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Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 06, 2018 9:02 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father

I have to agree with Gus and Qianna. I think Lindsay knows more that what she said. First, she said that she thought it was a promise of a new job in California. A couple minutes later, she said, and the lure of a Hollywood job was stronger than a baby and a life of domestication in The Pitts. Am I reading too much into this? Because she went from thinking Justin might have gone to California, to saying he was in California with a job in animation. How does she know that's where he is, and that's the type of job he has? What makes her think he's not in New York, painting under a pseudonym? Besides, WE know Justin was in on the baby planning, so it wasn't an attempt for Brian to try and get Justin back. Also, I hardly doubt it was nine months after Justin left, that Brian brought Quinne home. Didn't anyone think of that? It seems the twelve-year-olds, are better sleuths than the rest of the family.

 

Boy-oh-boy! Justin really has his head in the clouds. NO WAY do you take the side of your fiance, partner, or husband, against your own child. He's not even attempting to listen to Quinne. And it's a little harsh accusing her of poisoning the brownies. Christ! She just added a little extra chocolate. After all, it was only a laxative, not, poison. She didn't powder sugar them with boric acid and a powdered sugar mix. And he's failing to see the humor in it, as Quinne put the note there, telling him to not eat them. And just HOW could the doctor tell he'd ingested laxatives? Just maybe, Alex took them himself, trying to get Quinne in trouble.

Looking forward to Qianna's night with Aunty Em. Will he be anymore forthcoming?

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 10:13 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father

Yes I hate Alex so much and Justin is so blind. Did Gus and Quianna let Brian discover something? He's pretty clever. I wonder what has separated them and who can help them discover and bring them together.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 05, 2018 1:31 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father

I never took Justin for being stupid, but it seems he is.  Now what was done by who that broke them up?  I'm dying here.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2018 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father

I Usually hate Mikey, but Alex is much worse.  Can't imagine Justin not being smart enough to see what he really is.  And, I don't think the "love is blind" thing is it.  Your cliffhangers are amazing and keeping us on the edge of our seats.  Great job.  Fantastic writing.

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 04, 2018 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father

I hate Alex a lot and Justin is still blind.

Gus and Qianna had a near miss that had Brian suspecting something. They really should be more careful.

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