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Reviewer: Gcleft77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2018 12:24 am Title: Chapter 28 - Desert Vacation

You know, I love this story but this chapter bugs me. Yes Brian was wrong but so was Justin.  Most of this story is about changing Brian all out of recognition of what we know him to be. That's fine it's why I'm still reading, but this Justin can do no wrong thing is really snapping my ass. I will keep reading in the hopes that I can love them again. Right now I think Justin is really acting his age and it's annoying. 



Author's Response: You're right about Justin being young. Sorry you find him hard to take.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2018 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Desert Vacation

Rocky situation; they are both right and yet, they don't talk the same way; they are out of sync.



Author's Response: Very true.

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