Reviews For The Britin Trap
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Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 6:00 am Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

So the plotting begins. I gotta wonder how close you will follow the original story. There's the lamppost to begin with. They just need to get Emmett talking about how they met and some of their past escapades. King of Babylon has memories, too, I know "Save The Last Dance" does too, but not sure if that will bring memories of the fateful prom or the happiness of it. Or maybe, surprise them with a 'get-away' trip to Vermont. Gotta wonder how sneaky they will be. But it was a good thing Gus had the winning argument, otherwise Justin just might have stayed in California.  One thing I'm really curious about, is how was Hairy able to kick them out? His name is only ON the title, he's not soul owner. So that really doesn't make sense to me. I'm sure if Justin called the police in and they heard how Alex spoke about the girls and the names he called them, the police would have escorted Alex from the house.

Looking forward to their arrival to Britin. Hopefully EVERYBODY leaves them the hell alone, and not come bombarding in to see Justin. I have a feeling Michael is going to be VERY unhappy to see Justin back in Brian's life and home.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2018 9:12 am Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

It's good that Justin returns to Pittsburgh, but there is more to his departure, no? The kids will help bring them together for good and get rid of Alex

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

I just love this story so much.  I know you have to have time to write it and as a writer I can't imagine the time it takes to write this.  I love how you got Justin to go back so hopefully the kids ideas will work.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

I'm hoping for the best.  But I can see a lot of stories about good times and one about the real reason Justin left.  I want to see justice done with Justin's house, the yeti should not be allowed to get away with what he's done and I don't think the girls would mind telling all his online friends about it.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

Fantastic chapter.  I know you have some good ideas in mind and can't wait to see where you take them. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

Yeah, so happy to see a new chapter!

Justin is pretty upset and can't be "Sunshined" easily. At least, Brian explained what happened and said he was sorry; that's a big step. Justin took care of him and that's another step.

If they actually all go back to Pittsburgh, they will have plenty of time together as Justin will be off and Brian can work from home.

I hope Justin will fight the yeti as soon as possible.

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