Date: Feb 10, 2019 11:45 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes
Wow poor Gus almost blew it 🤣 bring on the fun and games
[Report This]Date: Feb 10, 2019 9:45 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes
I look forward to knowing what you have imagined for "Team Brian" !! i love the chapter.
Date: Feb 10, 2019 8:06 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes
He could always throw a surprise wedding.
Author's Response:
Stop reading ahead in my brain! Lololol! TAG
Date: Feb 10, 2019 4:37 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes
Brian will make a public declaration in Babylon; after all, it was the place of their first public reunification. Maybe play the song from the prom and be ridiculously romantic so Justin can remember this one...
Date: Feb 10, 2019 4:20 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes
TAG:
Awesome chapter- I think I know what Brian is going to do and I hope Justin listens to his heart. I love this rewriting of the story. Can't wait for the big finale.
Date: Feb 10, 2019 1:24 am Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes
Wow, great chapter. Cure cat. Love the shirt. It is gorgeous and just perfect for Justin. Haven't figured out what Brian is planning, but not trying hard. I want to be surprised by what you have up your sleeve. I know it will be fantastic. Keep looking at the snow and keep writing. Maybe it is inspiring !!!! LOL
Date: Feb 09, 2019 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 28 -Whatever It Takes
Aggrrr I need more, please.
* hugs *
Author's Response:
LOL! So sorry. I'll get right on that. I've got most of the next chapter worked out in my head . . . Just have to get it on paper. TAG
Date: Jan 24, 2019 2:51 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?
Great update- I love how Jennifer took the girls for an overnight to allow Brian time to woo Justin can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: Jan 23, 2019 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?
So happy to see Grandma Jenn getting on board with "Team Kinney," LOL!
I also find it adorable how uncomfortable Justin seems with the prospect of his mother getting involved as if he knows that any time spent alone with Brian will only wear down his defenses. Brian's texts to the girls are hysterical!
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:35 pm Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?
With Jennifer on Brian's side, Justin is toasted! He won't be able to work through all the machinations that will come his way.
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:11 pm Title: Chapter 26 - The Assembled Crew
Maybe watching Barney would make Justin forget about the family ganging against him.
So happy that Brian stepped in and made a valid point, and when it wasn't enough, stormed out with his family.
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2019 9:14 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?
i love jennifer!! She and the kids are going to make a big team !!
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:27 am Title: Chapter 1 - You’re Fucking Good With Kids
I would be the first one who would want a brian/justin happily ever after. But now i'm kind of feeling sorry for justin. Sure they belong together but if feels like he should realise it on his own. Not will all these people scheming against him. I mean, he is already dealing with a psychological issue. Adding more to it just seems cruel.
Now,i hope there is something to be done about the yeti. If both of their name is on the doc then half of that house is justin. I just want him hurt really bad.
Can't say i'm surprised about lindsay and michael's reaction to justin coming back. Where was mel and ben during this? And blake is just a sweetheart.
Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:20 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?
Very happy to see this. I've been in a slump lately, and haven't read any updates in five days. So, this managed to catch my attention. I think the thing that peaked my curiosity, was the title of the chapter. Because that was my first thought - Justin's allergies, and I wanted to see how far Brian fell, when Justin had a sneezing, watery eyes reaction. I thought - that would go and undo any leeway he may have made. It will be interesing where you go with this. Is he making spaghetti? Let's hope he doesn't burn the garlic bread. Very touchy stuff to make.
And oh yes, Grandmother Taylor can be underhanded with the best of them. I'm sure she's got things up her sleeve that the girls could never even dream of. Thanks for posting, Tag.
HUGS ~Cathy
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2019 4:00 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?
Someone needs to call Emmett. I'm sure he could whip something up and disappear into the background.
Date: Jan 23, 2019 12:24 am Title: Chapter 27 - Would Flowers Be Too Much?
Wonderful chapter. Love Jenn and the girls working for Brian. I hope Justin knows he is outnumbered. Even Gus is joining in. Love, love, love this story. Could just see the expressions on Brian's face about the dinner and flowers, but he sure is trying.
Date: Jan 17, 2019 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 26 - The Assembled Crew
YAY ME!!! I WAS THE 200th REVIEWER!! I'VE NEVER HELD THAT TITLE BEFORE!!
Date: Jan 17, 2019 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 26 - The Assembled Crew
Well, what can I say? Did Lindsay and Michael surprise me? Not at all. Lindsay being her, 'You can't give up on your art dream - you have to be in New York' mantra, Michael, who's more worried about the lack of fame and money the comic would have generated, Nope - doesn't surprise me at all. Maybe that's not what Justin wanted in life. And why should he help make their dreams come true? But I think Lindsay went above what she should have. Who does she think she is, to have contacted Justin's agent? And Justin had the right to not want to produce another comic. I doubt they were under contract, stating they had to produce another issue. I am surprised that neither Mel or Ben spoke up to chastise their partners, though.
I think the offer from Blake was really sweet. He more than any of them, is probably fully aware of what dealing with that family can do to a person.
I'm a little confused on the graphic novel Gus and Michael are making. When Qianna had seen the work, she thought the artwork was mediocre at best, and the writing was awful. So, how is it that Justin could say, not bad? And have they actually had anything in print, yet? (I know - I'm probably focusing on the wrong thing here.) But it is something I've wondered about ever since Qianna described it.
Thank heavens for 'Rage' coming to the rescue. Brian might have some faults, but when it comes to Justin, he's not going to stand by while the rest put him down. And who better to speak out and get angry for their attitudes? If I was Justin, I wouldn't have wanted to subject myself to that family, either. Especially knowing how noisy and judgmental they are.
Good chapter. Really looking forward to how Brian and the girls go about getting Justin to change his mind and getting him to stay in Pittsburgh. OH - and we mustn't forget about getting Alex out of Justin's house.
HUGS ~Cathy
Date: Jan 17, 2019 3:29 am Title: Chapter 26 - The Assembled Crew
So Brian like to stand up for Justin and give the "family" a talking to regarding their self centerness. Love the Barney idea- my kids loved Barney- husband hated him- I can't wait till Jenn meets the other grandchild
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2019 9:16 am Title: Chapter 26 - The Assembled Crew
It's good that Brian is standing up for Justin. I do not know Barney but he seems to be useful !! Waiting for Jennifer's visit.
Date: Jan 16, 2019 2:31 am Title: Chapter 26 - The Assembled Crew
As usual wonderful chapter. Yeah, the Barney thing is great. My grandson was so afraid of Barney for some reason that all we had to say was Barney and he quieted down. Amazing how kids react to certain things. And, neither of my grandkids liked Teletubbies, but Dora and Kaloo (not sure of spelling) nearly drove me nuts. Justin will come around, we all know that Brian can charm him.
[Report This]Date: Jan 16, 2019 12:13 am Title: Chapter 26 - The Assembled Crew
So proud of Brian for standing up to everyone who wanted to pile complaints on Justin. Wonder if they end up watching Barney later
Author's Response:
*singing along* I love you. You love me. We're a happy fam-i-ly . . . LOL! TAG
Date: Jan 14, 2019 5:40 pm Title: Chapter 25 - What More Could They Do?
Yeah!!! Daphne is back! What an epic and rocky chapter!
I hope Lizette will be tracked down for extortion and held accountable for all the years the girls have been separated, as well as Brian and Justin. It's too easy to write that she was weak and followed her boyfriend's lead.
Emmett and Justin: so happy to "see" them together.
Date: Jan 14, 2019 5:27 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?
Finally, they talk and get some explanations about what happened. The kids are really sneaky.
So sad to read that Daphne is out of Justin's life.
Date: Jan 14, 2019 8:16 am Title: Chapter 25 - What More Could They Do?
This was a feel-good chapter. Even managed to make me a little choked up with the reunions with Emmett and Debbie. And speaking of Debbie, you were voice-on for her.I could picture her so clearly the way you decribed her and talked like her.
Lizette better not show up at Britin if she values her life. Because they will be all over her. couldn't they file extortion charges, if she tried to make ways?
HUGS ~Cathy