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Reviewer: BlueMyst Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 7

Not surprised Lindsay would use private information to score points with her family too bad it cost her the Trust and Friendship of Brian and the respect of her wife.

And she risked Gus's safety to gloat about something they all swore to keep private.

Running to assure Brian that it wasn't her won't repair what she Intentionally Broke.

Emmett and Brian were too nice to keep Michael around if he pulled that Crap on me he would've been Gone!!

Emmett is the kind of Friend Michael could never be because Michael wants Fame, but he wants it for being associated with someone Famous, he enjoys the glory of being seen with Brian and he will use that glory to destroy anyone who gets in his way.

Them all getting in front and narrating the story gets the truth out while the gossip rags can go scurrying in the dark for dirt.

Corey is smart enough to see that they need to flush out the stalker to protect Gus and themselves for what this person might due next.

Is it more than one?

Is Michael in some way behind this while trying to stay in the shadows?

He wants to know everything Brian Kinney why not hire someone unstable and cheap?

 

 

Reviewer: The SNO Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 4:37 pm Title: Chapter 7

I bet Lindsay was hurt when she had to sign an NDA while Mel didn't. She didn't think what it could do to Gus.

They are right: shoot first and surprise the readers; that way, they manage the out of their truth and won't have to deal with gossips and they could get a major clue.

Reviewer: YumYumPM Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 1:26 pm Title: Chapter 7

Just when you think you know where this story is going it takes a twist and you leave us wanting to know more.

Reviewer: bjluv Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

Interesting how Mel, Ted and Brian had Lindsay sign an NDA. No wonder she was so quick to reassure Brian that she had nothing to do with the leak. Would she lose her rights to Gus if she did leak something? I wonder how Lindsay felt knowing she ruined her relationship and confidence Brian always had with her? Maybe Lynette was keeping tabs on Brian after discovering who Gus' father was, wanting to discredit him at any given any opportunity, and by doing this, she could one-up her sister. But the main question is, Why A Year Later? 

I don't really believe it is a stalker anymore. Because wouldn't a stalker want revenge on the spouse, and not want to broadcast they were off the market? It's funny to think that Mel would want another child with Lindsay, knowing she's the type of person who wants to garner attention for herself, and not above using Gus to get it. Somewhat the same type of person Michael is.

Michael is really a slimy little weasel. How Brian and Emmett kept him on for four years after the shit he was pulling with Brian and Emmett; invading their rooms with fans. And after Michael trashed Emmett's room, I would think it would have been a given that he was fired. You mentioned "the first time" in regards to Ted firing Michael. How many other times were there, before he finally followed through, using the NDA as the reason to fire Michael?

I can hardly wait to see what all the reporter has to say about who their contact person was, and find out why they did it. I like the idea of them being in New York to confront the reporter and give their stories. As I said in an earlier review, giving the press the story will throw a wrench into Michael's plans. It will probably have the same effect of the person who leaked the information in the first place.

I'm still wondering about Gus saying, "He didn't say it to me." Who else is involved in this?

Nice to know Brian has a magical dick. But that has always been a given, has it not?

Loved this update, as it gave us a little more information. Would the detective happen to be Carl?

XOXO ~ Cathy

Reviewer: BritinForever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 11:03 am Title: Chapter 7

This story is moving right along.  I'm trying to figure out who leaked the marriage. 

Love this story.

Reviewer: loriblair Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 9:46 am Title: Chapter 7

<3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: mamab Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 9:01 am Title: Chapter 7

Great update.  Wonderful writing.  Love how this storyline is so different from so many others.  Your writing is fantastic.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2018 7:10 am Title: Chapter 7

Very informative chapter! I absolutely LOVED the backstory given about Lindsay and her penchant to just need to have one-up on her sister. I also loved the fact that Mel and Brian weren't blind to her supposed tears of regret, which I'm sure she tried to use to gain sympathy for her blatant attempt at glory-hogging. The truth is that she is basically Whiny Wonder's estrogen-laden alter egoI would say that Lindsay needs a psychotherapist and a priest to exorcise her Michaelness, but the truth is she would probably even drive them crazy with her need to justify her wrongdoings. They would probably have to take a Xanax just seeing her name on their schedule for the day. 

I absolutely adore Brian's reasoning for distancing himself from Whiny Wonder, and Emmett's reponse to it. They have such an honest, and pure friendship that it's hard not to be moved by it. I agree with Drew's course of action. He's applying football strategy and logic to combat Whiny Wonder's intended maliciousness. The best offense is to have a strong defense, after all. And bringing their relationship out into the open will chap Whiny Wonder's nonexistent ass so much that not even Vaseline will help calm the sting! Hey Michael, can you and Lindsay spell OBSCURITY?! Poor, poor attention-seeking moronic idiots! Not even having 5 seconds of fame to be considered relevant has gotta hurt!

I think I'm going to like Corey. He's looking at this from every possible angle, even the one where this stalker isn't going about his plans to cause problems in a textbook fashion. I absolutely agreed with him when he said that the stalker being the possible leak would have him thinking it would cause all sorts of issues for Brian and Justin, resulting in them breaking up to keep their privacy. I also believe that Corey's correct in saying that coming out with their story is going to cause the person to unravel. Brian and Justin are endgame material, so yes, it's likely that the stalker will throw a major tantrum when thwarted. Futhermore, it seems this person has a warped sense of their own cleverness, which if truth be told he is just a lowlife to go after information from an unsuspecting five year old. However, I don't think the stalker was counting on just how observant Gus was in hearing the last comment he uttered about how his angel made a mistake. I think involving the detective at this juncture, while seeming a bit premature, is actually the right thing to do. Who knows what else Gus might remember from the encounter...and when.

WOW! StarBaby, you've given me a lot to analyze with this one. Great Job!

HAPPY WRITING and HUGS,

~Nichelle

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