Date: Aug 30, 2018 4:39 pm Title: Chapter 14
Interesting scene with Debbie and Michael.
Author's Response:
We'll see how their relationship will evolve in future chapters...
More will be up soon!
Date: Aug 30, 2018 2:25 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter. Could just see Brian holding Luke so gently. A tiny Justin is so cute. Now as for the idiot of Pittsburgh. Wish I could give him a slap, too. So glad that everyone else is seeing just what a nasty creature he is.
Author's Response:
Yes, who wouldn't love to have a tiny Justin? I wouldn't complain :P
It's about time that people start to see Michael for the idiot and jerk he is. The Brian and Mikey show is definitely over!
More will be up soon :)
Date: Aug 30, 2018 1:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
Hi! Great chapter! I really love this new side of Brian and that he rather stays at home with his "baby sunshine" (that nickname so cute and beautiful by the way) than going out... That reminded me of this leather ball in S1 when he left Gus with Justin. I found his behavior in this situation so pathetic and it made me really sad. So, I really love this matured and grown-up Brian. Still so sad, that there isn't Justin by his side... He would have loved to see this Brian... They could have been so good together... Although there still enough demons left to fight and enough issues to deal with. I'm curious, but you don't have to spoil anything... There is still the therapy to come, but if I understood right, this just comes up after Lindsay tried to kidnap Luke...
If it wouldn't be so sad than one could laugh about the way you let Michael act... "What baby?" These things Michael is saying are so cruel and hurtful and I'm so glad that Brian finally has enough of his shit. He's just so stupid and pathetic. And it seems as if Ben slowly also realises this. Warmest regard!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I hated the leather ball scene and it made me cringe :/ I guess it made sense with who Brian was at the time, but now... years later, after everything he has been through and after having carried Luke himself and having given birth to him himself, he is a different man. Good for him!
Yes, I am sure Justin would have loved this "new" Brian and they could have been really happy as a family together. If only Brian hadn't been such a fool about his pregnancy :/
Yes. the therapy will only come later in the story, after the kidnapping and the custody battle for Gus. Not really a spoiler as Brian himself mentioned the timeline in the other story, so all good ;)
The Brian and Mikey show is finally over - and if you ask me, that was long overdue. I am glad Brian finally sees Michael for the jerk he is...
More will be up soon :)
Date: Aug 30, 2018 3:30 am Title: Chapter 14
VERY GOOD CHAPTER!!! No disappointment at all. Thank you for the Debbie smack-down. Seeing that I read the other story first, and knowing that Brian and Deb are going to go through a rough patch, I can't help but wonder, "Why"?, as it's clear Debbie doesn't support Michael, right now. Seeing Michael not yet supporting Brian or Luke, and not giving Brian a gift for the baby, am I surprised? ABSOLUTELY NOT! Thank you for the quick update...
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked the chapter :)
We'll find out what will happen to Brian's and Debbie's relationship and how Michael might be involved in that...
More will be up soon :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2018 1:45 am Title: Chapter 14
How sweet of Ben to give Brian books for Luke. How stupid of Mikey to think Brian would give his son away.
Author's Response:
Michael is an idiot :( It's about time everyone realises that!
More will be up soon!