Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 4:54 am Title: Chapter 14 - We’re Doing This!

Well done!!!

Brian did see something; I'm wondering if he will say it to someone.

Not drawing should be a red flag, the idea of an injury is great, but they better be super careful as a reflex could happen and crash their project.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2018 9:51 am Title: Chapter 14 - We’re Doing This!

Stay hydrated. Bring snacks to keep your energy level up. Wear comfortable shoes. Oh, and I’ also suggest bringing a book or something to help entertain yourself for when he gets lost in the shoe department ... Sounds like Brian is still Brian, maybe even a little worse.

 

“I had no idea your dad could eat that much. Actually, I didn’t know ANYONE could eat that much. How does he do it and not weigh, like, a thousand pounds    .....    Dad’s got amazing metabolic powers. Just don’t get between him and his dinner plate unless you want to lose a finger or two ... Sounds like Justin still has his voracious appetite, and twink physique.

 

Well, they're off! Is it wrong for me to be more concerned for Quinne, rather than Qianna? After all, it's Quinne who is going to have to deal with the 'other' fur beast. But who better to step up to the plate, than a Kinney?

 

Great story. Have fun with  yours and Sally's combined geniusness, as you write for NaNoWriMo.

 

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2018 12:43 am Title: Chapter 14 - We’re Doing This!

Trying to figure who will figure out the switch first... I'm guessing Emmett!

And nice to see Brian have a little bit of emotion looking at Justin's signature, just like Justin reacted to the sound of Brian's voice in the auditorium. There is still a connection there.

 

Author's Response:

There’s always gonna be a connection.  It’s in there souls Dash they can’t escape from it .... TAG