Date: Aug 27, 2018 7:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hi! This is really what I've expected, but it's so hard to read how Lindsay behaves and how she calls herself "Mommy" in front of Luke and how she thinks she couls replace Justin. That bitch! Arggghh! I'm just so glad, that Brian discovers this at an early stage so Luke didn't got used to Lindsay too much. What a terrible thought... So, Mel... Hm, too bad that Brian didn't call Mel. Would be interesting to discover what really happened between them... And now that Lindsay realizes that she will never get from Brian what she was hoping for, she has to change her sick plans. She's probably telling Mel some lies to make up for them. But I still can't believe that Mel is involved in the kidnapping plans. I could imagine that Lindsay will now tell Mel lies about Brian, what a bad father he is an so on... It remains exciting, but as I said before, I'm soooo glad Brian recognized what Lindsay was trying to do. And I'm feeling sad for Gus. No parent should be using her or his own kid like that. Warmest regards!
Author's Response:
Yes, this certainly was Lindsay at her best with all her delusional ideas...
We'll see if Brian will go and contact Melanie or not. Would probably be really interesting to hear from her.
Yes, I feel bad for Gus, too. Poor guy - I am really putting him through a lot :(
As always, thanks for your kind review! More will be up soon :)
Date: Aug 27, 2018 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 13
The parts with Gus are amazing. The parts with Linday were predictable, but she didn't lose her time. Too bad Brian did stop calling Mel; it would have been very interesting knowing her POV.
Author's Response:
I just love Gus <3
We'll see if Brian will go and contact Melanie or not.
More will be up soon :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2018 12:34 am Title: Chapter 13
Lindsay is on her way out. Goody.
Author's Response:
It's about time if you ask me ;)
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 13
Hey... Just recently read this, same as your other Back for Good story. I'm enjoying this one much more. Lindsay needs a good smacking... although, I really think Brian should touch base with Melanie... Thanks for updating as often as you do...
Author's Response:
Hi, I am glad you're enjoying this story :)
We'll see about Melanie and if Brian will actually contact her or not.
More will be up soon :)
Date: Aug 26, 2018 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter. So happy Brian is seeing the real Lindsay. What a delusional Waspy Witch she is.
Author's Response:
Indeed, indeed - couldn't agree more!
More will be up soon :)