the silent support is a genious idea and it's also very Brianesque: actions speak louder than words. I read it as "I'm here, don't worry.".
The reunification under the street lamp is also a very good idea; a new beginning, a second chance.
The “No. No, I’m not okay, but I want to be.” is the beginning of the ascension to the top.
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2020 8:58 am Title: Chapter 24 - I Was Broken
I know this is about Justin's journey but please, please tell me that Ethan will get his comeuppance - as near as possible to the brutality he has submitted upon Justin! I so hope he is destined to be revealed for the monster he is and that he is stripped of all his ill-gotten gains.
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2020 1:04 am Title: Chapter 24 - I Was Broken
Wow, could feel every bit of Justin's pain. Fantastic writing.
Date: Feb 28, 2020 12:51 am Title: Chapter 24 - I Was Broken
Justin's pain is just radiating off the screen. The emotion is real. The tears in my eyes don't seem to want to stop - For the agony Justin has endured and for the courage he needed to make that first step to getting well.
Wow.