Reviews For Before The Fall
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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 8:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

Todd, the good old Todd;  nice to have him back.

Finally, Lindsay is leaving Mel; it was predictable considering the previous events. Too bad for Mel as she doesn't see why it's happening.



Author's Response: I'm pleased you are happy to see Todd.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 3:01 pm Title: Chapter 7

Mr. Riley fits nicely into this story.  I can't remember how old Bree is.  Bree is going to learn a lot about pianos I bet.  Soon the gang will be all there.  I like this story a lot but the only thing showing up in Opinion is none. : (



Author's Response: Riley will be important to Bree. I don't understand your "opinion" reference.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 2:06 pm Title: Chapter 6

Ahh, the days of friskiness.  Good thing Emmett is around and willing to give the Cottage men a break from the kids.



Author's Response: Sometimes a break is so essential.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1

Great first chapter.  As usual, I will read until the end before commenting again.  I just love the Sunshine Files stories.  You are a terrific writer.



Author's Response: Thanks so much, but there is two of us - Thyme and Sabina. We feed off each other.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 3:28 am Title: Chapter 5

Bree got her piano.  We got to see Emmett, Drew, Richie, John's evil brother, Ted and Allen in this chapter.



Author's Response: Lots of characters. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 1:31 am Title: Chapter 4

Looks like Bree will be getting her piano and it's one in the family.  John and his other brother, what a hoot.



Author's Response: Sounds like you are enjoying this story. Thanks.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 1:17 am Title: Chapter 3

Lovely frog necklace.  I have a pin that is simular.  It's nice that Richie has everyone looking out for him.  I didn't see Joan there, was she?  Melanie has messed with her life one time too many.



Author's Response: Richie has been accepted into the family.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 1:04 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm worried about Joan.  Bree and her girls were a treat.  Brian with a new business should work out fine.



Author's Response: Bree is our most original and loved character.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 31, 2018 12:53 am Title: Chapter 1

Somehow I feel that Todd is going to be a major part of this story.  It sounds like Mel went too far and is going to pay for it.



Author's Response: Mel doesn't seem to get boundaries.

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