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Reviewer: bjlover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 24, 2022 8:42 pm Title: Chapter 10

I really enjoyed this story! I would love to read an update to this story!

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2019 10:06 am Title: Chapter 14

Love it, thank you



Author's Response:

I'm so glad! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2018 9:11 am Title: Chapter 14

What a beautiful ending to a truly AMAZING story. You had me captivated right from the start. Definitely one of my new all-time faves. You know the characters so well and captured their voices perfectly. Thank you for this story and your wonderful writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! <3 I knew watching the series too many times would eventually pay off. ;)

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2018 9:09 am Title: Chapter 13

Well, this chapter was an emotional rollercoaster for me LOL. I am so relieved that Brian didn't push Justin away for good, and that Deb talked some sense into him. She gets him and understands the reasons he is the way he is and I freaking love that. She's seen him at his worst, she knows how to help. Sometimes you just need a cuddle from your mama, and that is what she is, his mama <3

 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that someone else shares my love of the Debbie and Brian relationship. <3  And it was an emotional roller coaster for me too!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2018 9:06 am Title: Chapter 12

Goddamnit, Brian and his damn pride. I wish he would realise that Justin is there because he WANTS to be and not because he feels obligated to.

And damn you. Michael, take that bloody key away from him LOL.

This story SLAYSSSSSSSSSSSSSS me :)



Author's Response:

This is kind of the "I want to smack Brian" chapter....heh.

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2018 4:34 pm Title: Chapter 14

 Wonderful story and excellent writing.  You did a great job getting into the psyche of Brian‘s character. Can’t wait to see what you write next. TAG 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Sandi wanted to slap him in Ch 12 too. ;) And writing 13 made me cry. I'm glad you liked the story!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2018 4:12 pm Title: Chapter 13

Awwwww! TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2018 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 12

 I just want to slap Brian and tell him to sit down, shut up and stop making life for everyone twice as hard. If Justin wants to stay and help him, that’s Justin’s decision. Why can’t Brian understand that? He doesn’t get a poor Brian from me on this chapter. TAG 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2018 7:21 am Title: Chapter 9

 Thank goodness they finally convinced Brian to stay home from work. I seriously can’t imagine being that sick. Poor Brian. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

Yay, Cynthia!  And, lest we forget, Poor Brian. TAG



Author's Response:

Haha...don't worry, you won't forget...I promise. If I wrote the story, chances are it's a "poor Brian" story.;)

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

 OK, I’m just gonna give up and write ‘Poor Brian’ as my review for every single chapter from here on out. LOL. TAG



Author's Response:

Ha, I was thinking with the last one that you were going to be thinking that through the whole story. ;) 

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 6

 Great effort weaving your backstory into the scenes from the show. You made it all seem even more real. All I want to say is ‘Poor Brian’. TAG

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 5:27 am Title: Chapter 5

 Poor Brian. The way he’s building everything up in his mind is probably worse than it will actually end up being. TAG

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 14

What a lovely ending for this truly engaging story. You write so well that it feels like you are right there with the characters as they live through each horrendous day. You are truly a literary artistan. So keep up the good work. I look very forward to your next writing adventure, as I will be right there enjoying it.

One thing I did wonder about Lindsay, though. Was she so wrapped up in her talking about 'woe-is-me' and reliving fantasies of her and Brian that she didn't even notice the pallor of Brian's skin, or the significant weight loss? I've never been a Michael or Lindsay fan, so these little 'anti' characteristics you included help feed that. So, thank you for that. And thank you for this awesome and amazing story. I've really enjoyed it.

I noticed this morning you had a couple other one-shots, other than your other cancer fic, that I plan to check out. Don't know why I've never thought of doing that before.  So, I look forward to enjoying more of your work.

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

I’m going to go with “yes” on Lindsay, because I honestly didn’t want to make him have to tell one more person...I didn’t want to put him through that again. And, if she doesn’t know, that saves another element for your plot bunny. ;)

I hope you like my other two stories...they were the first things I wrote after my 15 year hiatus from writing fiction. They’re song fics, but only because the song inspired them. It doesn’t drive the plot at all.

Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments! When I’m writing, I’m watching the scene in my head and then trying to have you see what I see. It’s nice to hear that it’s working!

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 14

Beautiful story! So much better than the original script!

I love how you ended it with their quotes about Brian's stiffness.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And I’m glad someone caught that...haha. I used as many quotes from the actual episodes as I could work in.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 6:05 am Title: Chapter 14

Such a beautiful ending to an amazing story! I have to say I'm sorry to see it end, but you couldn't have possibly written a better ending for the boys.

So happy that you to a chance on my plot bunny. This story will definitely be saved to my hard drive and on my favorites lists.

Well done!

*Hugs*

Deb



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I’m glad the story turned out to your liking, since it came from your bunny. :) hugs!

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 6:03 am Title: Chapter 13

OMG! Another emotional rollercoaster for the boys and me! So glad that Justin didn't let Brian push him away. Brian was in so much pain, not just physically, but heart sore pain. So, so happy that Justin turned to Debbie to help make Brian see the truth, that he is worth loving.

Loved how Deb talked to Brian without yelling, without badgering him or berating him. She spoke to him like a true mother. Love the way their relationship flourished.

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 3:06 am Title: Chapter 13

Hard and beautiful! I bet nobody could keep dry eyes while reading this. Thanks to Debbie; only she could go through Brian's thick skull.



Author's Response:

I didn't even keep dry eyes while writing it...so, probably not. It was just as gut wrenching to write as it would have been to be there, I think.

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 1:24 am Title: Chapter 14

Lovely Story!



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: purpledee Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 8:35 pm Title: Chapter 14

An end to a really good story with very good writing!

Really enjoyed this different take on the cancer arc. Looking forward to more from you.

Thanks

Deb



Author's Response:

Thank you! I will definitely be around! <3 I'm glad you enjoyed my take on the cancer arc.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 8:33 pm Title: Chapter 14

Tough subject to deal with. Brian and Justin handled it as best they could. Bad times beside they did well.

This was a great story. Great job writing it and getting all of Brian's fears and feelings across to us readers.



Author's Response:

Thank you! This was a tough story to write in a lot of ways. It was very technical and got quite dark in places. I wanted to get things as right as I could, and I feel like I accomplished that. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 14

Beautiful ending to a wonderful story 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! <3

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 8:31 pm Title: Chapter 14

Thank you for  a wonderful ending to a fantastic story.  Enjoyed the journey with you as you wrote it.  Fantastic job !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so, so much for being a loyal reader and commenter! And for having the faith to enjoy the journey along with me!

Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2018 7:05 am Title: Chapter 4

 Great insight into Brian‘s emotions and why he doesn’t feel loved. TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you! It should be very clear now why Kindred Souls resonated so well with me...

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 4:08 pm Title: Chapter 13

Wonderful chapter. Took Debbie to get Brian on the right track.  Could feel all his pain.  Fantastic writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you <3 I love Debbie and Brian!

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