Date: Jul 15, 2018 7:13 am Title: Chapter 4 - Things Fall Apart
Great filling: this last scene was a major key point and you described it beautifully.
Date: Jul 14, 2018 4:16 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Things Fall Apart
Great chapter. Reliving that entire scene was really hard and I am sure you felt the same writing it. But, they each had so much still to learn at that point in their lives. They wanted it all, but didn't know how to go about getting it. You have to admit it did keep the story going.
Date: Jul 14, 2018 2:43 am Title: Chapter 4 - Things Fall Apart
I had always wondered WHY Justin would come home without showering and had always felt that he subconsciously wanted to get caught. And I am probably one of the staunchest Justin defenders there is, but THAT scene - he deserved that. I can still hear the sound of their kissing, and their breathing and the squeak of skin rubbing against that wooden floor. In my opinion, that was one of the most perfectly intense scenes in the show.
Author's Response:
There's that scene in season 3 with Justin and Ethan in a bathtub set up in the middle of the room, so I just always assumed that Ethan didn't have a shower... At least that's what I'm going with in this story. I agree that was a really INTENSE scene. TAG
[Report This]Date: Jul 14, 2018 1:13 am Title: Chapter 4 - Things Fall Apart
Now that Justin is looking back on it, he sees where began to go wrong and one has to notice that Michael is behind it all.
Author's Response:
In my mind, I think Michael was just a useful idiot. Ethan jumped on the opening that Michael created. It's what a malignant narcissist does... TAG