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Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2018 2:26 am Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult

I must admit, the mystery of how they got separated is really weighing on me. Alex sounds like an idiot... Please save Justin from him!



Author's Response:

Alex is a HUGE idiot (and mean too, which you'll see soon). Not to worry, though, the girls are on it and going to work hard to figure out a way to get rid of the slimeball. LOL. As for the mystery of what happened between the boys . . . I'm not telling yet. LOL. TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult

Nice to see Auntie Em.  I'm sure he'll be a big help when the girls decide to keep Alex from marrying Justin. 



Author's Response:

I LOVE Auntie Em - I can definitely see Emmett as being the stand by babysitter for Brian in this story. He would totally bond with a little girl, don't you think? LOL. TAG

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult

Emmett is hilarious!!! Justin seems to have found loser n°2 and Brian is lonely as hell. What about the best "friends" Lindsey and Michael? And Daphne? Couldn't she talk some sense to Justin?



Author's Response:

Justin is definitely hooked up with a total loser. I really hate the character I'm having him be engaged to - let's hope the girls come up with a plan to get rid of the idiot. Not sure how much of a role I will have Michael or Lindsey play in this story - they are kinda extraneous in this plot line. But Emmett WILL play a big part - watch this space. LOL. TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult

Oh, this is just wonderful.   Love it, love it, love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I needed something a little more lighthearted myself. Enjoy! TAG

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult

'Hairy all over Alex' ew ew ew! Can't wait til the girls get rid of him and we haven't even met him yet. lol

Loved Emmett being too Aunty Em to notice any difference in the girls to realize Qianna wasn't Quinne. I'm sure he will after he spends some time with her though, right? 

Of course they're brilliant! Look who their fathers are! 



Author's Response:

Wait till you see the pic of Hairy Alex - he's a total loser. Can't wait to find a good way to torture him! LOL. As for Em figuring out the difference between the girls . . . you'll have to keep reading for that one. The girls are pretty smart and pretty tricky too... TAG

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 8:34 am Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult

And... the first inkling has been set into their subconsciousWhat the Hell is Justin thinking... "Hairy all over Alex? Uses all the hot water when he stays over Alex?” a yeti, a dope hipster dude...  UGH! He must really be bitter over his and Brian's breakup.

Brian doesn't appear to be doing too well with an absentee daughter. Nice to know he gave up his stud status for raising his kids. And he's bitter about dating...  Hmm...  Why do I get the feeling that this is the reason for B/J's breakup? I know they had the weekly 'date night', but maybe that was supposed to change once the girls were born? (just speculating) The breakup just seems so unlikely the way the story started and Brian had begged Justin to come back from New York.  The girls had to have been VERY young, so that their marriage couldn't have lasted that long... Two Years, maybe?

I liked that it was Qianna that got to talk to Emmett. She needed something he brought to her, after her talk to Justin. So, Qianna is also an artist... Interesting. Glad the girls won their first competion.

Not sure what you meant about, this story is not going to be the same as you think you know, so I want you to know I'm in for the long haul as I'm really liking it. I tried to think of how it could be different, yet get them to the same place, just can't come up with anything. It's certainly gonna be fun though.

Thanks for this latest chapter, and I'm looking forward for the next update.

XOXO ~ Cathy



Author's Response:

I personally detest Alex - he is as horrible as the girls think. You might be right that Justin is still reeling from losing Brian and therefore he's gone a little over the edge. We'll see. As for Brian, well, he's still TRYING to be the same old stud, but I don't think that's his real self. Again, we'll see. Off to write the more sciency parts so I can get you a little closer to solving the mystery of how the girls came about and how Brian and Justin broke up... Happy reading. TAG

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