so throughly enjoying this tale.  I have read several parent trap stories and enjoyed all of them- this is no exception-  l love all the sciency stuff - way over my head- social service is my field- but you have done a great job with the explanations. -  NoNoWriMo-  started 5 days ago so can't wait to read your next work- but please finish this one soon-  I'm loving it

Hi lady:

I finally have some big chunks of time to read and chose this story.  So enjoying your take and can't wait to see how you are going to get the "boys' together and of course, how the girls are going to figure it out.  Off to read some more

I'm not surprised that Gus figured it out.  Emmett was my guess.  I'm glad to see that Michael is still an asshat.

This was such an exciting chapter. I figured Gus was suspicious, but I didn't factor in quite all of the reasons you pointed out. Big error on Quinne's part to not inform Qianna on the ways she talks to her brother. I was confused about the way Gus was saying something about how Qianna should have ignored Michael regarding the comic book, and Qianna's apparent lack of thinking the drawings looked terrible and rudimentary. So I looked back and I found it in Chapter Two with Quinne saying,  And he and my Uncle Michael have been working on this comic book together for the past year or so that they want to try and get published. That says nothing for Gus' drawing ability and the fact that he's going to PIFA. It also tells me Michael hasn't got any vision or imagination to create, when it didn't center around Brian and Justin's life. And they've been doing this a year? Wow! Michael also made it sound like Quinne usually gave him input on the comic, so why would Gus find that strange? Or was it the length of time Qianna actually sat there?

Loved Ted's description... Trim, silver fox of a man. Teddy always was a good-looking man. I loved his almost slip on the tongue when he was going to compare Qianna to Justin. That's probably why Michael didn't want to say her hair looked good.

So, will Gus help his sister's out with their deception? Will he be able to fill in more about Brian and Justin's relationship? (maybe he should ask Lindsay about them.) Who else will notice? I'm thinking Emmett, with as much "girlfriend intimacy" they share. After all, if Carl noticed Qianna's less than exuberance demeanor, it would be amazing if Emmett didn't pick up something, too.

Looking forward to more of this, although I understand why you have time constraints right now. Meanwhile, I have to wonder how Quinne is faring with Yeti.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Ah great I hope Gus will help them understand their birth. It's odd that he does not remember Justin right? It's really a mystery all that. Super chapter and fantastic story.

I bet there are other things the twins didn't think about that may give them.

Gus will be too happy to have a new sister and will help them achieve their goal. I'm surprised he didn't react at Justin's name apart from his animator job; doesn't he remember Justin at all?

The girls will have to switch sooner when Hairy does something that requires more than one of them to put him in his place.  I think Em will notice a difference and be pulled in.  Still wonder what was the cause of the breakup. 

Wonderful chapter.  Really, really don't like Alex, but I think the girls will get rid of him.  At least I hope so.  Need to get Brian & Justin back together and the suspense is killing me on what broke them up.  Have fun with the NaNo !!!!

Hairy is definitely on the trash list! What a mean moron! I hope they will come back with a devilish plan to kick him out. Ligh laxative in his food, itching powder in his pants, buy new size of his clothes, shoes (up or down), look into his past, he must have some skeleton in the closet, find out what he hates and buy it for Justin, mess with his calendar and change some meetings, try to hit on him on social media and start a new romance that will break his couple with Justin, ...

Regarding their hair, they better buy dye to "simulate" their new color or it will be weird that their hair don't grow with their natural color.

The cat could be a problem.

Well done!!!

Brian did see something; I'm wondering if he will say it to someone.

Not drawing should be a red flag, the idea of an injury is great, but they better be super careful as a reflex could happen and crash their project.

Stay hydrated. Bring snacks to keep your energy level up. Wear comfortable shoes. Oh, and I’ also suggest bringing a book or something to help entertain yourself for when he gets lost in the shoe department ... Sounds like Brian is still Brian, maybe even a little worse.

“I had no idea your dad could eat that much. Actually, I didn’t know ANYONE could eat that much. How does he do it and not weigh, like, a thousand pounds    .....    Dad’s got amazing metabolic powers. Just don’t get between him and his dinner plate unless you want to lose a finger or two ... Sounds like Justin still has his voracious appetite, and twink physique.

Well, they're off! Is it wrong for me to be more concerned for Quinne, rather than Qianna? After all, it's Quinne who is going to have to deal with the 'other' fur beast. But who better to step up to the plate, than a Kinney?

Great story. Have fun with  yours and Sally's combined geniusness, as you write for NaNoWriMo.

XOXO ~ Cathy

I got bind on my reading, and realize you had two chapters written. So this me, just sayng what a marvelous job you did on the Award Ceremony Diversion. How you wrote all thise kids' antics, had me awed with their ingenuity. Pretty smart for some kids.

Well, I'm off to find out what Trevor's fate holds for him. How dare he pour water over Brian Kinney's Hair! He apparently didn't realize how vain Brian is. His Hair! Lord have mercy. It was hilarious, though!

XOXO ~ Cathy

Great update.  Love the twins and yes, I am ready for the Brian/Justin storyline to start up.  Happy Halloween.