Reviews For Before The Fall
Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed 
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Date: Jul 31, 2018 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Oh, thanks for explaining.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2018 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
When I posted I always hit the opinion section this time the only thing that came up was none. Not true, cause I like, like, like.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks for explaining.
Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: I'm pleased you are happy to see Todd.
Date: Jul 31, 2018 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Todd, the good old Todd; nice to have him back.
Finally, Lindsay is leaving Mel; it was predictable considering the previous events. Too bad for Mel as she doesn't see why it's happening.
Author's Response: I'm pleased you are happy to see Todd.
Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Thanks so much, but there is two of us - Thyme and Sabina. We feed off each other.
Date: Jul 31, 2018 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter. As usual, I will read until the end before commenting again. I just love the Sunshine Files stories. You are a terrific writer.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, but there is two of us - Thyme and Sabina. We feed off each other.
Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Author's Response: Mel doesn't seem to get boundaries.
[Report This]Date: Jul 31, 2018 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1
Somehow I feel that Todd is going to be a major part of this story. It sounds like Mel went too far and is going to pay for it.
Author's Response: Mel doesn't seem to get boundaries.