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Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2018 1:09 am Title: Chapter 15 - Let’s Just Hope The Masquerade Holds

Oy! Justin??? Where are you??? He had better get his head out of his ass pretty soon! I certainly hope Alex the Yeti gets the heave-ho soon!

Sgt Schultz? Brian is really showing his age with that one, LOL!

Great installment... looking forward to the next - and whatever you're working on for the NaNoWriMo!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 5:06 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Let’s Just Hope The Masquerade Holds

The girls will have to switch sooner when Hairy does something that requires more than one of them to put him in his place.  I think Em will notice a difference and be pulled in.  Still wonder what was the cause of the breakup. 

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 1:55 pm Title: Chapter 15 - Let’s Just Hope The Masquerade Holds

Hey, loved this chapter so much! Sorry I haven't been around much lately...my brother passed a little over a week ago...and I haven't been very present as of late. And I don't know how often I will be, one day at a time, ya know? 

Anyway, of course Brian has only met 1 blonde who was smart enough to break thru the stereotype & he was so smart it scared the fuck out of him, duh Justin! Hoping Qianna realized that. 

Hae fun with NaNo!



Author's Response:

Oh, Glo, I’m so sorry for your loss. It’s hard to come back to your normal life after something like that. Just be kind to yourself and give yourself whatever time you need. And read a lot of happy fanfic too - that’s always therapeutic. TAG

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 11:49 am Title: Chapter 15 - Let’s Just Hope The Masquerade Holds

Wonderful chapter.  Really, really don't like Alex, but I think the girls will get rid of him.  At least I hope so.  Need to get Brian & Justin back together and the suspense is killing me on what broke them up.  Have fun with the NaNo !!!!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 10:04 am Title: Chapter 15 - Let’s Just Hope The Masquerade Holds

I can not wait to read what Quinne will find to get rid of Hairy Alex. Brian looks like a cool dad finally. Justin does not want his baby to grow up. I really want to know what happened so badly between them.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 7:30 am Title: Chapter 15 - Let’s Just Hope The Masquerade Holds

Hairy is definitely on the trash list! What a mean moron! I hope they will come back with a devilish plan to kick him out. Ligh laxative in his food, itching powder in his pants, buy new size of his clothes, shoes (up or down), look into his past, he must have some skeleton in the closet, find out what he hates and buy it for Justin, mess with his calendar and change some meetings, try to hit on him on social media and start a new romance that will break his couple with Justin, ...

Regarding their hair, they better buy dye to "simulate" their new color or it will be weird that their hair don't grow with their natural color.

The cat could be a problem.



Author's Response:

Oooooo - great list of ideas here! I may use one or two or all of them.... thanks! TAG

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2018 7:17 am Title: Chapter 15 - Let’s Just Hope The Masquerade Holds

What could she do to stop it?   Quinn should tell Justin she caught Alex in her room during the night. Give the smarmy bastard a taste of his own medicine. I can see where it would be Justin that would take the offense of the color of the hair, the hardest. Lots of young girls want to try the 'blonde' look, but rarely will a blonde dye her hair brown. (especially in California.) And Justin has always prided that blonde look. Besides, he doesn't like the thought of his 'baby' growing up, and making decisions of her own. He's already had to deal with her swearing, getting her ears pierced, and her being down right rude to Alex.

I'm happy at least things are going well for Qianna. For how long though? Brian might be laid back now, but what about when he finds out about the two different girls?

Happy Writing!  Thanks for the update.

XOXO ~ Cathy

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