Date: Nov 04, 2018 2:41 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
Hi lady:
I finally have some big chunks of time to read and chose this story. So enjoying your take and can't wait to see how you are going to get the "boys' together and of course, how the girls are going to figure it out. Off to read some more
Date: Oct 02, 2018 3:18 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
Nice update! I think I'd have a ball on that hike... but I'd have to find some other way back down, LOL!
A few little hints about mystery mother...
Date: Oct 01, 2018 5:42 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
My only request is that you please find a way ro get rid of Sasquatch, Jr. QUICKLY! I want so badly to replace his shampoo with Nair and hot grits mixed with lye. The grits and lye worked to straighten Al Green's former stinking thinking right on up, just saying . Great story!
Happy writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Sep 30, 2018 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
They're getting closer to finding their answers than they know. Brian let his hurt and regret slip which Quinne pickef up on. Going to be interesting to hear what Justin has to say about his friend Lizette Richards.
Brian so misses and loves his daughter. You can feel it. You did a great job getting that across.
Once Justin innocently fills in the missing puzzle pieces so to speak, Hairy Alex is going to have to work really hard on keeping his place in Justin's life. The girls are going to make hiz life a living hell and they're not even there. Ha, can't wait for that.
This camp to at sounds like a great place.
Date: Sep 30, 2018 8:06 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
Another great chapter. This is such a very good story. If Quinne has access to a computer, why aren't the girls googling their fathers? They're both successful, they should be able to learn something on the men. Especially Brian, what with owning Kinnetik. That would lead them to other search engines. The prom for one. Maybe some pictures. HEY! I wonder if Qianna is aware of the bashing!?
I DO NOT like Ugly, Hairy Alex. EEW! I bet he doesn't tell his FIANCE his daughter called. Justin should learn to take his phone in the bathroom with him. Still can't see why Justin would even give the guy a second glance. After having Brian, he's really lowered his standards. He should have a lot of men to pick from being he lives in California.
When they switch, who's the first to realize it? I'm thinking Gus, kids are usually more observant, but Aunti Em has a real connection to Quinne. So, I'm thinking it could be him, too.
Quinne gave Qianna some good advice regarding not settling on a just a pretty boy. That the mind is important, too. That's why Brian and Justin worked so well. It's still driving me nuts trying to come up with a reason why they split. Again, I can only think, 'Getting your needs met'. Hmm... unless it's due to the fact Lizette went back on the surrogacy agreement.
Thanks for the update, and I'm already wanting another chapter of these amazing girls.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Sep 30, 2018 6:20 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
First clue and that's a big one! When will they use google?
Hairy man seems like a mean guy, but he should be careful.
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2018 4:26 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
I'm wondering if Hairy Alex will tell Justin that his daughter called? Brian almost gave things away but his daughter didn't catch the slip. I'm going to enjoy what happens when they try to wreck the wedding.
Author's Response:
A slimeball like Hairy Alex wouldn't do something nice like telling Justin his daughter called. I'm going to enjoy watching them ruin the wedding too! LOL. TAG
Date: Sep 30, 2018 3:54 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
Love these girls! Hmmmm an evasive Brian....weird. That Alex is an asshole! Lol The suragotte shouldn't be too hard to find for these two smarties, especially since they have her name.
Oh TAG, I don't see this in my google docs anymore. Are you no longer sharing?
Author's Response:
Yeah, the Brian thing . . . why won't he tell Quinne about his surrogate? That's really odd, huh? LOL. You're right though that these two smart girls will figure it all out. TAG
PS. not sure what happened with the online link. I'll repost it at the end of this chapter again Sorry about that.)
Date: Sep 30, 2018 3:35 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
This story is beyond wonderful. What a fantastic idea you had thinking of this. And Hairy Alex is really weird. Can't wait til he gets pushed off the Kinney Cliff or whatever you do with him.
Author's Response:
We DEFINITELY need to push Hairy Alex off a cliff. Great idea! LOL. Glad you're enjoying the story. TAG