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Reviewer: Tagsit Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2018 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 8

Yay, Cynthia!  And, lest we forget, Poor Brian. TAG



Author's Response:

Haha...don't worry, you won't forget...I promise. If I wrote the story, chances are it's a "poor Brian" story.;)

Reviewer: Deb Tanner Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 28, 2018 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 8

So sad how difficult it is for Brian to accept that Justin loves him unconditionally since he’s never experienced that before, but he is definitely trying.

The smoothie was a good idea, especially with the ginger added in along with the protein powder. Justin is definitely looking out for his partner.

It’s a good thing he was honest with the nurse and got the prescription. Even better that he’s letting Justin drive him to his appointment and work as well as picking him up at noon.

Ted is a very smart man and knows when to step back and not coddle Brian. That will insure him not losing his head!

Oh my! Brian is in trouble now that Cynthia is demanding answers!

Another great chapter!

*Hugs*

Deb

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 8

It is so hard to witness Brian's intenal struggles. I was happy to see Brian conceded to Justin driving him to his radiation appointment, as they are only going to get harder. 

What had Cynthia's panties in a twist? Was it because Brian was sleeping at noon? Or, does she have another suspicious inkling? Whatever it was, she neeeds to know the truth.

Not that I want a Michael sighting, but does he still have a key to the loft? It would be just like him to breeze into the loft, (at the most inopportune time) like he owned it, when he hasn't seen Brian for a while, especially if he knew Brian was going to Ibiza.

Thanks so much for this update, and can't wait for the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

Michael did just see Brian a few days ago (which was several chapters ago by this point, I think LOL) so hopefully that might hold him off for a while. ;) He does know Brian is back from "Ibiza" but still thinks that's where he went.

And Cynthia will start us off in the next chapter. :)

You're absolutely right that Brian hasn't seen anything yet when it comes to how all of this is going to go...

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 8

If he lets Justin care for him and Ted and Cynthia take care of the business, once he tells Cynthia what's going on, then he'll be able to concentrate on feeling better and deal with the radiation. Think Brian, think. Feeling better is most important.



Author's Response:

But this is Brian...he doesn't concede easily. ;) Part of his charm...haha. It's hard to want him so badly to take care of himself, though...I get it!

Reviewer: SunshineSally Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 8

I was waiting for Cynthia's moment of realisation that something was up, he better be honest with her, damnit, Brian lol.

I really do love your style of writing SO much - it just makes me happy, which is weird to say when this is a cancer story, but it's your attention to detail that I admire.

Justin is seriously so badass in this, I love it. You're letting him be the devoted partner he wanted to be in the show lol.



Author's Response:

I guess we'll find out, won't we? ;) I'm glad the attention to detail isn't "too much." Sometimes I get afraid that I'm getting bogged down in some of that, but I like to paint every bit of the picture, so...yeah. And this Justin! Yes. I love him. He's great. I kind of want to write his POV for a bit too. Maybe he'll do an epilogue for us. We'll see how it feels by the end.

Thank you for always leaving such great comments <3

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 5:34 pm Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter.  Hate that Brian is sick, but that is life and we all have to learn to deal with it.  Your writing is amazing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, mamab <3 I'm glad you're enjoying what I write! You're right that we all do have to learn to deal with it...it happens sometimes. And sometimes it's really, really bad...but we just have to get through it.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 3:16 pm Title: Chapter 8

The beginning is so emotional! The end is predictable: Cynthia couldn't stay away too long.



Author's Response:

I made myself tear up writing the beginning. That's usually when I know I've hit on something powerful...when it hits me as I write it. I'm not sure whether "predictable" here is a good thing or a bad thing. ;) Cynthia already suspects something serious is going on, she's just not sure what it is.

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