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Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2019 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 25 - What More Could They Do?

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So excellent. Bringing in Daphne and maybe Molly.  Hopefully Justin will come to his senses quickly.  I really love how everybody is conspiring to get them back together.  Thanks for the update.  

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2019 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 25 - What More Could They Do?

So nice to have the "gang" coming back together! I was tearing up at the Daphne reunion.

And yes, you did answer the "Q" name question I had... but I do have another. Who are the girls in the banner? Is it just stock photos, or am I supposed to recognize them? 

You also leave me very conflicted. When you post a Britin update, I want another from this story. When you post a Stylite update, I want another from that story. So yeah... I basically just WANT, LOL!



Author's Response:

Good question about the pictures I’ve used for the girls in the story. Yes, it’s just a stock photo. And actually it’s two different photos of one girl taken from different angles. The way the photos were taken though, it made the girl look different enough that I figured the photos would work for my ‘twins’. I changed the hair color on one of the photos for my own purposes. I thought the girl I selected looked enough like Justin that it would work for this story, and the second photo with dark hair added could be Brian’s daughter too, don’t you think? Glad you’re enjoying both stories! TAG

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2019 8:09 pm Title: Chapter 25 - What More Could They Do?

I can't wait to see what you have planned.  You always come up with the best reasons for why people do what they do.  Coming up with a good reason for Justin to stay in Pittsburgh should be a breeze.  Now I want to know how Emmett gets even with the Hairy Fairy.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2019 1:38 pm Title: Chapter 25 - What More Could They Do?

Fantastic.  I am with the girls, I would try anything to get our two favorite guys back together where they belong.  Glad that Daphne is back in the mix.  She can make Justin do just about anything!

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2019 10:37 am Title: Chapter 25 - What More Could They Do?

Go girls you have done a good job until now, you have to work on Justin. I like that they are all together. The dinner at Debbie's going to be fun.

Reviewer: coleamber Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2019 3:09 am Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?

Great.  Please update

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2019 4:21 am Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?

I had to sit here trying to quietly wipe my tears throughout most of this chapter. And I have to say, only people that have dealt directly with PTSD know the full extent of the severe damage it can do to a person and their loved ones.

All that said, this was an amazing chapter. You say it was emotionally draining, is to me an understatement. I think it was emotionally draining for readers, but to actual write it, I think it brings you to a new level. I can't imagine the mindset you must have to be in to verbalize it. Shows what a seasoned writer you are.

I think Brian will do everything in his power to do what's best for Justin. And if that means therapy to better undestand Justin and what he goes through, I can honestly see him putting himself out there for that.

Kudos goes to Quinne. You Go Girl. Tell that bitch off!!!

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2019 3:34 am Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?

I loved the chapter-  I think Brian would offer to go with Justin to therapy-  maybe that would show him that he is serious and they would be able to work on things togheter.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2019 2:02 pm Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?

I'm hoping that along with telling Lizette off, they give Hairy Alex a few things to worry about.  Surely there is something that they can do to him.  At least Brian and Justin are talking but it might help if they both talked to a professional.  Now we have to find out how Jennifer takes it.  She's sure to have ideas for taking Hairy down.

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2019 10:29 am Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?

Thank you for the update. Wonderful chapter and we have answers. I'm really sorry for Daphne who had to deal with Justin's destructive behavior. I hope mothers and children will help bring them together.

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2019 9:09 am Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?

It was great to find out what caused the breakdown 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2019 3:37 am Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?

Hooray for an update!

But, oh... poor Justin. And in all of the awfulness he just unloaded to Brian, one thing that made me even sadder - that he hasn't kept in touch with Daphne. I hope you can bring a reconciliation for those two as well. Knowing that Daphne had been living under the "blackmail" of Justin hurting himself if she had gone to Brian is painful to think about.

Ha! I love Brian's reaction to the thought of facing both mothers, LOL!

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 07, 2019 3:01 am Title: Chapter 24 - Why did you leave?

This chapter was wonderful and answered so many questions. Know that your amazing writing will fix the boys up and we will get our happy ending.   And, welcome back.  Hope the holidays were good to you.  Hard to believe they are now just memories. 

Reviewer: BritinManor Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 21, 2018 6:00 am Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

So the plotting begins. I gotta wonder how close you will follow the original story. There's the lamppost to begin with. They just need to get Emmett talking about how they met and some of their past escapades. King of Babylon has memories, too, I know "Save The Last Dance" does too, but not sure if that will bring memories of the fateful prom or the happiness of it. Or maybe, surprise them with a 'get-away' trip to Vermont. Gotta wonder how sneaky they will be. But it was a good thing Gus had the winning argument, otherwise Justin just might have stayed in California.  One thing I'm really curious about, is how was Hairy able to kick them out? His name is only ON the title, he's not soul owner. So that really doesn't make sense to me. I'm sure if Justin called the police in and they heard how Alex spoke about the girls and the names he called them, the police would have escorted Alex from the house.

Looking forward to their arrival to Britin. Hopefully EVERYBODY leaves them the hell alone, and not come bombarding in to see Justin. I have a feeling Michael is going to be VERY unhappy to see Justin back in Brian's life and home.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 17, 2018 9:12 am Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

It's good that Justin returns to Pittsburgh, but there is more to his departure, no? The kids will help bring them together for good and get rid of Alex

Reviewer: sfscarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

I just love this story so much.  I know you have to have time to write it and as a writer I can't imagine the time it takes to write this.  I love how you got Justin to go back so hopefully the kids ideas will work.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:39 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

I'm hoping for the best.  But I can see a lot of stories about good times and one about the real reason Justin left.  I want to see justice done with Justin's house, the yeti should not be allowed to get away with what he's done and I don't think the girls would mind telling all his online friends about it.

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:25 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

Fantastic chapter.  I know you have some good ideas in mind and can't wait to see where you take them. 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2018 9:24 pm Title: Chapter 23 - How It Could Still Be

Yeah, so happy to see a new chapter!

Justin is pretty upset and can't be "Sunshined" easily. At least, Brian explained what happened and said he was sorry; that's a big step. Justin took care of him and that's another step.

If they actually all go back to Pittsburgh, they will have plenty of time together as Justin will be off and Brian can work from home.

I hope Justin will fight the yeti as soon as possible.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 5:48 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three

Great imagery right off the bat... The first tinges of gold were just peeking over the eastern horizon when the three weary travellers drove their rental car up to Justin’s front door the next morning. And boy was Brian one impatient weary traveller.

The first initial contact between Gus and Justin had the tears leaking out of the corner of my eyes, but they were good tears.

Brian was hilarious. First that reference to the brownies, (which might have been the reason Justin came out of his stupor), then the arrival of the 'bear', and the hair-in-the-teeth, and the if-the-pelt fits, comments, had me cracking up. (I'm getting better trying to hide my chuckling, while others are watching TV.)

Okay, so I think Justin was a little bit out-of-line with the diatribe about Qianna going off to Pittsburgh with Brian, and his subsequent threat of punishment. Criminy, the girls had pictures and newspaper articles of Brian and Justin as a couple, including their non-legal marriage. I don't think she was putting herself in harms way. Anyway, when Hairy stuck his nose into the mix, and spouted shit to Quinne, I could picture Brian grabbing him around the neck, and telling him to shut the fuck up. But, it caught Justin's attention, instead. But the situation that ensued, left me breathless from laughter. You Go Brian!!!!  Tell that sack of shit to lay off your daughter! I have to wonder if Brian will get a black eye out of the mix.

But then I got to the ending, and couldn't sing, 'So long, Farewell", because Justin so stupidly put Alex on the title for his home. WOW! I'm not versed on how the law works, but there must be something that can be done, especially if it's only been a week, and Alex has not contributed to the household. And just HOW can he kick Justin and Qianna out of their own home, and any company they might have in their home? I think if anyone should have the cops called on them, it should be on Hairy.

Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. It was like the crest to everything that was leading up to. I can only imagine what else your mind will come up with, to torture us with. One thing I think we can all agree on, is that there will be no wedding, so the girls did accomplish what they set out to, by switching places.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 11, 2018 3:52 am Title: Chapter 21 - Mission to Rescue Sunshine

Here's me lagging behind, again. 

Way to go, Stud. Go get your man. So, we learned that Lizette was a manipulative bitch. Sold both babies separately, after already being paid the surrogate fee. Hmm... But Brian telling Justin to leave, I don't know if I can condone that. I know in the heat of an argument, mean things can be said, but with Justin already feeling quilty, I'm sure that was the cincher. And Justin having a boyfriend, or not, after Brian found out where he was, he should have been on the next flight out, with Quinne in hand. What better way, than with a baby, to win his Sunshune back?

Big question... Was Lizette coaxed by Michael or Lindsay to pull this stunt? You know, if I can't have you, then nobody will have you?

It will be interesting to see how this plays out, but after everything we learned in this chapter, I don't think Justin will be very welcoming to Brian.

Hugs ~ Cathy

 

Reviewer: marie-france Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 10:09 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three

The reunion of Gus and Justin was touching maybe all the children will help Brian and Justin to get together, in any case they will do everything. The Yeti can leave they are 5 against him no? They can all go back to the Pitts! Great chapter!

Reviewer: bksbracelet Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 9:20 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three

Wow lots of fun and good job yeti showing your real colours 

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 3:23 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three

How could Justin be so stupid.  At least it's a good reason to move back to Pittsburgh.



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*Ding, ding, ding* 😉 TAG

Reviewer: wellreadbunny Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 10, 2018 2:34 am Title: Chapter 22 - World War Three

Finally got rid of the Yeti. I can't believe Justin is being such adick to his daughter. She wasn't with strangers she was with her sister and other dad. Get s grip.

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