Reviewer: Lorna Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 30, 2018 8:03 am Title: Chapter 1

Story starts off well but you leave us hanging need more please !

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 25, 2018 5:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

How interesting that Emmett deliberately messed with Lindsay and Michael.  Now just what do those two have planned.

Reviewer: sophiesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Michael and Lindsay are the stupidest friends Brian could ever have. No great loss in losing them. I'm glad Deb finally sees what an ass her son is. Her imature, needy, childlike son.

Since Justin is already an established artist, something Lindsay will never be, however will she be able to separate him and Brian? What game is she going play? Not only can he out paint her he can out WASP her.

What is Ben's take on all this? 

Dr. Dave, now that he's found Brian and ready to share his overheard info, what's he going to want from Brian? 

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 8:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

In 'Consequences - Surprises', you stated,  The flamboyant man agreed to go with him and Daphne... but there was no Daphne present. Anyway, loved the diner scene... Justin sure let them have the heave-ho.

Yep, I think Lindsay will do her best to convince all that she's sincere of her like of Justin because of who he is, although it won't stop her from bad-mouthing behind his back.

Michael, I doubt he will go that far, regardless of his promise to Brian. And what a thing to say in the diner. He's going to be ostracized from the Avenue while people think he's schizophrenic. I hope he's kicked out of Ben's soon, and his money is cut off.

Brian's way of getting them to say they wouldn't give Justin shit was really funny. Glad he finally saw them for who they truly are.

And David Cameron, Bless My Heart. Never really liked the man... but you have made me like him in this story so much. I really hope he has no ulterior motive, But I don't believe he does. I wondered what the plan was that he heard in the cafe that day, as we only heard a snippet of that conversation.

Looking so forward for your next installment in this gripping story. Thank you for giving us a new chapter today.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 5:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

LOL! LOVED Lindsay's surprise and stunned silence at realizing just who Brian's husband really is! I have no doubt that knowledge is what her fake ass, tearful scene in Brian's office was really about. Left behind much, Lindsay? LOL

As for Michael: WOW! What a jealous IDIOT, but Justin's response was everything! Just the inbred class and elegance Justin displayed was worlds apart from the verbal temper tantrum Michael threw. As per usual, Michael needs a muzzle AND a remedial course in manners, but what else would one expect from a perpetual child?

I'm so looking forward to David letting everyone know about what Ms. Plans and Mr. Peanuthead are up to. I would imagine that David has a whole new face being the reason he's unrecognizable? My heart still goes out to him from the backstory you gave us in the installment "Consequences: Past, Present, and Future". It's going to be interesting to see how everyone else responds to what he has to say.

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle 

Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2018 4:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

Michael and Lindsay don't ever want Brian to grow because they knew if he really saw them for who they are he would drop them quickly and what would they do with his support and money?

Brian is no longer playing dumb to their machinations he sees them for the ugly, selfish, mean spirited people they always have been, with Justin, The Taylors and everyone else on their side he can move on.

Well after they put a stop to Michael and Lindsay's evil plan and make them suffer.

Michael and Lindsay are going to wish they had just accepted Justin cause they are about to lose everything.

David was smart to come to Deb to find Brian perhaps Brian and Justin can help him get his life back on track so he can better take care of Hank?

Lindsay know who Justin is and she still thinks she can win with Michael by her side?

AMATEUR!!!!!!!!