Date: Oct 12, 2018 12:21 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great effort weaving your backstory into the scenes from the show. You made it all seem even more real. All I want to say is ‘Poor Brian’. TAG
Date: Sep 22, 2018 12:28 am Title: Chapter 6
I really like the way Justin stands up to Brian about eating before going in for his treatment but backs down on going with him, showing he understands that Brian would feel smothered if he went with him.
And I love that you used the scene between Brian and Ted at Kinnetik. That is one of my favorite scenes! Ted wasn't acting as just an employee but as a true friend who was concerned.
Wonderful chapter!
*Hugs*
Deb
Author's Response:
It's one of my favorites as well, so I had to work it in there! As Michael would say, Justin has read the Kinney Operating Manual. ;) Glad you're still loving it! Hope you enjoy Ch. 7 just as much.
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2018 12:26 am Title: Chapter 6
SIGH, I love reading this, it's like how the show SHOULD have written this storyline. I still love that Brian told Ted, I think Brian likes him a lot more than he'd ever let on.
Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Lucky for you, you've still got one more before you're caught up to me. ;) I'm glad that I'm still doing it justice!
Date: Sep 19, 2018 8:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
Thank you so much for this awesome update.The scene between Brian and Ted was beautifully done. You know how they always say a book is so much better than a movie? Because you can hear a persons thoughts. Which I commend you for doing just that.
Did you know that high-protein shakes/fruit shakes with GINGER twice a day is great way to reduce nausea during treatment? Great breakfast idea. Also, soups/stews made with an abundance of GARLIC is also good to use too. (just giving Justin some ideas).
XOXO ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
Ah, thank you for the ideas ;) I really like adding the thoughts behind what we saw to scenes in the show. I enjoy reading it as well as writing it. I'm glad you feel I did it well! One of my favorite scenes.
Date: Sep 19, 2018 11:24 am Title: Chapter 6
So it begins Brian has done the right thing and let some people in although it goes against every fiber of his being! We are going to find Brian struggling against his body and his pride 😔
Author's Response:
That we are...that we are.
Date: Sep 18, 2018 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow, felt like I was reliving the series. Great writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I enjoy taking scenes and fleshing them out a bit more, with more information from inside the character's head.
Date: Sep 18, 2018 8:59 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter. I really liked that he thought of Justin and Gus instead of thoughts of Vic.
I adored that scene between him and Ted. You did it justice.
Author's Response:
Me too. I really enjoy adding Brian’s introspection to my favorite scenes in the series. Glad you liked it as well!
Date: Sep 18, 2018 7:16 pm Title: Chapter 6
Tough situation as Brian doesn't want to be mothered and Justin can't help it, he has to tell Brian to follow the rules that were given. Even if Justin is in class, I don't see how he could not think about Brian and how he could focus on the subjects he has to learn.
Author's Response:
And the tough situation is about to get a whole lot more complicated...