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Reviewer: Fantgirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 18, 2022 10:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

What happened !

Reviewer: Wendy Dawn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 03, 2019 8:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

Aaah-mazing! I loved the twins and all the science stuff. 

You can’t  leave us hanging...does all Gus’ crap fit in the dorm? Is the next Taylor-Kinney a boy like Gus wants? How does the school year go for the girls?

In other words, love the world and characters you created and I would love to revisit them again with an update! Even if it’s a series of shorts to see what the family is up to and what new pranks these smart girls come up with.

Keep up the good work! 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2019 1:08 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

I loved this story! It would be fun to see how Brian and Justin bring a new baby into the mix (hint hint) 😊

Reviewer: jayjaykmm Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:27 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

I would be the first one who would want a brian/justin happily ever after. But now i'm kind of feeling sorry for justin. Sure they belong together but if feels like he should realise it on his own. Not will all these people scheming against him. I mean, he is already dealing with a psychological issue. Adding more to it just seems cruel. 

Now,i hope there is something to be done about the yeti. If both of their name is on the doc then half of that house is justin. I just want him hurt really bad.

Can't say i'm surprised about lindsay and michael's reaction to justin coming back. Where was mel and ben during this? And blake is just a sweetheart. 

Reviewer: Mars Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2018 6:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

Hi Tag, glad you dipped the other story. I like this one. Please make it long...long.. long. I am very much enjoying myself readingThe Britin Trap.

Reviewer: nena20 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2018 9:23 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

I couldn't wait for this ggggreat story to be finished to start to read it but now I highly regret it. I really can't wait to know what happens next, this is soooo good. This swap idea is genius, I'm sure they'll fix their fathers messed up lives

Reviewer: Mars Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 06, 2018 5:45 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

Hi Tagsit, I love your story. The girls are just great. I, too, like the siencey streak of the story. Hopefully, you make this story a really, really long one. Looking forward to the next update. Mars

Reviewer: gotb30 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 5:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

I've always loved this story, and actually attended family summer camp at Bluff Lake, where the movie was filmed (they showed it every year). I love the story already, although it made my heart twist a little when I knew B/J would split up for some years. I'm a bit confused by the twins' look-a-like appearance but with hair the same as their respective fathers, but that will probably be explained later. <3



Author's Response:

That's so cool that you went to the same camp! I'm obviously deviating from that setting, but I hope MY camp will be just as fun to read about. And the mystery of the look-alike girls with different father will be explained as I go. Read on and enjoy! TAG

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 2:07 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

Just what I needed on this dreary Sunday!

I mean I know how the Parent Trap story goes, but I'm a little sad this it started out with the boys just planning a family... I'm already upset wondering what happened. They seemed so happy in the car!

Interesting names for the girls. Any story behind them?  



Author's Response:

My parent trap story will be a little different than the original - I never really liked the storyline that had the parents splitting up a pair of twins like that. So, I'm rewriting the plot my way. Hope you like this version just as well. As to why the boys split . . . well, all will be explained. I promise. TAG

Reviewer: Cricri Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2018 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

Bonjour il me semble que Predec2 a écrit le même type d’histoire en 2011 le titre était Parent Trap. Bonne journée 



Author's Response:

I know that others have written the same type of story. I hope my version will be even better. Thanks for reading! TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

Love love love! What did those boys do? Can't wait to get some backstory lol



Author's Response:

You know Brian and Justin - they just can't help themselves and get into so much trouble... Read on and you'll see. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

What an amazing start! We can already guess that Brian and Justin messed up, but when and why did this happen? Can't wait to read more!!! Please give your muse some incentive.

I loved "Don’t tell me I’ve finally found a way to shut you up after all these years?"



Author's Response:

LOL - glad you found MY favorite line in the chapter too! TAG

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

This should be fun.

Waiting for the back story as to why Justin and Quinna are across the country instead of being in Pittsburgh with Brian and Quinne.

Brian missed seeing his other daughter. How much of a hurry was he in?



Author's Response:

Maybe Brian doesn't know he HAS another daughter, so he wouldn't have immediately noticed her? *wink wink* Happy reading. TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

Oh this is wonderful.  But, sad that our boys must have split up along the line.  I know how well you write so it will get fixed at some point.  Sorry that the summer wasn't good to you.  Do the fun writing and when the time is right, you will return to your other amazing stories.  You are a true writer and it shows in all your stories



Author's Response:

Thanks for bearing with me while my creative juices flow another way. I WILL get back to the other stories. I've never yet failed to finish a story. I just gotta write what I gotta write, though. Happy reading. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 1:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

As always you come up with the good stuff.  All we need is the reason for the split.  I hate when that happens, but it is necessary for the story.  Why did you pick these names for the girls?



Author's Response:

Thank you! The reason for the split is part of the mystery, though, so you're going to have to keep reading to get that answer. And the girls names . . . well, let's just say Justin had something to do with that. Happy reading. TAG

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 7:36 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

OH! So happy to see this new story. I am also one that loves the Parent Trap movies. As a little girl, when the one with Hayley Mills came out, I couldn't get enough of it. (I know, I'm old). When the one with Lindsay Lohan came out, I had 4 young teenagers that I got to enjoy the movie with. It would be kind of fun to see a remake of it again. But your story will more than make up for that. I'm assuming both Brian and Justin donated sperm, as I didn't see an MPREG tag. It will be interesting to see how the demise of their marriage came about, and how they decided on the separation of the girls. I assume Gus will be quite close to Quinne. However it goes, with your writing skills, I know it will be funny and entertaning.

You mentioned writing online and, 'The Britin Trap'. Could you explain all that? Not sure what you are talking about. Thanks for this new story. As much as I was enjoying/not enjoying 'Ugly Mirror', I know that has be a very hard write, as it's hard and painful to read. So, take your time, and I for one will enjoy your amazing take on this wonderful story. Enjoy writing. I look forward to your next installment.

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

All your questions will be answered in the course of the story and, since I don't want to spoil anyone, I'm not going to give away anything here. As for the online writing thing - in case you or others want to follow along with me, I'm going to write this story 'live' online. That means that anyone who has the link can pop into the doc where I'm writing the story and watch as I write, add comments to the story, give me suggestions or correct typos you might find, or even chat with me if we're both online at the same times. I love the instant feedback as well as the company. So, please, feel free to click on the link and stop in anytime. TAG

Reviewer: SandyGale Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 21, 2018 6:25 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids

YAY a new story! Great first chapter. Can't wait to read more. Well done :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm finally feeling inspired to write, so you should have the next chapter soon! Happy reading! TAG

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