Date: Aug 06, 2018 5:38 pm Title: Chapter 14 - Fact and Fantasy
I understand Justin, but he is quite aggressive towards Brian.
Author's Response: He's not happy, and that's how he shows it.
Date: Aug 06, 2018 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Sex, Lies, and ...
Rocky beginning, but it's quite logical. The end seems promising though.
Author's Response: Hope so.
Date: Aug 06, 2018 4:08 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Power Play
Whoa, Gus is showing a side that is not pleasant; he is very stubborn and doesn't like to get a "No" with his demands.
Trip is a nasty guy and I bet he will move mountains to get what he wants.
Author's Response: Gus is a kid being a kid.
Date: Aug 06, 2018 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Work and Play and Repentance
That was predictable, but Brian was really distant with Justin, who is very comprehensive (too much maybe?). That's right, there has been Ian in the past, but they were absolutely not in the same situation. Brian has been weak and he had no reason except thinking with his little head. Ian happened because they were in a very bad phase and not talking about their feelings. They were not doing it raw, they were not "in a relationship" like they are in now.
Author's Response: Very different, the two scenarios, but that doesn't help Brian.
Date: Aug 06, 2018 3:49 pm Title: Chapter 31 - The Finished Product
Was planning on waiting to the end to comment, but just had to tell you before I forget that the building it beautiful. I like that you picked the mansion instead of the baths and named it 4Front. Terrific ideaas and fantastic writing. Getting close to the end now.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your positive comments. They are greatly appreciated.
Date: Aug 06, 2018 3:30 am Title: Chapter 10 - Work and Play and Drinking
No such luck; it will be in his head and it will haunt him: too late and he knows he shouldn't have lowered his guard.
Author's Response: I'm afraid you're right.
Date: Aug 05, 2018 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Work and Play and Death
This situation is very dangerous as Brian might not be able to stop Trip too long.
I love the reference to the great movie with Hugh at his best and Chrstine as well.
Author's Response: Yes, Trip is a threat.
Date: Aug 05, 2018 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Work and Play
Another wonderful hot chapter! Awesome news for Justin's job!
I'm just surprised by the mix of tastes for the main course: orange, garlic and Hollandaise sauce; seems a little weird association.
Author's Response: LOL I never had a comment about the cuisine before.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 36 - Still Sick
Aha! This was all Mikey's fault. He's the one who insisted they go to the diner for lunch. Melanie should market her chicken soup and pot pie, though don't tell Deb. This can't be the end! It has so much more to be told.
Author's Response: I know there is more, but I lost the thread for this story. Sorry.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 9:57 pm Title: Chapter 35 - Sick
Now Melanie was the last person I would have expected to see. Good twist.
Author's Response: Thanks, you never know who might turn up.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 9:19 pm Title: Chapter 34 - Shit Fuck
Looks like whatever Gus has he gave it to Brian. Such a generous little boy. Frankly I thing Gus got what he got from Melanie.
Author's Response: Gus is a sweetheart.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 9:06 pm Title: Chapter 33 - Almost Too Good
The water was warm, but the air was not. Brian ought to offer to do a campaign for Nate in exchange for the job he did for 4Front. Now Brian is burning the candle at both ends, I hope it doesn't cause problems.
Author's Response: That's always been Brian's MO so let's hope he doesn't overdo it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 32 - Celebration
Celebration Time!
Author's Response: You got it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 8:37 pm Title: Chapter 31 - The Finished Product
I think the ghost got the message. Brian is sure to get the account, he's that good. 4Front is off to a good start.
Author's Response: Let's hope so.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 7:53 pm Title: Chapter 30 - Unraveling
Hey, lucky guess! I am glad that Joseph admitted how much he cared for Algernon. Now all Justin needs to do is read the letter to the Ghost and Joseph can come claim him. Wonder if the daughter found the box and knew that her mother was a murderer and that's why she never married.
Author's Response: You are a good guesser. LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 29 - Work Force
I was disappointed in Brian's attitude, but he did warm up though. Now we have a new clue thanks to Gus.
Author's Response: Brian's not as ready for change as one might think.
Date: Aug 04, 2018 7:23 pm Title: Chapter 7 - I Love You
I love the way you write your stories, but the parts were Gus is there are my favorite. Hector the dragon is so lucky and so is Gus.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 7:14 pm Title: Chapter 28 - Work Crew
Now that's the way to do it. The gang is the new work crew. Bravo!
Author's Response: Glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 6:25 pm Title: Chapter 27 - On Being Young and Gay
My guess is the wife did it. Either that or it was suicide.
Author's Response: LOL Interesting choice.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 6:15 pm Title: Chapter 26 - Revelations
Murder is bad enough, add rape to it and it's down right worse than bad.
Author's Response: Absolutely!
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 5:56 pm Title: Chapter 25 - Disruptions
So close to finding out what happened. At least the wall is gone.
Author's Response: Getting closer.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Renovations
Love the carpenter. So now we have a name for the butler!
Author's Response: Yes we do. LOL
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 4:55 pm Title: Chapter 23 - Mutual Consent
I do love a mystery. I think bringing Ted on board will work out for everyone. Maybe even the ghost.
Author's Response: Yeah, the ghost has to be taken into consideration.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 4:04 pm Title: Chapter 22 - Goals and Ghosts
I do love a mystery. Your thought processes in this story are so different from what I'm use to. Which makes each chapter a delightful surprise.
Author's Response: Thank you, I wanted to do something different.
[Report This]Date: Aug 04, 2018 2:56 pm Title: Chapter 21 - Habitat
Love the proposed changes. A haunted house rather then the bathhouse. A different name rather the Kinnetic. A Trip rather than Mikey. Ethan HIV positive. So different from usual, even though you do usual very well.
Author's Response: LOL Glad you like the changes.