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Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?

It's been fun spending the summer with the girls, but I'm ready for some Brian & Justin too! 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 2:07 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?

As soon as I read, “I saw in a movie once where this boy pierced his by himself using a needle,”  I figured I knew where the title of this chapter came from, only to discover it was due to the upcoming awards ceremony. My middle daughter had kind of a rebellious nature wen she was younger, and she showed it by self-piercing her belly button. Yeah, Qianna's gonna have a little discomfort for awhile.

As for Molly's name turning up on the "DNA Match" list, how is that possible? Is Molly maybe not Craig's daughter? Wouldn't that just chap old Craig Taylor's ass? And just how did Molly end up as such an entitled bitch, thinking she was better than Jennifer and Justin? I can't imagine how hurt Jen was from that. I hope the girls get responses back from Devin and Malina, maybe leading them to Lizette.

I'm sure the girls will find out a way to thwart the confrontation between Brian and Justin. Maybe one of the girls will have to deflect from camp early. Hmm... Quinne DOES have Brian's credit card.

Looking forward to more of the Junior Detectives.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2018 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?

You had to throw an award ceremony didn't you.  Surely when the awards are given out and their names are called, that's going to be the toughest obstacle.  Unless they use alias like Pooh Bear?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2018 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?

That's sure is going to put a huge constraint on their plan.

I hope Justin will open his eyes and eventually talk to Alex and demand to be heard.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2018 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?

Wow, this is so wonderful.  Just love your writing.  It is getting to the good part where Brian & Justin get involved one way or another.  Can't wait !!!

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