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Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 23, 2018 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Still Sick

Love it



Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Still Sick

Lol I have just been reading this story non stop and I loved it. We have had angst love trust and romance. The boys are navigating I got couplehood and now running a business and it’s very exciting. I really am enjoying the voices so in canon and so believable, looking forward to more chapters 



Author's Response: Don't know about more chapters. I haven't written any of this in quite a while. Thanks for all your lovely comments.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 4:14 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Still Sick

Excellent! Brian and Mel almost got along; impressive. Did she do it because he's Gus' father or because Justin asked?

I'm surprised to read "The end"; too good to stop.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 4:05 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Sick

Hilarious and the end! Melanie taking care of Brian; that should be something.

Brian is such a big baby when he is sick, but he listens to Justin.



Author's Response: Brian is a big baby, and of all the possible people to take care of him. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2018 3:33 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Shit Fuck

Amazing chapter! I totally see what Brian is going thru: bad news after bad news and now he's getting sick!



Author's Response: Not a good combination.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Almost Too Good

Ah, my dear bitchy Melanie, always sucking the fun out of Gus and Brian's reunions.

I hope Gus isn't sick.

Brian is getting very busy and is starting to skip the basics of his relationship. That's not good.



Author's Response: Work can sometimes take over, unfortunately.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 7:19 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Celebration

I bet Justin is hoping that Brian will want more often to indulge him in topping.

Long life to 4Front!



Author's Response: Hoping 4Front is a success.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 6:02 pm Title: Chapter 31 - The Finished Product

What a magnificient building!

I love how Carl is coming in the story (I will have to read the beginning of this sage as I don't remember where you started and who was in the picture yet). I can't wait for Debbie to meet with him.



Author's Response: Thanks so much.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 5:57 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Unraveling

Oh that's so sad, for all of the previous occupants of the house. The little girl, the lovers. What a waste!



Author's Response: Yes it is.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 5:31 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Work Force

Yeah Gus found something that might help; it's weird that he gave it to Justin; did he feel that it was for him?

I was doubting that this crew of friends would be able to get a great result for the shell and the finitions as they almost never do this kind of work in their own home. The demolition and cleaning part would be OK as they are quite motivated, even Mel.



Author's Response: Friends can accomplish a lot when they are motivated.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 5:12 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Work Crew

Ha ha ha Emmett is too much fun!

The scene with drunken Brian is also very funny and it doesn't slow his sexual appetite down, only his waking-up.



Author's Response: A fun chapter!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 4:57 pm Title: Chapter 27 - On Being Young and Gay

My theory is so wrong: the girl couldn't be the butler's daughter; the mystery remains. The wife seems to have doubts.

Hot moments with some very light S&M.



Author's Response: Glad you liked the hotness. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2018 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Revelations

Justin might have fund a good reason/explanation of the murder. A sad one.



Author's Response: Yes it is.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2018 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Disruptions

Oh, not good! I hope Nate doesn't have anything.



Author's Response: Let's hope so.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2018 9:27 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Renovations

Justin is the Miss Marple of Pittsburgh... Let's see what he will find out.



Author's Response: LOL I like that comparison.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2018 5:39 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Mutual Consent

Ha ha ha, Brian is going to be spooked by the ghost!

I hope he will be nicer with Ted: he shouldn't poke him so often.



Author's Response: I don't think Brian can resist poking Ted. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2018 3:53 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Goals and Ghosts

I bet the ghost is the daughter who might have been the butler's and lady of the house, who were having an affair. The husband was behind the murder.



Author's Response: Glad you're trying to figure it out.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2018 3:24 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Habitat

Office hunting can be a nightmare, but it can give ideas for organizing space and rooms.

I thought Brian would capitulate, but he was quite strong on this one.



Author's Response: I like to surprise you. Don't want the characters to be too predictable.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2018 3:18 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Revisiting Old Demons

Whoa, I didn't that that one coming! At least, Ian doesn't have any hidden agenda for Justin and the visit went quite well.

I wasn't sure Brian's idea would be a good one.



Author's Response: Probably a better meeting than you thought.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2018 3:06 pm Title: Chapter 19 - A Flash From the Past

It seems Ian and Justin had a bad breakup (I don't remember if it's in the previous parts of this series).

Too bad Ian is going to think that Justin came to see him.



Author's Response: Always complications. LOL

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2018 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 18 - New and Old

Oh no, you didn't dare making him come back!



Author's Response: LOL Yes I did.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2018 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 17 - Fresh Starts

Yeah, 2 bad news can be the beginning of a great adventure! I hope Justin will sue Trip.



Author's Response: We'll have to see.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2018 6:51 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Still Sick

Fantastic story, well, except for Trip.  Hate that guy, but hope that Brian learned his lesson and realizes what he could have lost.  The writing and detail were wonderful.  I really enjoy your stories so much.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2018 6:38 pm Title: Chapter 16 - The Wrath of Kinney

What a nasty guy! I love how Brian kicked him out! Well done!



Author's Response: Brian is still Brian.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2018 6:12 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Lists

I don't why, but I feel that Trip is behind what is happening to Justin; it's weird that the company's manager just changed and that Justin is the first target.



Author's Response: You are very perceptive.

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