Date: Dec 06, 2018 6:01 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Yeah, this cliffhanger is a great meanie!!! But so happy that you're back with this story.
Date: Dec 06, 2018 3:59 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
After Gus, Emmett: the switch was bound to be discovered. Excellent cliffhanger!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2018 10:05 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
I'm really anxious to know how Em will react after this news and how it will help Q. Great chapter and I like the nails too
Date: Dec 06, 2018 9:53 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Oh Lordy All To Hell! I gather Em got a hold of someone in California, and they must have faxed him a reply, along with a wedding invitation. I tend to think our darling Emmett is a little more than pissed. Maybe he won't be quite so eager to help the girls out.
Saying that, I wonder how much Qianna is going to LOVE Em after this?
Yay, I'm all caught up. Just have seven more WIP chapters to read. This was fun though. I got a lot, all at once.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 06, 2018 9:02 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
I have to agree with Gus and Qianna. I think Lindsay knows more that what she said. First, she said that she thought it was a promise of a new job in California. A couple minutes later, she said, and the lure of a Hollywood job was stronger than a baby and a life of domestication in The Pitts. Am I reading too much into this? Because she went from thinking Justin might have gone to California, to saying he was in California with a job in animation. How does she know that's where he is, and that's the type of job he has? What makes her think he's not in New York, painting under a pseudonym? Besides, WE know Justin was in on the baby planning, so it wasn't an attempt for Brian to try and get Justin back. Also, I hardly doubt it was nine months after Justin left, that Brian brought Quinne home. Didn't anyone think of that? It seems the twelve-year-olds, are better sleuths than the rest of the family.
Boy-oh-boy! Justin really has his head in the clouds. NO WAY do you take the side of your fiance, partner, or husband, against your own child. He's not even attempting to listen to Quinne. And it's a little harsh accusing her of poisoning the brownies. Christ! She just added a little extra chocolate. After all, it was only a laxative, not, poison. She didn't powder sugar them with boric acid and a powdered sugar mix. And he's failing to see the humor in it, as Quinne put the note there, telling him to not eat them. And just HOW could the doctor tell he'd ingested laxatives? Just maybe, Alex took them himself, trying to get Quinne in trouble.
Looking forward to Qianna's night with Aunty Em. Will he be anymore forthcoming?
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 06, 2018 7:45 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
Well, one down, two to go. You must have really had busy fingers this week. Me? I beta'd twenty chapters. :(
Loved the enclosed photos. I don't think I've ever seen the one from Baxter's party. Lord, I really never thought Randy looked THAT young! And, I REALLY don't remember his pants being that low! It was a WOW moment.
I was impressed with the newspaper article you wrote, but I certainly caught the use of the word, 'alleged'. That whole episode still rangles me. I think it was so bogusly written.And I'm further surprised and impressed by Brians 'Sunshine' box of memories. Although the fact he STILL has the scarf... But, speaking of the scarf, where was it, during the picture?
And OMG! I knew if one of the girls could get the best of Alex, it would have to be Quinne, as I just don't think Qianna is as devious as Quinne is. But growing up with Brian Kinney, would do that to her. And yes, you must have had a blast with your research. I stupidly looked up the itching powder. My first thought was that it would be various ingredients. And I thought, WHY the hell would anyone want to make itching powder, and what would they use it for? I guess those thoughts are still there, as even though it's dried flowers, what would anybody need with information like that? Unfortunately, I couldn't leave well enough alone, and had to read the questions below the article, and someone asked, "How can I make someone itch from their shampoo?" Pray tell, what kind of sick people do we have in this world? LOL... Although, that is one way Quinne could use it!
Thoroughly enjoyed all the old memories, and had a hoot with Quinne. And yes, I do believe wholeheartedly, that Brian and Justin still love each other.
Almost to the bottom of the chapter, you had, "Quine (forgot an 'n') started to laugh...
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Date: Dec 06, 2018 2:55 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
I waited very impatiently for you to write your Nanowrimi and am so glad that you are back to this story. I hope Em is willing to help the girls and I can't wait to see what you have going next.
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2018 1:40 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Let's hope that Emmett can supply answers now that he knows who the groom is. I'm dying to find out why they split!
Date: Dec 06, 2018 12:45 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Before it's over all the gang will be helping the Qs! Love this... and oh, yeah... You Are Evil! 🤨
Date: Dec 06, 2018 12:08 am Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
OK, Brian Kinney. Stop trying to throw us off of the famous Kinney cliff. Wonderful chapter. Getting closer to some answers and Em is just the person to move things along. Thank you for your wonderful thoughts and sharing them with us. Even if you are having too much fun.
Date: Dec 05, 2018 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 19 - Time To Spill
Love those toenails!! Em's the best!
Everything is coming together & coming out! Lol So I assume QiQi is going to come clean now right?
Here's hoping Lizzie responds.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2018 10:13 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
Yes I hate Alex so much and Justin is so blind. Did Gus and Quianna let Brian discover something? He's pretty clever. I wonder what has separated them and who can help them discover and bring them together.
[Report This]Date: Dec 05, 2018 1:31 am Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
I never took Justin for being stupid, but it seems he is. Now what was done by who that broke them up? I'm dying here.
Date: Dec 04, 2018 9:45 pm Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
I Usually hate Mikey, but Alex is much worse. Can't imagine Justin not being smart enough to see what he really is. And, I don't think the "love is blind" thing is it. Your cliffhangers are amazing and keeping us on the edge of our seats. Great job. Fantastic writing.
Date: Dec 04, 2018 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 18 - You Know Your Father
I hate Alex a lot and Justin is still blind.
Gus and Qianna had a near miss that had Brian suspecting something. They really should be more careful.
Date: Dec 04, 2018 2:43 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
What a happy little surprise - to see the update, I mean. I'm sure Alex wasn't very thrilled with his surprises! But I am really concerned that Justin is so blind to just how creepy, creepy Alex is. What could he be thinking???
And the mystery behind the girls' separation has become even deeper. I'm guessing the duel wedding dates is a clue, but not one my brain can figure out
Looking forward to reading whichever story you decide to update next!
Date: Dec 04, 2018 2:42 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
AMAZING, WONDERFUL, FANTASTIC and that is just the beginning of what I think of this chapter. You have no idea how happy I am when I see a new chapter posted on this story or Stylite. I have read stories all of my life and your writing is some of the best I have ever read. Combined with Sally, you two are the best. Thank you for making my days so happy.
Date: Dec 03, 2018 6:27 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
Those were evil awful brilliant ideas, I would normally save them for Michael.
Date: Dec 03, 2018 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
Bwahahahahahahahahaha!
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Bwahahahahaha! TAG
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2018 5:08 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
Darn now we have to wait to find out why they split. How will hairy Alex take it when he checks his instagram account? How will Justin take it?
Date: Dec 03, 2018 4:06 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
It's great to see the pictures that Brian kept. Those were really specific of epic moments. It's weird that Gus doesn't remember much.
Regarding the pranks, here is the rest of what I suggested: "buy new size of his clothes, shoes (up or down), look into his past, he must have some skeleton in the closet, find out what he hates and buy it for Justin, mess with his calendar and change some meetings, try to hit on him on social media and start a new romance that will break his couple with Justin".
I see that he resumed his mean pranks, so go ahead and hit him hard! Make him sufferrrrrrrrrrrrr! For the Mousetraps, maybe Justin will not find this as fun as we do.
Date: Dec 03, 2018 1:41 pm Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
Loved all of Brian's Sunshine memorabilia. I think Gus was impressed & shocked too.
Go Quinne! Yay get that hairy asshole! Cannot wait to see the results of that! He deserves it all, how dare he try to scald 'QiQi'. What a prick!
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2018 9:51 am Title: Chapter 17 - A Bunch of Dead Ends
It was very funny. Thanks for all the research you have done the result is pretty terrifying hahaha! I hope that Alex will be quickly off.
Date: Nov 04, 2018 10:53 pm Title: Chapter 16 - Glad You’re Back, Sparky
so Gus wasn't fooled- Get your NaNo writing done so we can see the reunion- just saying
Date: Nov 04, 2018 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 14 - We’re Doing This!
I can't wait for the girls to get to their respective homes and then have their fathers figure it out- of course the B/J reunion is what I'm truly psyched for - but enjoying the ride nonetheless