Date: Oct 10, 2018 2:31 am Title: Chapter 7 - Let's Try and Figure This Out
Oh no, Em, why did you decide to clam up when Sparky needs tips?
Date: Oct 07, 2018 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Let's Try and Figure This Out
Another little clue and more questions I think the dads are going to be harder nuts to crack
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2018 7:59 am Title: Chapter 7 - Let's Try and Figure This Out
The girls are moving quickly in their thinking and we also need to know why Brian did have his daughter only at 3 months. Is this the same for Justin? And Emmett who does not speak but I can understand it. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: Oct 07, 2018 3:11 am Title: Chapter 7 - Let's Try and Figure This Out
Hmmm... so the boys really don't realize that the girls are twins???? But the girls' names are so similar and very unique. That can't be a coincidence. And why would it be 3 months before Brian got custody? I don't trust the mysterious Lizette... even though she was apparently a friend or acquaintance of Justin's. Could she be the source of all the problems? Is she playing a con game? Could she even be the reason the boys separated? Curiouser, and curiouser.
On a side note, was Lindsay's sister's name on the show Lisette?
Good for Emmett! He's a man of his word!
[Report This]Date: Oct 07, 2018 2:59 am Title: Chapter 7 - Let's Try and Figure This Out
Darn, Emmy Lou is made of sterner stuff than I thought. Oh well, you've got something planned I'm sure. Love the diagogue.
Date: Oct 07, 2018 12:10 am Title: Chapter 7 - Let's Try and Figure This Out
Okay, nice list the girls have going. Also, they came up with the idea that Brian and Justin didn't know about there being twins. They should have asked themselves, "How would they not know?" and if they were already broke up, "How did each father get one of the twins?" But then again, if Quinne was three months old, how old was Qianna when Justin got her? It's a Mystery!
So Emmett only spilled a few beans. What does Gus remember? I'd say that's their next best option. Gus was apparently really close to Justin, and at six he should remember Justin. And I pretty sure he would know when Brian got a sister for him. Or, they are going to have to find Lizette, or pump Justin for more information.
Well you've got intrigue going. I'm thoroughly enjoying the story. Thanks for the update, and I'm definitely looking forward to the next one.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 06, 2018 9:37 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Let's Try and Figure This Out
Well these little detectives are moving right along aren't they? Lol They've got quite the list going. Too bad Emmett wasn't very forthcoming with them but who can blame him? He'd have to face the wrath of Brian otherwise. I think it was hilarious that Em didn't know his 'other' niece was speaking to him & not Quinne. Okay now, what kind of action can they have at Science Camp?? Lol
Date: Oct 06, 2018 9:10 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Let's Try and Figure This Out
I like it any way that you write it. When I read it, I feel like I am on a roller coaster waiting for the next climb or fall. This is so good that I am ranking it up there with Time Blitz and you know that I loved it beyond belief. Fantastic writing. I feel like each chapter is a cliffhanger and can't wait to see what it next.