Date: Oct 04, 2018 8:25 pm Title: Chapter 6 - They More Than Knew Each Other
Wonderful chapter. I usually come to some conclusion about where a story is going, but you have me on this one. Why did they split, why the secrets??? Guess you will tell us when the time is right. Absolutely love this story and your amazing writing.
Date: Oct 04, 2018 8:19 pm Title: Chapter 6 - They More Than Knew Each Other
I see two main possibilities:
1-they had a major disagreement and they split up on their own; maybe because they couldn't live together; maybe one or both of them cheated; maybe Mickey did try to get Brian back; maybe they didn't agree on the way to bring their daughters up; maybe the surrogate thing brought up bad feelings between these two
2-Justin had to go to LA for work and the long distance relationship didn't work, once again
I can't wait to see how the girls are going to deal with their fathers. Emmett could help a lot about the past as he might have been a witness to all the nasty that happened.
[Report This]Date: Oct 03, 2018 8:34 am Title: Chapter 5 - Welcome to Biology 101
Go girls you have to find something to stop Justin from making a big mistake
Date: Oct 02, 2018 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Welcome to Biology 101
Wonderful, just wonderful. The pictures are so beautiful. Love how this story is moving along. Tag, you are a genius !!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 02, 2018 9:07 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Welcome to Biology 101
Darn to get so close. Now to convince Justin that something is not right about his misplacing his phone. Love Emmy
Date: Oct 02, 2018 9:05 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Welcome to Biology 101
I went to Colorado when I holidayed in the USA a couple of years back and it is a beautiful state. The girls need more information but will not be separated again
Date: Oct 02, 2018 9:04 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Welcome to Biology 101
I went to Colorado when I holidayed in the USA a couple of years back and it is a beautiful state. The girls need more information but will not be separated again
Date: Oct 02, 2018 8:51 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Welcome to Biology 101
Love love love Emmett's purple toes! And omg some of the things Em says to Quinne, does he NOT realize she's only 12?! lol
God! I hate Alex! Of course she took Justin's cell! Grrrrrrrrr he's gotta go!
Yes, get your google on ladies!
Date: Oct 02, 2018 8:46 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Welcome to Biology 101
Something is not right in sunny LA and I hope they will find out sooner than later.
Now that they have more clues, they should get information from Emmett and the best friend of many people, Google. Not sure they will find info about Lizette though.
You are right, the pictures can't give the feelings we have in front of such beauty and peaceful environment.
Date: Oct 02, 2018 3:18 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
Nice update! I think I'd have a ball on that hike... but I'd have to find some other way back down, LOL!
A few little hints about mystery mother...
Date: Oct 01, 2018 5:42 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
My only request is that you please find a way ro get rid of Sasquatch, Jr. QUICKLY! I want so badly to replace his shampoo with Nair and hot grits mixed with lye. The grits and lye worked to straighten Al Green's former stinking thinking right on up, just saying . Great story!
Happy writing and HUGS,
~Chelle
Date: Sep 30, 2018 12:06 pm Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
They're getting closer to finding their answers than they know. Brian let his hurt and regret slip which Quinne pickef up on. Going to be interesting to hear what Justin has to say about his friend Lizette Richards.
Brian so misses and loves his daughter. You can feel it. You did a great job getting that across.
Once Justin innocently fills in the missing puzzle pieces so to speak, Hairy Alex is going to have to work really hard on keeping his place in Justin's life. The girls are going to make hiz life a living hell and they're not even there. Ha, can't wait for that.
This camp to at sounds like a great place.
Date: Sep 30, 2018 8:06 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
Another great chapter. This is such a very good story. If Quinne has access to a computer, why aren't the girls googling their fathers? They're both successful, they should be able to learn something on the men. Especially Brian, what with owning Kinnetik. That would lead them to other search engines. The prom for one. Maybe some pictures. HEY! I wonder if Qianna is aware of the bashing!?
I DO NOT like Ugly, Hairy Alex. EEW! I bet he doesn't tell his FIANCE his daughter called. Justin should learn to take his phone in the bathroom with him. Still can't see why Justin would even give the guy a second glance. After having Brian, he's really lowered his standards. He should have a lot of men to pick from being he lives in California.
When they switch, who's the first to realize it? I'm thinking Gus, kids are usually more observant, but Aunti Em has a real connection to Quinne. So, I'm thinking it could be him, too.
Quinne gave Qianna some good advice regarding not settling on a just a pretty boy. That the mind is important, too. That's why Brian and Justin worked so well. It's still driving me nuts trying to come up with a reason why they split. Again, I can only think, 'Getting your needs met'. Hmm... unless it's due to the fact Lizette went back on the surrogacy agreement.
Thanks for the update, and I'm already wanting another chapter of these amazing girls.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Date: Sep 30, 2018 6:20 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
First clue and that's a big one! When will they use google?
Hairy man seems like a mean guy, but he should be careful.
[Report This]Date: Sep 30, 2018 4:26 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
I'm wondering if Hairy Alex will tell Justin that his daughter called? Brian almost gave things away but his daughter didn't catch the slip. I'm going to enjoy what happens when they try to wreck the wedding.
Author's Response:
A slimeball like Hairy Alex wouldn't do something nice like telling Justin his daughter called. I'm going to enjoy watching them ruin the wedding too! LOL. TAG
Date: Sep 30, 2018 3:54 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
Love these girls! Hmmmm an evasive Brian....weird. That Alex is an asshole! Lol The suragotte shouldn't be too hard to find for these two smarties, especially since they have her name.
Oh TAG, I don't see this in my google docs anymore. Are you no longer sharing?
Author's Response:
Yeah, the Brian thing . . . why won't he tell Quinne about his surrogate? That's really odd, huh? LOL. You're right though that these two smart girls will figure it all out. TAG
PS. not sure what happened with the online link. I'll repost it at the end of this chapter again Sorry about that.)
Date: Sep 30, 2018 3:35 am Title: Chapter 4 - She Was Just A Surrogate
This story is beyond wonderful. What a fantastic idea you had thinking of this. And Hairy Alex is really weird. Can't wait til he gets pushed off the Kinney Cliff or whatever you do with him.
Author's Response:
We DEFINITELY need to push Hairy Alex off a cliff. Great idea! LOL. Glad you're enjoying the story. TAG
Date: Sep 25, 2018 2:26 am Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult
I must admit, the mystery of how they got separated is really weighing on me. Alex sounds like an idiot... Please save Justin from him!
Author's Response:
Alex is a HUGE idiot (and mean too, which you'll see soon). Not to worry, though, the girls are on it and going to work hard to figure out a way to get rid of the slimeball. LOL. As for the mystery of what happened between the boys . . . I'm not telling yet. LOL. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2018 2:49 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult
Nice to see Auntie Em. I'm sure he'll be a big help when the girls decide to keep Alex from marrying Justin.
Author's Response:
I LOVE Auntie Em - I can definitely see Emmett as being the stand by babysitter for Brian in this story. He would totally bond with a little girl, don't you think? LOL. TAG
Date: Sep 24, 2018 2:45 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult
Emmett is hilarious!!! Justin seems to have found loser n°2 and Brian is lonely as hell. What about the best "friends" Lindsey and Michael? And Daphne? Couldn't she talk some sense to Justin?
Author's Response:
Justin is definitely hooked up with a total loser. I really hate the character I'm having him be engaged to - let's hope the girls come up with a plan to get rid of the idiot. Not sure how much of a role I will have Michael or Lindsey play in this story - they are kinda extraneous in this plot line. But Emmett WILL play a big part - watch this space. LOL. TAG
Date: Sep 24, 2018 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult
Oh, this is just wonderful. Love it, love it, love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I needed something a little more lighthearted myself. Enjoy! TAG
Date: Sep 24, 2018 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult
'Hairy all over Alex' ew ew ew! Can't wait til the girls get rid of him and we haven't even met him yet. lol
Loved Emmett being too Aunty Em to notice any difference in the girls to realize Qianna wasn't Quinne. I'm sure he will after he spends some time with her though, right?
Of course they're brilliant! Look who their fathers are!
Author's Response:
Wait till you see the pic of Hairy Alex - he's a total loser. Can't wait to find a good way to torture him! LOL. As for Em figuring out the difference between the girls . . . you'll have to keep reading for that one. The girls are pretty smart and pretty tricky too... TAG
Date: Sep 24, 2018 8:34 am Title: Chapter 3 - Why Are Parents Always So Difficult
And... the first inkling has been set into their subconscious. What the Hell is Justin thinking... "Hairy all over Alex? Uses all the hot water when he stays over Alex?” a yeti, a dope hipster dude... UGH! He must really be bitter over his and Brian's breakup.
Brian doesn't appear to be doing too well with an absentee daughter. Nice to know he gave up his stud status for raising his kids. And he's bitter about dating... Hmm... Why do I get the feeling that this is the reason for B/J's breakup? I know they had the weekly 'date night', but maybe that was supposed to change once the girls were born? (just speculating) The breakup just seems so unlikely the way the story started and Brian had begged Justin to come back from New York. The girls had to have been VERY young, so that their marriage couldn't have lasted that long... Two Years, maybe?
I liked that it was Qianna that got to talk to Emmett. She needed something he brought to her, after her talk to Justin. So, Qianna is also an artist... Interesting. Glad the girls won their first competion.
Not sure what you meant about, this story is not going to be the same as you think you know, so I want you to know I'm in for the long haul as I'm really liking it. I tried to think of how it could be different, yet get them to the same place, just can't come up with anything. It's certainly gonna be fun though.
Thanks for this latest chapter, and I'm looking forward for the next update.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
I personally detest Alex - he is as horrible as the girls think. You might be right that Justin is still reeling from losing Brian and therefore he's gone a little over the edge. We'll see. As for Brian, well, he's still TRYING to be the same old stud, but I don't think that's his real self. Again, we'll see. Off to write the more sciency parts so I can get you a little closer to solving the mystery of how the girls came about and how Brian and Justin broke up... Happy reading. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 24, 2018 5:00 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
I've always loved this story, and actually attended family summer camp at Bluff Lake, where the movie was filmed (they showed it every year). I love the story already, although it made my heart twist a little when I knew B/J would split up for some years. I'm a bit confused by the twins' look-a-like appearance but with hair the same as their respective fathers, but that will probably be explained later. <3
Author's Response:
That's so cool that you went to the same camp! I'm obviously deviating from that setting, but I hope MY camp will be just as fun to read about. And the mystery of the look-alike girls with different father will be explained as I go. Read on and enjoy! TAG
Date: Sep 24, 2018 2:18 am Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
Biology teacher here, waving back at you! ;-)
I'd love to have these two curious ladies in my class, LOL!
But I'm even more curious about why the boys separated!
Author's Response:
I'm so excited to start writing the more sciencey parts! Thanks for the suggestions. You're gonna have to hang in there, though, to find out what happened to the boys. I'm not giving away any spoilers. TAG