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Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 8:47 pm Title: Chapter 4 ~ Eye-Opening Experience

Why is Justin deaf and blind when it comes to the chin rat? The rat wants Justin's money. When putting money down on a home for them was mentioned, I have to wonder why Justin didn't mention his studio space. Nah not because he was drunk.

Justin is never going to find anything or anyone that makes him feel like Brian does. Come alive like Brian does. Boy is he in for a royal disappointment if he goes after the traveling troubadour.



Author's Response: Justin's slowly learning about being a gay man in the real world, and what better teacher is there than Mr. Kinney. Unfortunately, he may have a few bumps and falls along the way... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 4 ~ Eye-Opening Experience

 

Kathleen,

The idiot and the weasel never quit. Justin is crazy if he thinks for one minute that Ethan would spend one cent of HIS money on anything for someone other than himself. Although he expects Justin to pay for EVERYTHING he wants out of his money.

Great story.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response: Yep, Ethan and Michael are both just whining users, never paying for a thing, wanting a free ride. Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 6:44 pm Title: Chapter 4 ~ Eye-Opening Experience

I LOVE Daphne! She really tells it like it is! A gal after my own heart. As for Michael, someone is definitely on the road to Loonyville. 'We've been together since we were fourteen...' Really, Schmuck?! I hope while Emmett has Justin alone he takes the time to disabuse Justin of Michael's preposterous notions.

As for Ethan, UGHHHHHHH!!!!! Why can't he fall out of orbit WITH his violin?! That money is the real reason he's trying to hold on so tight to Justin. I just hope Justin sees it before he spends any more money for or regarding Ethan. That damned 'Gimme' syndrome he has is truly irksome and needs to be corrected with a cinderblock to the throat. He and Michael are cut from the same entitled, greedy, attention-seeking cloth! UGH! They should hook up since together they are both still children with the IQ of a rattle and the attractiveness of a car wreck. They truly are a match made in hell!

Really enjoying this!

Happy Writing and HUGS,

~Nichelle

 



Author's Response: Daphne has no problem seeing the real person Ethan is. But Justin is still wanting to believe in true love, after all he's been waiting for years. Ethan, Michael, bricks down his throat, violin bow through the eye, yep sound like it could be love at first sight... he, he, he... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 4 ~ Eye-Opening Experience

Pretty hot scene in Babylon! I'm glad that Justin countered Micheal. Emmett is so fun and so is Daphne! I can't wait for a confrontation between Daphne and Michael! I wonder why Ethan is pushing Justin for his found and why Justin doesn't react more to that.



Author's Response: I'm surprised Michael's head didn't explode as he watched Brian and Justin on the dance floor. Daphne sure will be the right person the rip Michael a new one... Yes, what does Ethan need all that money for??? Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 6:36 pm Title: Chapter 4 ~ Eye-Opening Experience

To think I thought Justin was smart.  <sigh>  Brian show Justin what he needs.



Author's Response: Justin's still stuck in the first love syndrome, thankfully Brian's willing to wait it out... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2018 2:22 pm Title: Chapter 4 ~ Eye-Opening Experience

Jealous Michael... What can I say?  He's hilarious!  I can't wait for his reaction why B/J finally get together.  Okay... Ethan! Stupid, arrogant asswipe! What's with this two weeks crap?  AND... He's already BOOKED the tickets???  No no no...  Brian better bed the blond soon... Something has to get it through him!  Thanks for the update. Looking forward to more soon.

Hugs, Cathy



Author's Response: I love Justin's drunken take down of Michael, he so deserved it. It may be a few more chapters before Justin and Brian truly get together, but there will be a bit of kissing and grinding along the way. One step forward, two steps back... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

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