Date: Sep 24, 2018 2:07 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
Just what I needed on this dreary Sunday!
I mean I know how the Parent Trap story goes, but I'm a little sad this it started out with the boys just planning a family... I'm already upset wondering what happened. They seemed so happy in the car!
Interesting names for the girls. Any story behind them?
Author's Response:
My parent trap story will be a little different than the original - I never really liked the storyline that had the parents splitting up a pair of twins like that. So, I'm rewriting the plot my way. Hope you like this version just as well. As to why the boys split . . . well, all will be explained. I promise. TAG
Date: Sep 23, 2018 3:56 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
Bonjour il me semble que Predec2 a écrit le même type d’histoire en 2011 le titre était Parent Trap. Bonne journée
Author's Response:
I know that others have written the same type of story. I hope my version will be even better. Thanks for reading! TAG
Date: Sep 22, 2018 6:32 pm Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
Not sure how I missed this yesterday... but let's just say I'm so happy to see it! (I was kind of surfing for a new story, as I wasn't getting any updates to the gazillian WIP's I'm reading!)
So, Mikey is making another comic book. What ever happened to RAGE? And, Gus is wanting to follow in Justin's shoes? Does Gus remember Justin, and know about the two girls? Funny how Mel and Mikey's daughter turned out to be an entitled, vain brat... Yeah, can see that with no problem.
We know B/J aren't pining away for wach other due to other relationships? Do they hate each other? Was it due to one of them cheating? Why is Justin acting like a hermit? Boy, B/J better be ready to handle two irate daughters...
Thanks for an update, and looking forward to your next chapter...
XOXO ~ Cathy
BTW... The only 'Parent Trap' story I've read was Predec2's. Do you, or anbody else know if there are other's out-there?
Author's Response:
Unfortunately, I can't answer MOST of your questions here or I'd give away everything. Sorry. All I can say is that you'll find out the mystery of why the boys broke up as soon as the girls figure it out. *wink*. Thanks for adding MY WIP to your mix. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2018 7:28 am Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
Ah, a new story !! I do not know the movie but I think I read a story like that. I can not wait to see what the girls are going to do and why their fathers have separated. Google can be their friend to discover at least part of the story. I hope you feel better day after day. Hugs.
The girls are going to do some amazing things, I promise. And they are very good at figuring things out, so... They might just follow your advice about google too. Keep reading. TAG
Author's Response:
Date: Sep 22, 2018 7:05 am Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
Next step for them: Google both names and they should find lots of info, like Justin being from Pittsburgh, the prom, Babylon, ...
Great story, wonderful writing!
Author's Response:
Actually, the google thing is a pretty good idea. But I can't have them jumping that far ahead just yet. LOL. I'll make sure to credit you for the suggestion when I get there, though. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 22, 2018 3:57 am Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
There are a lot of simalarities. Now how to get their dad's to admit what happened and get them together.
Author's Response:
Wait till I get started on the science parts and you'll see just how many similiarities there really are! (I love the science stuff). Figuring out what happened to their dads will be harder, though. But I trust the girls are smart enough to do it. Emjoy! TAG
Date: Sep 22, 2018 1:30 am Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
Girls are too smart and inquisitive for their fathers.
Let the questions fly. Ha!
Author's Response:
Don't you just love smart, curious, tricky girls? LOL. They really are going to end up being a handful for their fathers. I can't wait! TAG
Date: Sep 22, 2018 1:25 am Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
Lol I love this story because the authors can make it as angst or romantic or amusing as they like and this looks like it’s going to be such fun
Author's Response:
Exactly! That's why I wanted to take a stab at it myself, despite the fact that others have already done it. I can't wait to write this plot line MY way. I'm hoping it will be fun and humorous though instead of angsty. I need something lighthearted for a change. Thanks for reading. TAG
Date: Sep 22, 2018 12:10 am Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
Absolutely love this story. I, too, loved the Parent Trap (watched both original and remake, still love the original the best). I can just imagine the adventures you have in mind for the girls. Can't wait to read them. Just a note to say that I still think of Time Blitz all the time and once in a while when there are no updates to read go back and read the beginning and ending chapters of it. It will always be one of my favorites if not my top favorite of all time.
Author's Response:
I loved the original Parent Trap too - watched it all the time as a kid and dreamt of having my own identical twin . . . There will definitely be adventures in my version. Thanks for reading. TAG
(PS - so glad you loved Time Blitz. *blushing*)
Date: Sep 21, 2018 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 2 - So It IS Possible
Their so cute!!! "Goodnight Sis" "I bet Google knows" Bahahaha Let the mystery continue.....
Author's Response:
We can't have them skipping ahead to the good stuff - so no googling till later! LOL. TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2018 5:18 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
Love love love! What did those boys do? Can't wait to get some backstory lol
Author's Response:
You know Brian and Justin - they just can't help themselves and get into so much trouble... Read on and you'll see. TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2018 3:40 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
What an amazing start! We can already guess that Brian and Justin messed up, but when and why did this happen? Can't wait to read more!!! Please give your muse some incentive.
I loved "Don’t tell me I’ve finally found a way to shut you up after all these years?"
Author's Response:
LOL - glad you found MY favorite line in the chapter too! TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2018 3:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
This should be fun.
Waiting for the back story as to why Justin and Quinna are across the country instead of being in Pittsburgh with Brian and Quinne.
Brian missed seeing his other daughter. How much of a hurry was he in?
Author's Response:
Maybe Brian doesn't know he HAS another daughter, so he wouldn't have immediately noticed her? *wink wink* Happy reading. TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2018 2:59 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
Oh this is wonderful. But, sad that our boys must have split up along the line. I know how well you write so it will get fixed at some point. Sorry that the summer wasn't good to you. Do the fun writing and when the time is right, you will return to your other amazing stories. You are a true writer and it shows in all your stories
Author's Response:
Thanks for bearing with me while my creative juices flow another way. I WILL get back to the other stories. I've never yet failed to finish a story. I just gotta write what I gotta write, though. Happy reading. TAG
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2018 1:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
As always you come up with the good stuff. All we need is the reason for the split. I hate when that happens, but it is necessary for the story. Why did you pick these names for the girls?
Author's Response:
Thank you! The reason for the split is part of the mystery, though, so you're going to have to keep reading to get that answer. And the girls names . . . well, let's just say Justin had something to do with that. Happy reading. TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2018 7:36 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
OH! So happy to see this new story. I am also one that loves the Parent Trap movies. As a little girl, when the one with Hayley Mills came out, I couldn't get enough of it. (I know, I'm old). When the one with Lindsay Lohan came out, I had 4 young teenagers that I got to enjoy the movie with. It would be kind of fun to see a remake of it again. But your story will more than make up for that. I'm assuming both Brian and Justin donated sperm, as I didn't see an MPREG tag. It will be interesting to see how the demise of their marriage came about, and how they decided on the separation of the girls. I assume Gus will be quite close to Quinne. However it goes, with your writing skills, I know it will be funny and entertaning.
You mentioned writing online and, 'The Britin Trap'. Could you explain all that? Not sure what you are talking about. Thanks for this new story. As much as I was enjoying/not enjoying 'Ugly Mirror', I know that has be a very hard write, as it's hard and painful to read. So, take your time, and I for one will enjoy your amazing take on this wonderful story. Enjoy writing. I look forward to your next installment.
XOXO ~ Cathy
Author's Response:
All your questions will be answered in the course of the story and, since I don't want to spoil anyone, I'm not going to give away anything here. As for the online writing thing - in case you or others want to follow along with me, I'm going to write this story 'live' online. That means that anyone who has the link can pop into the doc where I'm writing the story and watch as I write, add comments to the story, give me suggestions or correct typos you might find, or even chat with me if we're both online at the same times. I love the instant feedback as well as the company. So, please, feel free to click on the link and stop in anytime. TAG
Date: Sep 21, 2018 6:25 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
YAY a new story! Great first chapter. Can't wait to read more. Well done :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm finally feeling inspired to write, so you should have the next chapter soon! Happy reading! TAG