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Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

How will ou manage to get them back together?



Author's Response: There like ying and yang, they just work... They're meant to be together, so fear not... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 9:48 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Huge fuck up! The image of Brian naked in the street with a condom is as disturbing as funny.



Author's Response: Disturbing and funny, yep... Poor Brian, I mean, poor Justin... More coming soon... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 8:11 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Great chapter, but Brian has to learn - you play, you pay.  He is sending Justin right into Ethan's arms.  Just wanted to say proud of you for spelling Monongahela correctly, so many people don't.  I live on the Youghiogheny which flows into The Mon before it flows into the Ohio in Pittsburgh.  So all of my life these rivers have been The Mon and The Yough since people really can't spell Youghiogheny correctly.  HaHa !!!!



Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. Yes, it's true Justin's already on a flight to Italy. But not to fear, Brian will soon have his angel back in his arms. I can understand all the misspelling, but really it only takes an internet search. I couldn't write without the world wide web, and my beta of course. Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

 

Kathleen,

My heart is breaking for both of them. Please write fast and fix this.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response: I know, these couple of chapter will be hard for Justin. But he's strong, and him and Brian really do want the same things, so remember that I'm all about the love... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 5:46 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Things were going so smoothly something had to happen. Why is Justin upset? Hr still has Ethan he thinks. He doesn't know Ethan has been cheating on him with a woman.  Brian never promised not to. Right now it doesn't look good for our men. Maybe Justin should re-examine just what it is he wants.

Yay for Deb. It's about time she stood up to that pissant. Ted too. They're all tired of Michael and his crap.

 



Author's Response: You're so right they never promised each other anything. Now they just need to work out what their willing to compromise on, and work out the details. Oh, poor wittle Mikey, no one wants to play with him anymore... Hugs Hon ` Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

Wow... We went from ice cream kisses, to a hand-job shower, to shopping, to dinner, to... dun-dun-duuuun...

Brian, Brian, Brian... WHY? Well, Mikey will be pleased. He won't give up a chance to rub Justin's nose in it. Will he have to get a job in the diner?  hehe...

Now, I suppose Justin is off to see Ethan. Our nightmare is coming to fruition.

Thanks so much for the update. Looking so forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response: Yes, things were moving along perfectly, and then Brian's libido had to poke his head into it... (I know Bad...) Yes, Justin's off to visit Ethan in Italy, but that's not going to be pretty either... More coming soon... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2018 3:30 pm Title: Chapter 9 ~ Love is a Four-Letter Word

ARGH! And things were going so WELL! First, Michael's words to him, and now Brian....!!! Well you did say that it wasn't exactly going to be smooth sailing, but I didn't expect this level of clusterfuck so soon...SMH Hopefully, Justin will return the phone calls and at least, hear Brian out. Ironically, I'm wondering about the girl who keeps answering Ethan's phone. His beard, perhaps? Or something more permanent? Now THAT would be jacked up if he's trying to use Justin to fund his new life with a new wife. So many avenues this can take!

As for Michael, not surprised he got fired. He didn't want the job anyway, feeling like it was beneath him. I'm so HAPPY that Deb stood up to him, and that if he doesn't want to be living on a park bench, he'd better straighten up and fly right! I live in New York so the fact that she's only charging him $100 r & b is a dream, regardless that she's his mother. The average cost of a room per week here is $200 and more with access to the communal kitchen and bathroom ONLY. Usually where family is concerned, you pay room and board, plus a percentage of all the utilities so Dude is still lucky that he's coming off so cheaply. Idiotman can't see the good for his ginormous, unearned ego...SMH

Great chapter and looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Justin might be hurt and angry with Brian, but Brian has a way of being there for Justin right when he needs him. Need I say some open communication is needed for them to figure out how to make things work, because they both really do want to make it work out. Debbie is holding to her guns, even though she still wants to make everything right for Michael. But she remembers Brian's words, and she knows he's right. Michael will never change if they keep bailing his ass out. The next chapter should be up tomorrow, I hope. I'm waiting on my beta... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2018 7:38 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

Hey Kathleen,

FIRST, This title was named after one of my favorite POWER ballads EVER. So you had me from 'click'! And hey, I'm not THAT old, LOL

Secondly, GO BRIAN!!! And YES! Justin is FINALLY really starting to recognize the difference between the way a 'boy' and a MAN is supposed to treat him as a person; NOT as an extension but as a treasure. I have the feeling that rooftop oasis is going to see a whole lot of action! 

Thirdly...Hm...Rememer that scene from Grease, where Kennicki was play slapping Cha-Cha De Gregorio when they were dancing during the dance-off? YEAH! Wanted to make that a REAL SLAP using a BRICK to Michael. I mean, seriously! Brian owes him a job? He's going to make Brian's life hell? HELLOOOOO, just knowing Michael should have come with its own 9th circle of Hell warning saying 'No Dude, DO NOT ENTER HERE!' Every time Michael talked, Brian should have smelled sulphur and brimstone. Hopefully, Debbie will continue to keep her distance and leave Boo-Boo the Fool on his own.

Looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY WRITING AND HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: Hey, I'm not that old either... Not really... How can I be, when my alter-ego is a seventeen year old gay boy??? Both Brian and Justin are starting to realize their feeling for one another go much deeper than they ever expected... But that doesn't mean things will be sooth sailing. The next chapter will be posted in a few minutes... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 19, 2018 10:40 am Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

Even his head should stirr him away from Ian :D

Oh and your Brian/Michael scene is one of my favorite ever! Keep up the Michael bashing please! God I love it when he gets his ass handed to him. Such a whiny little bitch



Author's Response: "Keep up the Michael bashing please! God I love it when he gets his ass handed to him." Then your going to love the scene where he gets mugged in the ally... I think it's two chapters away... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

Thanks for the update. Loved the Chapter Title. Of course I thought of the song right away.

Loved the Mikey smackdown...  Although I always like the, "No, Mikey. You're not my Best Friend!" Why is he only looking for a Manager job?

Is Ethan becoming... A distant memory?

The ending was amazing. Loved the picture attached.



Author's Response: I do tend to pull my titles right out of old songs... I guess we're showing our age... he, he, he... I love the pic too, all those ice cream kisses pics are soooo gooood... Hot, Sexy... I obviously need to move this fic along to the porny phase... Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 9:54 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

 

Kathleen,

I'm loving this story so much.

Weasel expecting Brian to give him a job - that idiot had a lot of nerve. Maybe they could fix the weasel up with Ethan and they could travel together, far away. It would get both of the 'un-needed' away from Pittsburgh. 

Brian and Justin daydreaming about each other is sweet. Maybe that trip to Italy could be for two. It would be a great honeymoon. ;)

~Lorie

 



Author's Response: "Maybe that trip to Italy could be for two. It would be a great honeymoon. ;)" Are you in my head, reading my chapters in advance??? Later Darling ~ Kathleen

 

I'm just hopeful. :*

~Lorie

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 4:48 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

This is my favorite story right now.  It's  sweet and romantic .



Author's Response: Squeals! Thank you so much Darling! Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 3:11 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

Seems to me that Brian's winning the battle or Justin has stopped fighting his attraction. Either way it's a win win for them both.

Now Michael on the other hand is losing the battle of getting his "best friend" to support him. Maybe Justin should help Brian ship him off to Italy as a present for the fiddler. One way ticket of course.



Author's Response: I think it's a little of both, so really they're both winning! Uggg! Michael, he is, and always will be a loser... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 2:51 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

Ice cream kisses........ hot, sticky and cold altogether.



Author's Response: You know we love it hot and sticky... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 1:43 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

Great chapter. Could just see the roof top as Justin was explaining it to Brian. Wonderful story and writing. Of course, I always love when Mikey is an idiot !! HaHa



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'd love to have a secret hideaway in the sky, but I'd need a rich, arrogant boyfriend. And I don't think Justin's willing to share... Hugs Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 18, 2018 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 8 ~ I Can’t Stop This Feeling

Ice cream kisses.



Author's Response: There's nothing more sexy... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Sweet, Smart and Sexy


Kathleen,
Great chapter. The part in the furniture store was hilarious, especially after Jennifer showed up. Loving this story. 
~Lorie


Author's Response: Thanks Lorie, I had fun writing that part. Jennifer embarrassing Justin was classic, and Brian was just being Brian... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 8:45 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Sweet, Smart and Sexy

Thank you for updating this amazing story. I just love it. You are correct... about my user name on Midnight Whispers. How did you figure it out? So, you know it was me who wrote you about continuing two of your stories. Do you think you ever will?

No Michael dumbass this chapter. But, a wonderful Brian and Justin chapter. Loved them bed shopping. And oh so wonderful being caught by mom. It should give Justin a clue when both his mom and Daphne don't like Ethan, but are already bonding with Brian. Also, Justin shouldn't ignore the feelings Brian evokes in him, when he feels none of that passion with Ethan. I can't wait for when he tells Ethan to jump in a lake. And Drown. He should really think of the alternative to why Ethan doesn't want to have sex. I'm sure Ethan is not a virgin. He's probably in a relationship with another musician. I still think Ethan plans to swindle Justin out of his money, and that would give Ethan a good reason, if he is involved with someone.

Kitsch situation was kind of funny. Another delusional. Hopefully that will cure Kitsch's fascination with Justin. Clothes shopping with Brian should prove entertaining.

Again, thanks for this AWESOME story...

Hugs, Cathy



Author's Response: When I read the comment and you mentioned having another pen-name, I was like hmm? And BritinManor just popped into my head, and I never even consider anyone else... I guess it was just one of those sixth sense things? In this chapter I decided to just give the boys sometime to get to know one another. It helps that Brian already has Jen on his side, it's just a matter of time now... You're guesses are always so close, sometimes. But you'll have to just wait and see, it won't be much longer. Of course, I think that it will probably be the next chapter, and then the next. Things just keep coming up that need to happen before it all comes crashing down on the slimy chin-rat. Later Sweetheart ~ Kathleen PS I love that I guessed right...

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 7:56 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Sweet, Smart and Sexy

Ha ha ha, if Jennifer and Daphne are all for Brian, Ethan really has no chance.

Is it an real picture from the good all days without Photoshoping?



Author's Response: You're so right, he doesn't have a chance in the world. But who would if the competition is Brian Kinney... I'm not sure about the pic, I think I downloaded it from twitter, and I also think it might be photo-shopped. But it would be nice if it wasn't... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 7:48 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Sweet, Smart and Sexy

So funny and sweet. . I love the bed shopping.



Author's Response: Thanks Darling! It was a fun shopping trip, and running into Jen just made it even funnier... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Sweet, Smart and Sexy

Give into your feelings Justin. Mother knows best, and the fiddler ain't it.

Bed shopping with Brian, what fun.

 



Author's Response: You're so right, Mother knows best! Listen to your heart, and trust your gut Justin! Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 6:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Sweet, Smart and Sexy

How much longer before Justin realizes resistance is futile and gives in?



Author's Response: We're getting there, I promise... I pretty sure it going to happen in the chapter I'm writing today, but I've been thinking that for the last couple of chapters. And then there's the fact that your on chapter 7, and I'm writing chapter 10... Thanks for being patient... Hugs Sweetheart ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2018 5:32 pm Title: Chapter 7 ~ Sweet, Smart and Sexy

WHOO-HOO! That Brian is one smooth operator! Bed-testing, huh? Well let the courtship commence! Between Jen and Kitch (Laughed aloud at that one), Brian's intentions were made really clear. Besides, Mother and True Best Friend know BEST! Hopefully, Justin will take the obvious hint, and get with the HERO and drop that zero!

Great chapter Darling, and looking forward to MORE!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response: For once Brian been patience, banking on the wait being worth it. For the first time he's truly smitten with someone, and not just out to get his needs met. Brian, Jen, and Kit made for one embarrassing shopping trip. Who wouldn't want to give it a test drive with Brian Kinney? More coming soon Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2018 9:03 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ Negotiations

Ted is so sweet.  Are you sure we can't put Michael back in jail ?



Author's Response: Hmmm... That's an idea, but I might have to torture him first... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Lorie Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2018 3:54 am Title: Chapter 6 ~ Negotiations

 

Kathleen,

So happy that Brian and Justin are working toward a friendship and more. 

That entitled weasel will never learn. Brian should probably hire a guard for the loft so he doesn't barge in again while Justin is working. The weasel may try to tell Justin that Brian got him pregnant next time.

Great story.

~Lorie

 



Author's Response: Yes, they might be moving slowly towards a relationship, but it will be so worth the wait. Yuck, just thinking about Brian and Michael together is making my skin crawl. Guarding the loft is an idea, but I'm thinking being threatened by a thug might be a start in the right direction... Later Darling ~ Kathleen

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