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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2018 7:45 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

Well, one down, two to go. You must have really had busy fingers this week. Me? I beta'd twenty chapters. :(

Loved the enclosed photos. I don't think I've ever seen the one from Baxter's party. Lord, I really never thought Randy looked THAT young! And, I REALLY don't remember his pants being that low!  It was a WOW moment.

I was impressed with the newspaper article you wrote, but I certainly caught the use of the word, 'alleged'. That whole episode still rangles me. I think it was so bogusly written.And I'm further surprised and impressed by Brians 'Sunshine' box of memories. Although the fact he STILL has the scarf...  But, speaking of the scarf, where was it, during the picture?

And OMG! I knew if one of the girls could get the best of Alex, it would have to be Quinne, as I just don't think Qianna is as devious as Quinne is. But growing up with Brian Kinney, would do that to her. And yes, you must have had a blast with your research. I stupidly looked up the itching powder. My first thought was that it would be various ingredients. And I thought, WHY the hell would anyone want to make itching powder, and what would they use it for? I guess those thoughts are still there, as even though it's dried flowers, what would anybody need with information like that?  Unfortunately, I couldn't leave well enough alone, and had to read the questions below the article, and someone asked, "How can I make someone itch from their shampoo?"  Pray tell, what kind of sick people do we have in this world? LOL... Although, that is one way Quinne could use it!

Thoroughly enjoyed all the old memories, and had a hoot with Quinne. And yes, I do believe wholeheartedly, that Brian and Justin still love each other.

Almost to the bottom of the chapter, you had, "Quine (forgot an 'n') started to laugh...

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2018 2:43 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

What a happy little surprise - to see the update, I mean. I'm sure Alex wasn't very thrilled with his surprises! But I am really concerned that Justin is so blind to just how creepy, creepy Alex is. What could he be thinking???

And the mystery behind the girls' separation has become even deeper. I'm guessing the duel wedding dates is a clue, but not one my brain can figure out

Looking forward to reading whichever story you decide to update next!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2018 2:42 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

AMAZING, WONDERFUL, FANTASTIC and that is just the beginning of what I think of this chapter.  You have no idea how happy I am when I see a new chapter posted on this story or Stylite.  I have read stories all of my life and your writing is some of the best I have ever read.  Combined with Sally, you two are the best.  Thank you for making my days so happy.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 6:27 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

Those were evil awful brilliant  ideas, I would normally save them for Michael. 

 

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

Bwahahahahahahahahaha!

 



Author's Response:

Bwahahahahaha! TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

Darn now we have to wait to find out why they split.  How will hairy Alex take it when he checks his instagram account? How will Justin take it?

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

It's great to see the pictures that Brian kept. Those were really specific of epic moments. It's weird that Gus doesn't remember much.

Regarding the pranks, here is the rest of what I suggested: "buy new size of his clothes, shoes (up or down), look into his past, he must have some skeleton in the closet, find out what he hates and buy it for Justin, mess with his calendar and change some meetings, try to hit on him on social media and start a new romance that will break his couple with Justin".

I see that he resumed his mean pranks, so go ahead and hit him hard! Make him sufferrrrrrrrrrrrr! For the Mousetraps, maybe Justin will not find this as fun as we do.

Reviewer: Glo Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

Loved all of Brian's Sunshine memorabilia. I think Gus was impressed & shocked too. 

Go Quinne! Yay get that hairy asshole! Cannot wait to see the results of that! He deserves it all, how dare he try to scald 'QiQi'. What a prick! 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 03, 2018 9:51 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends

It was very funny. Thanks for all the research you have done the result is pretty terrifying hahaha! I hope that Alex will be quickly off.

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