Date: Jul 19, 2018 4:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hi again! Great chapter. I'll review this first because the other one for "Back for good" will take more time...
Again, knowing what will happen, this is so heartbreaking, so painful. Damn, Brian. It's so great that he even doesn't consider an abortion for one second. And he thinks about both of them being fathers. "They would have to talk about what a baby meant, they would have to agree on a solution together." Damn, what happened that he changed his mind... Why couldn't he just tell Justin... Why couldn't he have a little more trust in them... Why did he decide to exclude Justin... At the moment there is nothing to hate about him, I love how he reacts, and how he fells immediately in love with his baby, and that he immediately thinks about possible damage to the baby due to his recent alcohol consumption and questioned this.
Oh, and you already give us a few glimpses about the “best friend’s” behavior. I could really do without him.
I'm so glad that you've already published "Back for good" so that we know what'll happen. Otherwise it would be so much more painful. Warmest regards!!!
Author's Response:
I think with his history and how his parents treated him, abortion would have never been something Brian would have seriously considered. I just can't see him going down that road.
Yeah, what happened? What made him go from seeing himself and Justin as fathers to raising Luke on his own? Hmm... we'll find out soon...
Unfortunately, the best friends will be part of this story - but... we will all be able to hate them with a passion *lol*
Thanks for your great comment :)
Date: Jul 19, 2018 2:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
So, Brian was ready to inform Justin; what happened that changed this decision?
Author's Response:
Yeah, what happened? :( We'll find out soon!
Date: Jul 18, 2018 9:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love, love, love this story. So glad you decided to this in addition to Back for Good. Great job.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it :)
I thought certain aspects of Back for Good deserved more detail and depth and I couldn't give that in Back for Good as that story has a different focus. So here we have the Pittsburgh Years.
Maybe people will understand Brian's POV a bit better - or maybe they will only hate him more ;)
More will be up soon!
[Report This]Date: Jul 18, 2018 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well now he knows. Who does he tell first. We know it wasn't Justin and I hope it wasn't Mikey.
Author's Response:
It will be interesting to see who finds out first - probably not the person people are expecting ;)
Definitely not Michael!
More will be up soon!