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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2018 2:07 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Time To Chase Chase?

Both fathers will have a huge surprise very soon and Emmett will be delighted.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2018 1:48 am Title: Chapter 9 - Time To Chase Chase?

I'm glad the sisters made up.  I do think that it would be fun for Chase to have both girls' attention at the same time.  Make him feel special before bidding him adieu. 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2018 12:45 am Title: Chapter 9 - Time To Chase Chase?

Before I start, right above the picture of the mens loafers, you wrote, "Meanwhile, Brian and Quinne went on a fantasy shoe shopping extravaganza"...  it should be Brian and Qianna.

Also, standing in line to get into the Apple Store, Qianna said to Chase, "I'm really glad you're going to me (should be 'be') in my group, though."

 

I really enjoyed this chapter. I was wondering if a jealousy issue would arise between the girls after reading the last chapter, and they both seemed interested in Chase. I have to wonder if Quinne texted that message on purpose. Seems like it. 

You mentioned Qianna saying that she wanted them to spend the few weeks together... how long have they been at camp, and how long is left?  I loved that they traded fathers during this wedding crap. Qianna hates Alex so much, that she wouldn't be able to even reply or make a suggestion to Justin.  Where, pray tell, did you find such a truly horrific picture of a corsage?

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2018 12:17 am Title: Chapter 9 - Time To Chase Chase?

I love your inner science geek.  It is really interesting to read and fun.  Love the girls and this story.  Great job.

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