Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 21, 2021 8:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Michael truly had an eye opening nightmare!! Thank goodness that's all it was, but yes, he finally figured out the fact that Brian will never be his.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2018 8:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2018 11:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Just read this. It was really good.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 11, 2018 1:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Great story.  You two write so well together.  Thank you for sharing your thoughts. 

Author's Response:

 

Marilynne,

Thanks. We have a good time when we write together. Glad you liked the story.

~Nichelle & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was some story. Em I love you! Telling Michael a truth or making him face the truth about himself is always good when he really doesn't want to hear it. The teller, no matter who it is gives a fantastic smackdow.

Idiot Michael and his bad dream. What a hoot.

In those apologies he needs to give, i hope he includes one for Justin. 

Author's Response:

 

Sherry,

Michael needs a good knock in the head to make him see what has been in front of him the whole time. Emmett is honest the way Brian is, he usually just has a softer way of putting obvious things in your face, until he is pushed. He has a quiet strength, like the way he 'promised' to break Blake's face if he hurt Ted. 

Writing Michael's dream was fun.

He will. He realized that without Justin he could have lost more than just Brian's friendship.

~Nichelle & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Jazzepoet Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 1:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG!!!! You ladies took the whole first season and completely mind-fucked it. This was fantastic.....can you ladies do this with season five please ;)

Author's Response:

 

JP,

Glad you liked the story. This was a one-shot, but if something comes up we may write another.

~Nichelle & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 11:47 am Title: Chapter 1

So very good. I enjoyed it a lot although I have trouble to believe Michael's change in the end (not because of your writing, but because he's Michael lol). The part that Michael dreamed would make an interesting storyline itself.

Brian and Justin preparing for their honeymoon... with Justin topping HIS Brian. Amazing. What more could I ask for?

Author's Response:

 

Sandy,

Michael changed because he realized that without Justin he could have lost Brian in a worse way than not becoming his boyfriend. He would rather have him alive and with Justin than dead.

We love Toppy Justin.

~Nichelle & Lorie~

 

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 09, 2018 5:55 am Title: Chapter 1

Well done, Ladies!!! I love it. So glad you snatched that little bunny up and wrote this wonderful story. Love how you had Michael blatantly chasing after Brian and telling everyone they were together and how Brian handled setting Michael straight (somewhat). Nice twist with the girls sneaking off with the baby, although the poor kid ended up being named Abraham. (Maybe you should write a sidebar on how the girls had to deal with him being bullied for his name years later. LOL)

*HUGS*

Deb

Author's Response:

 

Deb, 

Thanks for the idea. Since Justin had named Gus, without him being there he could very well have been named Abraham, especially if Brian hadn't gotten the call to go to the hospital. A lot of things would have been different without the sexy blond. For one thing Michael wouldn't have stopped trying to get Brian to be his. This was a fun story to write.

~Nichelle & Lorie~