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Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 09, 2018 6:19 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

Excellent! From Emmett going all Dom demanding the truth, to Brian tricking his daughter during the call and Brian laughing during Qianna's explanation: delightful! Add a few "Honeycutt" poking, the LSD joke from Brian to Emmett, you made my day!

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 08, 2018 8:02 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

Hey Tag.  I had way too much laughing going on in this chapter. Emmett's flair for the dramatic, and, well, Brian just totally cracked me up. First, the I'm not getting married, then the LSD comment. Then the laughter enthused, and I had to laugh at the stupidity of everyone laughing and NOT know what they were laughing about. And I really laughed at Quinne's exurberance about 'Itchy Alex'. I wonder if the cream stinks... Hmm...

I've been thinking about Justin's reaction, and I don't think he's gonna be too forthcoming. Not only is he so very mad at Quinne right now, what is his reaction going to be when He learns that it wasn't HIS daughter who was the fouled-mouthed hellion doing all those things to Alex? I think he's going to go through the roof when he realizes it was actually BRIAN'S daughter. Will he believe the girls devised the plan? Now that the gig is up, and they know in Pittsburgh, is Quinne going to have to come clean and have Justin take her home? And, I can just picture Alex's sneer. He will probably try and talk Justin into sending Qianna away to boarding school, or something.

I realized the emails the girls sent out a long time ago, they still haven't heard from the one marked, MollT, have they? I suppose if she makes herself known, there will be a new wave of problems, after all this excitement.

About you focusing on The Britin Trap, I vote for you writing where your muse takes you. If it's writing about our plotting girls, go for it. If it's writing about quirky Justin, then that's what you spend your itchy fingers on. I enjoy both stories, so any update is a positive. Thanks for all the writing lately,

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

Reviewer: NoChaser Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

So, Brian and Justin weren't keeping the twins apart since they didn't know there was a twin! Interesting. I'm developing a theory about what happened and I soooo want to share to I see if I'm right, but don't want to ruin it if I'm right! Damn, I hate that. But the key is the surrogate... and Lindsay. Hmmm.............

I so love this kind of intrigue. And I'm going to love the holy hell that rains down on everyone when the truth of what happened comes out. Bwwaahaaaaaaaaa......... 

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 9:49 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

Oh great Brian laughs so everything is fine !! He did not know that there were twins, so what happened? I'm looking forward to seeing the whole family finally reunited. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:26 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

Great update. So glad Brian is laughing and I hope it will be resolved soon.  Love them together and want them where they each belong.  

Reviewer: chadmom63 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:12 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

Oh this was great!!  Can’t wait to see what Brian does!

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 3:05 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

Okay, from what I gather Brian didn't know there were twins.  If I didn't know better I would think Mikey was involved in some way.  He and Hairy Alex would get along fine.

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 2:48 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

I think Brian's reaction was perfect! He was too impressed with the girls' inventiveness to be angry!

Can't wait to see the big reveal when Justin finds out. But apparently, the boys didn't know about the twins. That's probably why the girls were able to get away with the switch for as long as they did. 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2018 12:41 am Title: Chapter 20 - Pay Attention Here...

This was wonderful.  Somehow, I felt that Brian would take it well.  Now we wait AGAIN (LOL) to see how Justin deals with it.  I can see a happy ending coming at some point.  As for Stylite, I happily wait for chapters on either story so no problem.  I couldn't write one at a time so you are doing great.

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