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Reviewer: Erbear4474 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 01, 2018 3:54 am Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

I don’t understand...what prompted Brian to trick like that? When just hours earlier he told Justin he loves him. 



Author's Response: Well, we all know tricking is like a hand shake to Brian. But, he was also worried that Justin might change his mind once he was back with Ethan, so it was just a form of pain management. And we all know Brian, is Brian, and he doesn't always use the best judgement... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Please update



Author's Response: I'm hoping to post the next chapter in the morning, just waiting on my beta... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

How will ou manage to get them back together?



Author's Response: There like ying and yang, they just work... They're meant to be together, so fear not... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Huge fuck up! The image of Brian naked in the street with a condom is as disturbing as funny.



Author's Response: Disturbing and funny, yep... Poor Brian, I mean, poor Justin... More coming soon... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Great chapter, but Brian has to learn - you play, you pay.  He is sending Justin right into Ethan's arms.  Just wanted to say proud of you for spelling Monongahela correctly, so many people don't.  I live on the Youghiogheny which flows into The Mon before it flows into the Ohio in Pittsburgh.  So all of my life these rivers have been The Mon and The Yough since people really can't spell Youghiogheny correctly.  HaHa !!!!



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. Yes, it's true Justin's already on a flight to Italy. But not to fear, Brian will soon have his angel back in his arms. I can understand all the misspelling, but really it only takes an internet search. I couldn't write without the world wide web, and my beta of course. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

 

Kathleen,

My heart is breaking for both of them. Please write fast and fix this.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response: I know, these couple of chapter will be hard for Justin. But he's strong, and him and Brian really do want the same things, so remember that I'm all about the love... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Things were going so smoothly something had to happen. Why is Justin upset? Hr still has Ethan he thinks. He doesn't know Ethan has been cheating on him with a woman.  Brian never promised not to. Right now it doesn't look good for our men. Maybe Justin should re-examine just what it is he wants.

Yay for Deb. It's about time she stood up to that pissant. Ted too. They're all tired of Michael and his crap.

 



Author's Response: You're so right they never promised each other anything. Now they just need to work out what their willing to compromise on, and work out the details. Oh, poor wittle Mikey, no one wants to play with him anymore... Hugs Hon ` Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Wow... We went from ice cream kisses, to a hand-job shower, to shopping, to dinner, to... dun-dun-duuuun...

Brian, Brian, Brian... WHY? Well, Mikey will be pleased. He won't give up a chance to rub Justin's nose in it. Will he have to get a job in the diner?  hehe...

Now, I suppose Justin is off to see Ethan. Our nightmare is coming to fruition.

Thanks so much for the update. Looking so forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response: Yes, things were moving along perfectly, and then Brian's libido had to poke his head into it... (I know Bad...) Yes, Justin's off to visit Ethan in Italy, but that's not going to be pretty either... More coming soon... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

ARGH! And things were going so WELL! First, Michael's words to him, and now Brian....!!! Well you did say that it wasn't exactly going to be smooth sailing, but I didn't expect this level of clusterfuck so soon...SMH Hopefully, Justin will return the phone calls and at least, hear Brian out. Ironically, I'm wondering about the girl who keeps answering Ethan's phone. His beard, perhaps? Or something more permanent? Now THAT would be jacked up if he's trying to use Justin to fund his new life with a new wife. So many avenues this can take!

As for Michael, not surprised he got fired. He didn't want the job anyway, feeling like it was beneath him. I'm so HAPPY that Deb stood up to him, and that if he doesn't want to be living on a park bench, he'd better straighten up and fly right! I live in New York so the fact that she's only charging him $100 r & b is a dream, regardless that she's his mother. The average cost of a room per week here is $200 and more with access to the communal kitchen and bathroom ONLY. Usually where family is concerned, you pay room and board, plus a percentage of all the utilities so Dude is still lucky that he's coming off so cheaply. Idiotman can't see the good for his ginormous, unearned ego...SMH

Great chapter and looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Justin might be hurt and angry with Brian, but Brian has a way of being there for Justin right when he needs him. Need I say some open communication is needed for them to figure out how to make things work, because they both really do want to make it work out. Debbie is holding to her guns, even though she still wants to make everything right for Michael. But she remembers Brian's words, and she knows he's right. Michael will never change if they keep bailing his ass out. The next chapter should be up tomorrow, I hope. I'm waiting on my beta... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

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