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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2018 2:36 am Title: Chapter 8 - We Have To Tread Lightly

Thanks to Gus, they have confirmation that Brian and Justin knew each other.

 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 3:15 am Title: Chapter 8 - We Have To Tread Lightly

Hmm... If Brian didn't get Quinne until she was three months, and Emmett had said NOBODY was aware of Quinne until Brian brought her home, that must mean nobody is aware of Qianna. Because if Debbie or Emmett were aware of her, I hardly think they would have let Justin go off and stay in California. So IMO, I would say Brian and Justin aren't aware that their daughter is a product of a twin. Which leads right back to Lizette. Why didn't she contact Brian until three months after the baby was born? Had she planned to keep one? Since Justin was her friend, maybe she gave him one, and kept the other. The girls would have had to have some very significant different features that Lizette could tell who was who. Hair color changes so easily when a child is a young baby.

Anyway, good to know Gus still remembered Justin. But too bad it didn't lead to any other disclosure, except for a time-line verification.

So, who's this Chase kid?  Seems like he is playing the girls against each other. Or does he honestly like both of them as he can relate to each of them, but in different ways?

Stella is a great friend. Her enthusiasm really wears off on a person. She's found the perfect DNA test, so now all we have to do is sit back and wait for the tests to arrive. Maybe Brian will find this charge just as important as Prada.

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 1:29 am Title: Chapter 8 - We Have To Tread Lightly

Can't decide which twin Chase had the crush on, LOL!

Very sweet that Gus remembers drawing with Justin.

And I think Lindsay's sister's name in the series was Lynette.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 12:44 am Title: Chapter 8 - We Have To Tread Lightly

And the plot thickens even more. That Stella is a very smart & creative girl! Glad the twins have her helping them.

Now Gus....I hope they decide to tell him soon but maybe he'd get mad at Brain & the girls would rather they confront their dads and not Gus. Hmmm this is so great! 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 08, 2018 12:26 am Title: Chapter 8 - We Have To Tread Lightly

I'm looking forward to them switching places to stop Justin's wedding.  Will that be happening soon?

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 8 - We Have To Tread Lightly

Ok. I don't know why they separated  , but I can guess about the girls. They think there is only one baby and Justin will raise it  . Babies are born . Justin gets his daughter , the only one he thinks.  The surrogate  kept Brian's as her own,  maybe ? Her husband made her give the baby to Brian and since three months had gone by Brian thinks Justin did want the baby and gave it back.



Author's Response:

You're getting warmer . . . LOL. TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 07, 2018 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 8 - We Have To Tread Lightly

Not me.  I am totally stumped.  I keep running it thru my mind and it is blank which is unusual for me.  So I am waiting patiently for more clues.  Just adore this story and your writing.



Author's Response:

I'm glad to hear I'm stumping at least one reader. Happy to have you along for the ride. TAG

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