Date: Nov 04, 2018 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
so throughly enjoying this tale. I have read several parent trap stories and enjoyed all of them- this is no exception- l love all the sciency stuff - way over my head- social service is my field- but you have done a great job with the explanations. - NoNoWriMo- started 5 days ago so can't wait to read your next work- but please finish this one soon- I'm loving it
Date: Oct 31, 2018 8:42 am Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
I got bind on my reading, and realize you had two chapters written. So this me, just sayng what a marvelous job you did on the Award Ceremony Diversion. How you wrote all thise kids' antics, had me awed with their ingenuity. Pretty smart for some kids.
Well, I'm off to find out what Trevor's fate holds for him. How dare he pour water over Brian Kinney's Hair! He apparently didn't realize how vain Brian is. His Hair! Lord have mercy. It was hilarious, though!
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 30, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
Omg I am still laughing with the scene with Brian and the girls laughing so much. I agree poor Trevor will need to go into witness protection 🤣🤣â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Date: Oct 30, 2018 2:03 am Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
Ha! Those kids are pretty clever, LOL!
I love the little hint at recognition when Justin heard just a little bit of Brian's voice. Can't wait to see what happens when the girls head home!
Ooh! Looking forward to the NaNoWriMo story too!
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2018 12:30 am Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
Wow. You managed that well. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
Date: Oct 29, 2018 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
This chapter was fantastic. I could just picture all the events and Brian when his precious hair got wet. So funny. I am so happy that you are writing with Sally as you two do an awesome job together and will wait patiently for updates on our delightful twins. I know you would never let a story go unfinished. Just the idea of a new story and rest of this one makes me happy. Great job.
Author's Response:
I'll do my best to juggle everything... (famous last words) Thanks for trusting in me. TAG
Date: Oct 29, 2018 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
Hilarious! Brian and his hair: nobody messes with that!
Author's Response:
I Know, right? OMG, I'm worried for Trevor's wellbeing. LOL! But it was the only thing that would have kept Brian from figuring out about the plan, so it had to be done. TAG