Date: Oct 30, 2018 8:22 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
Omg I am still laughing with the scene with Brian and the girls laughing so much. I agree poor Trevor will need to go into witness protection 🤣🤣â¤ï¸â¤ï¸â¤ï¸
Date: Oct 30, 2018 2:03 am Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
Ha! Those kids are pretty clever, LOL!
I love the little hint at recognition when Justin heard just a little bit of Brian's voice. Can't wait to see what happens when the girls head home!
Ooh! Looking forward to the NaNoWriMo story too!
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2018 12:30 am Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
Wow. You managed that well. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
Date: Oct 29, 2018 8:17 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
This chapter was fantastic. I could just picture all the events and Brian when his precious hair got wet. So funny. I am so happy that you are writing with Sally as you two do an awesome job together and will wait patiently for updates on our delightful twins. I know you would never let a story go unfinished. Just the idea of a new story and rest of this one makes me happy. Great job.
Author's Response:
I'll do my best to juggle everything... (famous last words) Thanks for trusting in me. TAG
Date: Oct 29, 2018 8:03 pm Title: Chapter 13 - Q SQUAD!
Hilarious! Brian and his hair: nobody messes with that!
Author's Response:
I Know, right? OMG, I'm worried for Trevor's wellbeing. LOL! But it was the only thing that would have kept Brian from figuring out about the plan, so it had to be done. TAG
Date: Oct 23, 2018 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?
It's been fun spending the summer with the girls, but I'm ready for some Brian & Justin too!
Date: Oct 23, 2018 2:07 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?
As soon as I read, “I saw in a movie once where this boy pierced his by himself using a needle,” I figured I knew where the title of this chapter came from, only to discover it was due to the upcoming awards ceremony. My middle daughter had kind of a rebellious nature wen she was younger, and she showed it by self-piercing her belly button. Yeah, Qianna's gonna have a little discomfort for awhile.
As for Molly's name turning up on the "DNA Match" list, how is that possible? Is Molly maybe not Craig's daughter? Wouldn't that just chap old Craig Taylor's ass? And just how did Molly end up as such an entitled bitch, thinking she was better than Jennifer and Justin? I can't imagine how hurt Jen was from that. I hope the girls get responses back from Devin and Malina, maybe leading them to Lizette.
I'm sure the girls will find out a way to thwart the confrontation between Brian and Justin. Maybe one of the girls will have to deflect from camp early. Hmm... Quinne DOES have Brian's credit card.
Looking forward to more of the Junior Detectives.
XOXO ~ Cathy
[Report This]Date: Oct 22, 2018 8:02 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?
You had to throw an award ceremony didn't you. Surely when the awards are given out and their names are called, that's going to be the toughest obstacle. Unless they use alias like Pooh Bear?
Date: Oct 22, 2018 7:29 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?
That's sure is going to put a huge constraint on their plan.
I hope Justin will open his eyes and eventually talk to Alex and demand to be heard.
Date: Oct 22, 2018 6:46 pm Title: Chapter 12 - Who’s Stupid Idea Was This?
Wow, this is so wonderful. Just love your writing. It is getting to the good part where Brian & Justin get involved one way or another. Can't wait !!!
Date: Oct 16, 2018 8:32 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Our Twin Swap Plan
Reading how your Rube Goldman machine worked, brought to mind a scene in the Pee Wee Herman movie. He had one that made breakfast. (Hey! What can I say? I had 4 young children when that movie came out!) Anyway, one of my girls was kind of nerdy back then and kept talking about ways to make things to help with her "chores'. Wasn't aware that was what the machine was called.
Anyway, how you managed to think all that out is really impressive. I can see where your moniker "Geek" came from. You said your's wasn't as impressive, but I bet it was still pretty fabulous for a twelve year old.
Umm... Heart-stopping picture of one Brian Kinney! Man, that man can make me weak in the knees! I was really proud of Qianna's, Quinne moment. So the girls have three more weeks to perfect their switch, which they have already mastered pretty good. Has Brian noticed his $200 charge yet on his credit card bill for the DNA testing kits?
Looking forward to more testing of the Twin Swap. I can imagine the fun the girls could get into.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 16, 2018 2:41 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Our Twin Swap Plan
I love the geeky side: I didn't know this kind of machine; seems amazing; what a patience to build that!
The picture of Brian isn't very flattering, apart the smoldering look.
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2018 8:48 am Title: Chapter 11 - Our Twin Swap Plan
What a machine!!! I just love Team Q! Fantastic chapter. Can't wait until they swap. You are a real geek !!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 16, 2018 2:06 am Title: Chapter 11 - Our Twin Swap Plan
Wow that was some machine. Just goes to show they don't know everything about each other. Can't wait until they actually swap.
Date: Oct 15, 2018 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Our Twin Swap Plan
I just love Team Q! Their awesome!
And QiQi did so well with Brian. Hopefully Qianna will ask Chase out now that Quinne tested him lol Nice touch, having Quinne liking a hot chick, well for a twelve year old lol
Date: Oct 15, 2018 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Our Twin Swap Plan
Fantastic chapter. Wow you really have the geek stuff down. Your description of their project was awesome. Just love this story. Thank you for your creative genius.
Date: Oct 13, 2018 9:21 pm Title: Chapter 10 - A Brilliant Idea!
“Okay. Let’s do this!”
Can't Quinne just bleach/color her hair? I know my girls at that age went through different hair colors frequently. And the platform shoes are brilliant! Also, Step-Yeti better look out! Quinne isn't near as demure as Qianna.
I can't wait until the girls hear how the name 'Britin' was derived. I'm surprised Brian kept the name, seeming that they apparently split on a sour note.
Loved the reunion pics, and I absolutely LOVED the pic of 'Gus'. He could so be Brian Kinney's son!
Thanks so much for the update! looking forward to the next chapter.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Oct 13, 2018 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 10 - A Brilliant Idea!
Excellent the cursing lesson! They should discuss about food, which is major for Justin and weird for Brian and hobbies, preferences (films, music, ...).
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2018 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 10 - A Brilliant Idea!
So much to learn, but it seems to be taking so long. Hairy Alex must be stopped at all cost.
Date: Oct 13, 2018 9:23 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
I couldn't wait for this ggggreat story to be finished to start to read it but now I highly regret it. I really can't wait to know what happens next, this is soooo good. This swap idea is genius, I'm sure they'll fix their fathers messed up lives
Date: Oct 13, 2018 9:18 am Title: Chapter 10 - A Brilliant Idea!
Wow, this was wonderful. You planned the switch perfectly. Great writing.
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2018 7:38 am Title: Chapter 10 - A Brilliant Idea!
Oh yesss I love these girls !! I look forward to being at the end of the camp to find out how it will be and who will recognize their true identity.
Date: Oct 13, 2018 3:55 am Title: Chapter 10 - A Brilliant Idea!
It was definitely logical enough, I love these girls!!! Are they going to make their hair styles the same or are they already? Lol
Gus is definitely going to know Qianna isn't Quinne right?? This is going to be hysterical!
Date: Oct 11, 2018 2:07 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Time To Chase Chase?
Both fathers will have a huge surprise very soon and Emmett will be delighted.
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2018 1:48 am Title: Chapter 9 - Time To Chase Chase?
I'm glad the sisters made up. I do think that it would be fun for Chase to have both girls' attention at the same time. Make him feel special before bidding him adieu.